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Reviewer: Brett Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/10/2009 - 04:25 am Title: Chapter 5

Oh this is wonderful. They are both having such a good time ;).

Now to the bedroom they go!

Author's Response: lol Thanks, Brett! :D I'm glad you enjoyed! Unfortunately, that's the end of the smutfest. Wish I hadn't been so tuckered out by writing it, or I would've done another 20 pages :P

Thanks for reviewing, sweetie! *Smoochies*

Reviewer: Kiera Thornton Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/10/2009 - 02:25 am Title: Chapter 5

By the way... I want my own William. A pocket-sized one preferably. Don't we all wish we had a man that could make us come over, and over, and over, and over... *trails off* You also got me hooked on the kink. I hope they delve more into the kinky side of sex and do some "exploring" ;P tee hee

Author's Response: hehehe Oh yes, it t'would be fantastic to have our very own love machine William. I'd prefer an actual size one tho -- maybe pocket-size William can grow and expand if you get him wet? :P

I hope you won't be disappointed that the next chapter skips ahead to the next morning *hides* I'll try to do some kinky stuff in my next story, just for you :D lol

Reviewer: Kiera Thornton Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/10/2009 - 02:23 am Title: Chapter 5

Holy shit... O.O I was sitting here reading with my jaw nearly touching the desktop. *drool* This was AMAZINGLY yummy. I definitely stand by my eariler opinion: you need to be a porno writer. lmfao I think my favorite line in this chapter was "You fuck that pussy! FUCK IT!" Mhmmm. Loved it! I'll be keeping a close watch for updates. I would've read and reviewed right after you posted, but I just moved across the country and didn't have any internet access for almost a week. Looking forward to the next bit of smut! :)

Author's Response: hahaha Thanks, Kiera! :D *packs my bags for Californy, to seek my fortune in porno writing* I always like having a few really raunchy lines like the one you quoted lol It's great that you dig that kind of raunchiness too! :D It's not just me lol

I appreciate you reviewing so much, especially considering your recent big move! Thanks, sweets! *Hugs & Smoochies*


Author's Response: hahaha Thanks, Kiera! :D *packs my bags for Californy, to seek my fortune in porno writing* I always like having a few really raunchy lines like the one you quoted lol It's great that you dig that kind of raunchiness too! :D It's not just me lol

I appreciate you reviewing so much, especially considering your recent big move! Thanks, sweets! *Hugs & Smoochies*


Author's Response: hahaha Thanks, Kiera! :D *packs my bags for Californy, to seek my fortune in porno writing* I always like having a few really raunchy lines like the one you quoted lol It's great that you dig that kind of raunchiness too! :D It's not just me lol

I appreciate you reviewing so much, especially considering your recent big move! Thanks, sweets! *Hugs & Smoochies*

Reviewer: Edgehead Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2009 - 01:25 pm Title: Chapter 5

OMG...are you crazy?
Now I need an extreme cold shower...how do you do that? Everytime I read something of you I need a cold shower!!!!
:P
I can't wait for more, sweetie... *smooch*

Author's Response: LOL That's a great compliment, thanks Mel! :D What can I say? It's a gift heehee It was lots of fun to write the velvet divan smut :P

Next chapter is with my beta, and should be coming soon *crosses fingers* Thanks for reading and reviewing, babe! *Snogs*

Reviewer: hhh569 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2009 - 05:49 am Title: Chapter 5

oh wow that was intense. I am happy for William. He needs to be with someone that builds him up instead. Cecily must be cheating on William because she hardly ever has sex with him. Buffy needs to tell William that she loves him.

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed :) It is great for William that he's seeing how it's *supposed* to be between two people. Cecily is just no damn good lol

The morning after is up next. Buffy will have her chance to speak from the heart. Or will she...? :P

Thanks for the review, hon! *smooch*

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2009 - 05:45 am Title: Chapter 5

They have more energy than two normal people should. Hotter than anything. Fabulous.

Author's Response: They are just burstin' with energy (among other things :P ) heehee Glad you liked it, BuffyRat! And thanks for reviewing *Hugggs*

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2009 - 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 5

William and Buffy are a perfect match on every level! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: heehee I think they make a great couple too. Let's hope that William realizes that, and doesn't just get an attack of the guilties for cheating...

Thanks for reviewing, hon! *Smooches*

Reviewer: spikeluv84 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2009 - 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 5

woo!! thank Jebus i got my popcorn ready for this chapter!!! this was awesome! and not just cuz of the sex...okay 95% was because of the hot lovin', but the other 5% was cuz i'm just so glad he's finally happy! u know, i hope Zoccola (that is now her new official name!) has cameras around and catches this. screw the alamony, i just hope she gets pissed off that he's happy! i hope her head pops off! and then it flies around the room like a balloon! that's so sweet to picture! can't wait for the next update! :)

Monica

Author's Response: hahaha You got me picturing Zoccola's balloon head whizzing around the room too :D

Glad you enjoyed the smuttage heehee Buffy and William had been wanting (at least on a subconscious level) to do that since they met, was a long time comin' :P

Thanks for reading & reviewin, babe! *hugs & spins*

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2009 - 09:45 pm Title: Chapter 5

OMG you did it again you have me complety hooked. That was hot and so fantastic i can't get enough of this story.

Author's Response: Aww thank you, Jenn! *hugs* I'm happy that you enjoyed it :D There's 8 chapters in all, I hope you'll like the way things turn out :)

Thanks for reviewing, sweets! *hugggs*

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2009 - 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 5

I'd thought I couldn't trust my eyes when I saw another chapter. Thanks for the quick update. :)
Hot Smut again. Thank god Cecily missed all the fun, not wanting William. Who knows if she wouldn't trey to keep him. :)
But I fear she'll try to fight him leaving her anyway.

Author's Response: :D I'm glad I was able to post part 2 of the naughty so quickly. I couldn't leave the smut lovers hangin lol

That would be funny, wouldn't it? If Cecily decided she'd like to take wildman William for a spin? There's going to be consequences to what Buffy and William did. 'The talk' will be coming in the next chapter.

Thanks for the review, hon! *smooches*

Reviewer: claire Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2009 - 07:02 pm Title: Chapter 5

Wow, this was really hot! I'm so glad William and Buffy finally got it on. Buffy seems to be pretty experienced; are we going to find out why? (how? who?) And I can't wait for William to confess that he's only slept with Cecily before. I'm looking forward to more smut, but also to the inevitable conversation!

Author's Response: =) Glad you liked! Yep, they finally did the deed! Buffy's carnal knowledge won't be discussed lol She's had a few lovers, likes to watch her some porny goodness, and is a quick learner (when it comes to physical things) lol

The next chapter will start the morning after their night together. Sorry that the smut-a-thon had to end, but I was worn out too heehee Buffy and William will have a few important things to talk about, that's for sure ;)

Thanks for reading and reviewing, claire! I love yummy reviews *gobbles*

Reviewer: xaphania Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2009 - 06:47 pm Title: Chapter 5

You are truly the Queen of Smut :D Wow, that was hot.

Wish your tongue was detachable, I'd take it with me everywhere.

LMAO!

Loved the chapter :D

Author's Response: >:D Aww thank you, xaph! So glad you liked! heehee I was fond of that line too :P

Thanks for reviewing, sweetiepie! *huggggs*

Reviewer: xoChantelly Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2009 - 02:39 pm Title: Chapter 5

HOLY EFF THAT WAS HAWT!!

And more to come?! Jeez, William is a robot! Though, it's understandable with all the half-way-in frigid sex he was gettg from cow-bich Cecily.. heehee.

I'm glad Buffy is (finally) showing him a good time!

PB you do wear the smut hat well!! *slides it over for more wonderfully awesome Spuffy smut to come!*

*hugs and kisses*

Author's Response: Thanks, Chan! =D That would be an unexpected plot twist - William is really a bot lol Lmao at "with all the half-way-in frigid sex" hehe Good thing I wasn't drinking anything when I read that :P

The next chapter skips ahead to the next morning, so any smut that happened during the night will have to be in the minds of the reader lol I was plumb tuckered out after their romp on the divan! heehee

*Adjusts smut crown* Why, thank you, dear! :D And thanks, as always, for your great review! *Hugs & smooches*

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2009 - 02:17 pm Title: Chapter 5

All Hail the Goddess of Spuffy Smut!!! And this was some hot smut...you were in fine form, milady. LOVED this chapter, cause I love this William so much, he's so sweet and unsure of himself but goes for it.And it's amazing. I was LOL at some parts--> Cecily's icy va-jay-jay I also love porn! Buffy. heehee .
William it's time to call a divorce lawyer so you can spend the rest of your life fucking B's brains out.

Loved it PB, can't wait for the next chappie. *mwuah*

Author's Response: hehehe AWW thanks, AMI! You are such a puppy :D {That means a sweetie in Jance from 'Friends' speak lol}

I'm glad you loved it, hon :) Does my smutty heart good to know I've brought smiles to my readers' faces heehee

The next chapter will take place the following day, and them having 'the talk', so those burning questions will be answered soon ;)

Thanks so much for the sweet review! *Hugs & Squishes*

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2009 - 01:01 pm Title: Chapter 5

Wiliam and Buffy seem to be enjoying themselves..

I enjoyed it also.. LOL



Author's Response: hehehe Yep, William and Buffy are having a grand ole time :P Glad you enjoyed it too :D

Thanks for reading & reviewing, Pam! *smoochies*

Reviewer: Spikes_slayer08 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2009 - 12:42 pm Title: Chapter 5

Wow I love this so far very hot more soon please

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, hon! I'm happy you're digging it :D Only a few more chapters to go!

*hugs & smooches*

Reviewer: CallMeKitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2009 - 12:40 pm Title: Chapter 5

HOT DAMN YOU SMUT WRITING GENIUS! THAT WAS BRILLIANT! *drops to knees and bows at your feet* that was amazing! I cant wait for more!

Author's Response: Awww! hehehehe *blushes* Oh, go on with yo sweet self! :P Thanks, sweetiepie! Glad you enjoyed, I aims to please :D *Smoochies*

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