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Reviewer: CallMeKitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2009 - 09:40 pm Title: Chapter 4

Can I say SMOKIN! WOOHOO Gonna get some, Buffy! *cues cheesy porn music*

Love this fic, and cant wait for part 2 of the smutfest!

Author's Response: *bow chicka bow-bow* hehehe Thanks, Buttercup! As you know, I got ye olde writer's block during the smut scene - your feedback helped a lot to get the juices flowin again :P

I don't know what I'd do without ya, sweetie! *Hugs & kisses*

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2009 - 09:31 pm Title: Chapter 4

Yay for a new update :)
Guh.. so very hot. I'm glad that Buffy took the initiative (William never would have). And what a pity to miss the hotness.
And now to get of Cecily for good. *is searching for the number of a divorce lawyer for William* :D (Well just kidding for now but hopefully it will come to that too.

Author's Response: lol Glad the hotness was effective for you, ck :D They probably would've both been old and gray if the first move were up to William lol Buffy had to take matters into her own hands :P

Let's hope that (after some more smutty fun) William grabs the Yellow Pages and lets his fingers do the walking for a divorce lawyer heehee

Thanks for being such a wonderful, loyal reader and reviewer, hon! *Smoochies*

Author's Response: lol Glad the hotness was effective for you, ck :D They probably would've both been old and gray if the first move were up to William lol Buffy had to take matters into her own hands :P

Let's hope that (after some more smutty fun) William grabs the Yellow Pages and lets his fingers do the walking for a divorce lawyer heehee

Thanks for being such a wonderful, loyal reader and reviewer, hon! *Smoochies*

Author's Response: lol Glad the hotness was effective for you, ck :D They probably would've both been old and gray if the first move were up to William lol Buffy had to take matters into her own hands :P

Let's hope that (after some more smutty fun) William grabs the Yellow Pages and lets his fingers do the walking for a divorce lawyer heehee

Thanks for being such a wonderful, loyal reader and reviewer, hon! *Smoochies*

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2009 - 08:34 pm Title: Chapter 4

That was hot *fans self* I loved it. I feel bad for William that he has so many insecurities hopefully Buffy will make that better :)

Author's Response: Glad you liked it, Jenn! heehee I know, poor William hasn't had a woman make him feel good about himself in... well, ever. But Buffy's doing her best to correct that ;)

The next chapter is a' comin soon :D Thanks for reviewing, hon! *hugs*

Reviewer: Pet Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2009 - 04:05 pm Title: Chapter 4

Ooh! Hot! Loved it! More! Now! *lol*

Author's Response: lol Glad you approved, Pet! More coming soon! ;) I'll be updating tomorrow. Thanks for reading & reviewing! *huggles*

Reviewer: claire Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2009 - 03:50 pm Title: Chapter 4

Wow, this was really hot! William playing the piano turns me on, too! Accomplished men are so sexy.

Author's Response: Thanks, claire :D Oh yeah, the piano thing does somethin to me too lol My fic 'Piano Lessons' was started just cos I thought how incredibly hot Spike/William being an accomplished pianist would be lol

Thanks for reviewing, hon! *smoochies*

Author's Response: Thanks, claire :D Oh yeah, the piano thing does somethin to me too lol My fic 'Piano Lessons' was started just cos I thought how incredibly hot Spike/William being an accomplished pianist would be lol

Thanks for reviewing, hon! *smoochies*

Author's Response: Thanks, claire :D Oh yeah, the piano thing does somethin to me too lol My fic 'Piano Lessons' was started just cos I thought how incredibly hot Spike/William being an accomplished pianist would be lol

Thanks for reviewing, hon! *smoochies*

Author's Response: Thanks, claire :D Oh yeah, the piano thing does somethin to me too lol My fic 'Piano Lessons' was started just cos I thought how incredibly hot Spike/William being an accomplished pianist would be lol

Thanks for reviewing, hon! *smoochies*

Reviewer: xaphania Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2009 - 02:55 pm Title: Chapter 4

Hee the smutathon begins... loved Buffy's theory on why Cecily wouldn't want William :D

Great chapter!

Author's Response: Yes, the smutathon is finally off to a vigorous start heehee There's much more to come :P

Buffy thought Cecily might be crazy before she got a look at what William was packin' - so the gay or insane theories are the frontrunners lol

Thanks for reviewing, Xaph! :D *Smoochies*

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2009 - 02:35 pm Title: Chapter 4

Mmmm, Yummmy PB smut. LOVE IT!! This chap was so sexy and hot and sweet, Good for Buffy, just jumped right in and took what she wanted, and our sweet William is turning into a sex god. There was never any doubt. Hehehe.
---> he had an anaconda in his pants.
---> the bitch had some major mental problems. Or Cecily was a closeted lesbian.
---> her ex, Riley who had a tiny pecker.
OMG LOL . Loved it!

Amazing , hot chappie. PB. Can't wait for the smut-a-thon to continue. ;P *squishes*

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked, AMI! The lines you mentioned were some of my personal faves too lol Mmhmm William's not having much trouble getting into the spirit of the occasion ;)

The smut-a-thon (heehee) will pick right up where it left off in the next chapter. Thank you for reviewing, hon! *big smoochies*

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2009 - 02:20 pm Title: Chapter 4

Cecily.. gay ... maybe.

It was worth the wait.. hopefully continued in Chapter 5..

Enjoyed..

Author's Response: Cecily being gay (or insane) is Buffy's current theory lol The groiny activities are continued in ch. 5, I hope you enjoy that too :D

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Pam! *Hugggs*

Reviewer: gilby2388 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2009 - 02:18 pm Title: Chapter 4

OMG it's about time those two got together. I was going a little crazy waiting for Buffy to jump him the past three chapters. Fabulous chapter and I absolutely cannot wait for the next one!

Author's Response: lol Thank you for being patient for the smut! I felt bad making my wonderful readers wait lol But I'm glad that you seem to think it was worth the wait :D There's another 10 pages of smutty goodness coming in ch. 5, which I will be posting tomorrow *grin*

Thank you so much for the sweet review! *smooches*

Reviewer: lori Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/05/2009 - 01:28 am Title: Chapter 3

Buffy and William are dancing again—even if they have not yet made it to the Bronze. You’ve written them as if they’re dancing the minuet. They’re taking small, graceful steps towards each other and for now they’re in control. Soon it will be more of a waltz and later, it will be close-quartered dancing of the intimate nature. You’ve sprinkled their fleeting touches and passes with the whiff William takes of Buffy’s scent, her visual sweep of William’s attire, and the “innocent” remark of William’s “I’m all yours.” I especially liked the mention of a philanthropist-William. You’ve given the reader (and Buffy) more reason to justify that Cecily doesn’t deserve him. It will be interesting to see how the Spike tendencies of “sex god” emerge from this William incarnation. I can’t wait!

Author's Response: :D What a great review, Lori! *hugs* The dancing metaphor is very apt. It's building speed and intensity, slowly but surely lol

I loved writing him as a caring and generous person, as you said, to further demonstrate how completely *wrong* Cecily is for him.

Heehee Stay tuned to see if (and how) those 'sex god' tendencies emerge :P

Thank you for the thoughtful review, sweetie! I loved reading it *hugs & squishes*

Reviewer: cal Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2009 - 10:39 pm Title: Chapter 3

Hey Pagan. You know I'm adoring this story. I do love shy William. He is so cute and adorable. But I don't think him being shy is the only reason why he doesn't go after Buffy. I think it is mainly to do with the fact that he is a married man and wants to stay faithful even if his wife treats him like shit. That is just my opinion. It seems to me that Buffy has a bit of shyness in her as well. She asked for a drink because she was nervous. Not that I blame her. She is going after her friend who is married to her cousin. Even if her cousin is a bitch. I also think Buffy is right on when she suspects that William has a bit of animal in him when he is unleashed. We all know he does. Which is why we love William. We know there is a bit of Spike in there somewhere. He just needs to let out to play. I love reading the part where William was in Africa helping the kids and people there with a clinic. You describing the picture with him and the kids was so sweet. I wanted to cry. I'm such a sap right now. Cecily is one stupid girl for not loving William. But at least Buffy is smart enough. Thanks for the wonderful chapter. Love ya Pagan Baby!

Author's Response: Hey cal! *Hugs* I actually do mention a few of the things you talked about (his feelings about cheating, her nervousness, etc.) in the next few chapters. Very cool, it's like you got inside my head somehow lol

I loved adding the tidbit about William's trip to Africa. I think it helped to show just how sweet and compassionate he is :)

Thank you so much for your awesome review, cal! *big hugs & smoochies*

Reviewer: sanityfair Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2009 - 08:33 pm Title: Chapter 3

Thanks for the update!

Author's Response: No problemo, hon! It's always tempting to post unbeta'd when I'm bouncy about the next chapter (which I am right now hehe), but I've gotta be patient so I can give ya'll a shiny happy chapter without errors :P *smooch*

Reviewer: Sanityfair Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2009 - 08:26 pm Title: Chapter 2

Thanks for giving us William's point of view. Looking forward to reading the next chapter.

Author's Response: :) Glad you liked, Sanityfair! I toyed with the idea of just getting things hot & steamy right away. But I like letting the readers get a peek at the lusty twosome's thoughts and where their heads are at first. Next chapter should be up in a few days!

Thanks for the review, hon! *huggz*

Reviewer: laura_exist2inspire Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2009 - 02:38 pm Title: Chapter 3

Loved it, can't wait to see Buffy's seduction technique, looking forward to the next chapter =D

Author's Response: Thanks, Laura =D Will Buffy just jump him, or will she try persuading him in a more subtle way? You'll have the answer as soon as the next chapter comes back to me hehe

*smooches* Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Edgehead Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2009 - 07:21 am Title: Chapter 3

I hope that the next chapter will be THAT chapter... :P
I love this fic...and I can't wait for the next one...I'm sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo Happy that you are back, sweetie

*huggles*

Author's Response: hehehe Don't worry, Mel, your patience will be rewarded ;) The next chapter should be back to me by the weekend

Aww *huggles back* I'm happy to be back too, and that I was missed! :D *big sloppy smoochies*

Reviewer: kaylee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2009 - 04:24 am Title: Chapter 3

OMG! your a meanie for stopping it there!
I cant wait! please, please, please hurry =]

Author's Response: lol I know I'm evil, sorry, Kaylee :P I think you'll be happy with the next chapter. I sent ch4 to my beta today, shouldn't be too long a wait :D

*Huggles* Thanks for reviewing, hun!

Reviewer: xoChantelly Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2009 - 02:48 am Title: Chapter 3

Heehee PB! They are getting their drink on! Hopefully, going to get their freak on! I can't wait!! I love this so far!! I like the sound of the room too. I visualized it in my mind, very spiffy.

Glad about the animal thing too, lol Ive seen one too many animal head sticking out of walls from living out in the country. *shakes head*

MORE!! PLEASE! On with the smut!! *hugs!*

Author's Response: lol Alcohol is a great way to get characters looser and mellow, ain't it? It's cool that you could see the study too :) All classy an' shit heehee Glad you're enjoying it! And I've always hated the animal heads mounted on walls thing too lol

heehee On with the smut, you say? Chapter 4 comin' up :P

Thanks for the review, sweetiepie! *big sloppy smooches*

Author's Response: lol Alcohol is a great way to get characters looser and mellow, ain't it? It's cool that you could see the study too :) All classy an' shit heehee Glad you're enjoying it! And I've always hated the animal heads mounted on walls thing too lol

heehee On with the smut, you say? Chapter 4 comin' up :P

Thanks for the review, sweetiepie! *big sloppy smooches*

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2009 - 01:01 am Title: Chapter 3

No reason not to break in the new decanters... and maybe that chaise while they're at it, too! Looking forward to the next...

Author's Response: hehehe I like the way you think! Great minds, as they say ;) Next chapter will be coming soon :D

Thanks for reading and reviewing, hon! *big hugs*

Reviewer: CallMeKitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2009 - 12:57 am Title: Chapter 3

*bounces on the divan or fainting couch* I can NOT wait for the next chapter. This is sooooo exciting, and I would have just jumped him, but Buffy seems to have a plan! *boing boing boing*

LOVE IT! and I need MORE!

Author's Response: *bounces wiff* Heehee Thanks, Kitten! I woulda jumped him too, but Buffy's not as randy as us *giggles* She's still nervous that he'll be upset if she makes a move on him. Silly Buffy :P

Next chapter will be an interesting one ;)

*Hugs, smooches & twirls* Thanks for the review, Buttercup!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2009 - 12:48 am Title: Chapter 2

Poor William! I can't wait for him to answer the door.

Author's Response: I know, William, the poor baby got stuck with the wrong woman - the wrongest woman in the world that he could've got stuck with. Buffy will try to help him see the light ;)

Thank you for reviewing, hon! *smooches*

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2009 - 12:23 am Title: Chapter 3

Buffy has got to get William's mind off of Cecily! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Buffy's got an idea or two on how to best accomplish taking his mind off of Cecily - and maybe forgetting his own name too heehee The next chapter is with my beta, so shouldn't be long!

Thanks for reviewing, sweetie! *huggz*

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/30/2009 - 11:47 pm Title: Chapter 3

I love it and it would have been funny if it was the UPS man. That was a great update. I'm excited to see where you take it next.

Author's Response: haha I considered doing the mailman at the door thing, but I couldn't bring myself to be that evil >:D The next chapter will be a fun one ;)

Thanks for the review, Jenn! *Smoochies*

Reviewer: claire Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/30/2009 - 11:18 pm Title: Chapter 3

Oh, I can't believe you ended it there! Buffy's gotta make a move on William soon, poor baby, before either of them explode with UST!

Author's Response: lol Sorry, claire! I wanted to try doing chapters more like CallMeKitten: shorter and more cliffhanger-y :D Buffy *does* make a move in the next chapter. Stay tuned to find out if it's effective ;)

Thanks for reading and reviewing, claire! *hugs & smooches*

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/30/2009 - 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 3

Sounds as if William needs a little convincing. ;))
At last they have the house to themselves now.
Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Mmmhmm William needs a little push in the right direction ;) Everything's in readiness for the games to begin, Buffy just has to make that first move... heehee

Mucho thanks, as always, for reviewing, ck! *smooches*

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/30/2009 - 08:46 pm Title: Chapter 3

Buffy needs to "bop" him over the head and drag him away... CaveWoman style..

Enjoying..

Author's Response: LMAO That would cut right through all the pussyfootin' around, wouldn't it? Buffy like boy, boy smell good, Buffy take boy heehee Glad you're enjoying, Pam! More to come soon

Thanks for reading and reviewing! *smooochies*

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