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Reviewer: Kiera Thornton Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/10/2009 - 02:25 am Title: Chapter 5

By the way... I want my own William. A pocket-sized one preferably. Don't we all wish we had a man that could make us come over, and over, and over, and over... *trails off* You also got me hooked on the kink. I hope they delve more into the kinky side of sex and do some "exploring" ;P tee hee

Author's Response: hehehe Oh yes, it t'would be fantastic to have our very own love machine William. I'd prefer an actual size one tho -- maybe pocket-size William can grow and expand if you get him wet? :P

I hope you won't be disappointed that the next chapter skips ahead to the next morning *hides* I'll try to do some kinky stuff in my next story, just for you :D lol

Reviewer: Kiera Thornton Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/10/2009 - 02:23 am Title: Chapter 5

Holy shit... O.O I was sitting here reading with my jaw nearly touching the desktop. *drool* This was AMAZINGLY yummy. I definitely stand by my eariler opinion: you need to be a porno writer. lmfao I think my favorite line in this chapter was "You fuck that pussy! FUCK IT!" Mhmmm. Loved it! I'll be keeping a close watch for updates. I would've read and reviewed right after you posted, but I just moved across the country and didn't have any internet access for almost a week. Looking forward to the next bit of smut! :)

Author's Response: hahaha Thanks, Kiera! :D *packs my bags for Californy, to seek my fortune in porno writing* I always like having a few really raunchy lines like the one you quoted lol It's great that you dig that kind of raunchiness too! :D It's not just me lol

I appreciate you reviewing so much, especially considering your recent big move! Thanks, sweets! *Hugs & Smoochies*

Author's Response: hahaha Thanks, Kiera! :D *packs my bags for Californy, to seek my fortune in porno writing* I always like having a few really raunchy lines like the one you quoted lol It's great that you dig that kind of raunchiness too! :D It's not just me lol

I appreciate you reviewing so much, especially considering your recent big move! Thanks, sweets! *Hugs & Smoochies*

Author's Response: hahaha Thanks, Kiera! :D *packs my bags for Californy, to seek my fortune in porno writing* I always like having a few really raunchy lines like the one you quoted lol It's great that you dig that kind of raunchiness too! :D It's not just me lol

I appreciate you reviewing so much, especially considering your recent big move! Thanks, sweets! *Hugs & Smoochies*

Reviewer: Edgehead Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2009 - 01:25 pm Title: Chapter 5

OMG...are you crazy?
Now I need an extreme cold shower...how do you do that? Everytime I read something of you I need a cold shower!!!!
:P
I can't wait for more, sweetie... *smooch*

Author's Response: LOL That's a great compliment, thanks Mel! :D What can I say? It's a gift heehee It was lots of fun to write the velvet divan smut :P

Next chapter is with my beta, and should be coming soon *crosses fingers* Thanks for reading and reviewing, babe! *Snogs*

Reviewer: hhh569 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2009 - 05:49 am Title: Chapter 5

oh wow that was intense. I am happy for William. He needs to be with someone that builds him up instead. Cecily must be cheating on William because she hardly ever has sex with him. Buffy needs to tell William that she loves him.

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed :) It is great for William that he's seeing how it's *supposed* to be between two people. Cecily is just no damn good lol

The morning after is up next. Buffy will have her chance to speak from the heart. Or will she...? :P

Thanks for the review, hon! *smooch*

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2009 - 05:45 am Title: Chapter 5

They have more energy than two normal people should. Hotter than anything. Fabulous.

Author's Response: They are just burstin' with energy (among other things :P ) heehee Glad you liked it, BuffyRat! And thanks for reviewing *Hugggs*

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2009 - 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 5

William and Buffy are a perfect match on every level! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: heehee I think they make a great couple too. Let's hope that William realizes that, and doesn't just get an attack of the guilties for cheating...

Thanks for reviewing, hon! *Smooches*

Reviewer: spikeluv84 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2009 - 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 5

woo!! thank Jebus i got my popcorn ready for this chapter!!! this was awesome! and not just cuz of the sex...okay 95% was because of the hot lovin', but the other 5% was cuz i'm just so glad he's finally happy! u know, i hope Zoccola (that is now her new official name!) has cameras around and catches this. screw the alamony, i just hope she gets pissed off that he's happy! i hope her head pops off! and then it flies around the room like a balloon! that's so sweet to picture! can't wait for the next update! :)

Monica

Author's Response: hahaha You got me picturing Zoccola's balloon head whizzing around the room too :D

Glad you enjoyed the smuttage heehee Buffy and William had been wanting (at least on a subconscious level) to do that since they met, was a long time comin' :P

Thanks for reading & reviewin, babe! *hugs & spins*

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2009 - 09:45 pm Title: Chapter 5

OMG you did it again you have me complety hooked. That was hot and so fantastic i can't get enough of this story.

Author's Response: Aww thank you, Jenn! *hugs* I'm happy that you enjoyed it :D There's 8 chapters in all, I hope you'll like the way things turn out :)

Thanks for reviewing, sweets! *hugggs*

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2009 - 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 5

I'd thought I couldn't trust my eyes when I saw another chapter. Thanks for the quick update. :)
Hot Smut again. Thank god Cecily missed all the fun, not wanting William. Who knows if she wouldn't trey to keep him. :)
But I fear she'll try to fight him leaving her anyway.

Author's Response: :D I'm glad I was able to post part 2 of the naughty so quickly. I couldn't leave the smut lovers hangin lol

That would be funny, wouldn't it? If Cecily decided she'd like to take wildman William for a spin? There's going to be consequences to what Buffy and William did. 'The talk' will be coming in the next chapter.

Thanks for the review, hon! *smooches*

Reviewer: spikeluv84 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2009 - 09:41 pm Title: Chapter 4

thank GOD!!!! the man is happy for once!!!! and that was incredibely hot! so glad u updated!!!

*flies to next chapter!*

Author's Response: hehehe Thanks, hon! Oh yes, William's quite happy at the moment, but he can always get happier :D

Reviewer: spikeluv84 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2009 - 09:19 pm Title: Chapter 3

yeah, William needs to loosen up!! u made Zoccola do a freakin' number on him! won't even go out just in case she calls?? she's got that dog collar tight (and not in a good way)! and i'm sitting here rubbing my hands together, waiting for some Spike to bust out! i have a feeling it's gonna be awesome! :)

Monica

p.s. Zoccola is a nasty Italian word that basically means bitch. and i do believe that's the nicest interpretation of it.

Author's Response: lol Zoccola is a good term for Cecily! Mmhmm, Cecily has done her best to "train" William, and unfortunately he fell into the trap.

There just might be some Spike bustin out soon :P

*Smooochies*

Reviewer: claire Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2009 - 07:02 pm Title: Chapter 5

Wow, this was really hot! I'm so glad William and Buffy finally got it on. Buffy seems to be pretty experienced; are we going to find out why? (how? who?) And I can't wait for William to confess that he's only slept with Cecily before. I'm looking forward to more smut, but also to the inevitable conversation!

Author's Response: =) Glad you liked! Yep, they finally did the deed! Buffy's carnal knowledge won't be discussed lol She's had a few lovers, likes to watch her some porny goodness, and is a quick learner (when it comes to physical things) lol

The next chapter will start the morning after their night together. Sorry that the smut-a-thon had to end, but I was worn out too heehee Buffy and William will have a few important things to talk about, that's for sure ;)

Thanks for reading and reviewing, claire! I love yummy reviews *gobbles*

Reviewer: xaphania Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2009 - 06:47 pm Title: Chapter 5

You are truly the Queen of Smut :D Wow, that was hot.

Wish your tongue was detachable, I'd take it with me everywhere.

LMAO!

Loved the chapter :D

Author's Response: >:D Aww thank you, xaph! So glad you liked! heehee I was fond of that line too :P

Thanks for reviewing, sweetiepie! *huggggs*

Reviewer: xoChantelly Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2009 - 02:39 pm Title: Chapter 5

HOLY EFF THAT WAS HAWT!!

And more to come?! Jeez, William is a robot! Though, it's understandable with all the half-way-in frigid sex he was gettg from cow-bich Cecily.. heehee.

I'm glad Buffy is (finally) showing him a good time!

PB you do wear the smut hat well!! *slides it over for more wonderfully awesome Spuffy smut to come!*

*hugs and kisses*

Author's Response: Thanks, Chan! =D That would be an unexpected plot twist - William is really a bot lol Lmao at "with all the half-way-in frigid sex" hehe Good thing I wasn't drinking anything when I read that :P

The next chapter skips ahead to the next morning, so any smut that happened during the night will have to be in the minds of the reader lol I was plumb tuckered out after their romp on the divan! heehee

*Adjusts smut crown* Why, thank you, dear! :D And thanks, as always, for your great review! *Hugs & smooches*

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2009 - 02:17 pm Title: Chapter 5

All Hail the Goddess of Spuffy Smut!!! And this was some hot smut...you were in fine form, milady. LOVED this chapter, cause I love this William so much, he's so sweet and unsure of himself but goes for it.And it's amazing. I was LOL at some parts--> Cecily's icy va-jay-jay I also love porn! Buffy. heehee .
William it's time to call a divorce lawyer so you can spend the rest of your life fucking B's brains out.

Loved it PB, can't wait for the next chappie. *mwuah*

Author's Response: hehehe AWW thanks, AMI! You are such a puppy :D {That means a sweetie in Jance from 'Friends' speak lol}

I'm glad you loved it, hon :) Does my smutty heart good to know I've brought smiles to my readers' faces heehee

The next chapter will take place the following day, and them having 'the talk', so those burning questions will be answered soon ;)

Thanks so much for the sweet review! *Hugs & Squishes*

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2009 - 01:01 pm Title: Chapter 5

Wiliam and Buffy seem to be enjoying themselves..

I enjoyed it also.. LOL



Author's Response: hehehe Yep, William and Buffy are having a grand ole time :P Glad you enjoyed it too :D

Thanks for reading & reviewing, Pam! *smoochies*

Reviewer: Spikes_slayer08 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2009 - 12:42 pm Title: Chapter 5

Wow I love this so far very hot more soon please

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, hon! I'm happy you're digging it :D Only a few more chapters to go!

*hugs & smooches*

Reviewer: CallMeKitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2009 - 12:40 pm Title: Chapter 5

HOT DAMN YOU SMUT WRITING GENIUS! THAT WAS BRILLIANT! *drops to knees and bows at your feet* that was amazing! I cant wait for more!

Author's Response: Awww! hehehehe *blushes* Oh, go on with yo sweet self! :P Thanks, sweetiepie! Glad you enjoyed, I aims to please :D *Smoochies*

Reviewer: Spikes_slayer08 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2009 - 12:37 pm Title: Chapter 4

Wow I love this story so hot more please.

Author's Response: More comin' right up :P

Reviewer: xoChantelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2009 - 06:25 am Title: Chapter 4

WOOOOT! YAY! They are getting wild. I feel bad for William though, Cecily making him so insecure. I'm glad that you are having Buffy make him more confident. He definitely deserves a woman to make him feel desired and sexy, because he sooooo is. Lol if he only knew how many woman wanted him (us wonderful ladies of the Spike/William loving variety) lol.

I hope this fic doesn't end too soon, I love this fic! Great chapter! More soooooooon PLEASE!

*hugs and smoochiessss*

Author's Response: Thanks, Chan! :D The games have begun lol Buffy considers it her duty to build William up, to at least attempt to undo some of the damage Cecily's done to him. Buffy's doin a great job so far ;)

lol Oh yeah, there are many, many of us women who wouldn't mind being in Buffy's position (or upcoming positions) heehee William's a fabulous babe who doesn't know it, and he needs to have a hotblooded gal prove it to him :P

I've got 8 chapters planned in all, I think you will enjoy :D Thanks for the great review, hon! *Smoooochies*

Author's Response: Thanks, Chan! :D The games have begun lol Buffy considers it her duty to build William up, to at least attempt to undo some of the damage Cecily's done to him. Buffy's doin a great job so far ;)

lol Oh yeah, there are many, many of us women who wouldn't mind being in Buffy's position (or upcoming positions) heehee William's a fabulous babe who doesn't know it, and he needs to have a hotblooded gal prove it to him :P

I've got 8 chapters planned in all, I think you will enjoy :D Thanks for the great review, hon! *Smoooochies*

Reviewer: lori Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2009 - 05:46 am Title: Chapter 4

ACK! First post got eaten.

Can I just summarize and say, GUH?! This chapter was so hot that it got me all tingly and flushed. You gave William and Buffy the opportunity needed to throw convention, anxiety and fidelity out the window to give-in to their well-deserved passionate natures. It was wonderful to see the very staid William break down his walls to exhibit Spike tendencies. Go, Buffy, for finally just diving-in and taking what she wants—this time because she’s acting out her love-based lust.

There will be consequences for William breaking his fidelity to Cecily, but at least it’s not now. Bad-boy William needs to come out and play dirty with Buffy, first. Brava!



Author's Response: Thanks for persevering and getting the review through, Lori :D And I'm happy that the chapter had the desired effect on you heehee

It's fun to have prim & proper William show some Spike :P This is the first time he's felt so naughty and fiery. Luckily he has Buffy as his guide into the world of passionate love, she can show him how it's supposed to be :)

Yep, there are going to be consequences a chapter or two down the line, but they're just living in the moment for now :)

Thank you for another lovely review, sweetie! *huggggs*

Reviewer: spikeluv84 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2009 - 04:19 am Title: Chapter 2

can i kill her??? can i just...stick a fork in her eye or something???? set her hair on fire????

Author's Response: hahaha I don't think anyone would object to you doing any or all of the above to Cecily! :P She needs an ass kickin for sure.

*smoochies*

Reviewer: spikeluv84 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2009 - 04:10 am Title: Chapter 1

okay, since i've known someone in this situation, it's a little eerie. but at least i finally got to ur story!! i've been off on HollyDB's site for about a week. but anyways, i have conflict w/ the situation cuz my friend's ended badly but this is Spuffy and not real life, so i can live w/ it!! and Cecily's just bitch anyways! oh, Sotia taught me a new word! Ziccola! that's what she is! i'd stamp it on her forehead! love it so far gurlie!!

Monica

Author's Response: Thanks, Monica! Ooh, I can see how it would be eerie to have known RL people in that situation. But, as you said, it's Spuffy, so it's all good :P Things in RL tend to have more shades of gray, but I made Cecily so nasty in this fic, that *everyone* wants her to get cheated on and dumped lol

lol Ziccola is a kewl word, I'll have to look that one up :P

Thanks for reviewing, sweets! *smooches*

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2009 - 03:44 am Title: Chapter 4

So glad she convinced him to go for it. They are a lovely pair. Hopefully she'll help him grow on, too! Get him to leave that no good wife. Come on Buffy, make it dirtier!

Author's Response: lol Buffy was a woman on a mission. The 1st objective (getting horizontal with the object of her affection) is underway. She'll be working on Objective #2 (convincing him to get rid of Cecily) once the 1st reaches completion :P Oh yeah, things are gonna get dirtier lol

Thanks for reading & reviewing, hon! *huggles*

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2009 - 12:44 am Title: Chapter 4

Amazingly hot! More soon please!

Author's Response: Thanks, PhotographyNut! Ch. 5 will be up early Wednesday. I hope you find it as steamy as the first half :D *Hugs*

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