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Reviewer: lindsay Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2009 - 09:29 pm Title: 3. Making Plans

“There is no Spike and me,” she said quietly, so quietly that Dawn wondered if she had said anything at all.

And doesnt that sum up how Buffy felt perfectly, good to see a different side of Dawn in this, not so bratty, not so ungrateful that it made us want to claw our eyes out. I still have the ringing in my ear from when Dawn screeched at everyone to "GET OUT" over and over again.

Oh Buffy, when will you learn lol? when you need someone, it's generally because you need them for more then just sex, tsk tsk, our favorite girl in the dark, metaphorically and realistically has so much to learn :)

Good job!!!

Author's Response: Greetings, Lindsay!! =) OMG When a reader quotes a line from my fic, I get all tingly inside!! I love that a particular line is that memorable to you! *hugs* Ha, yes, I agree COMPLETELY. I thoroughly disliked Dawn in the show and I could not *believe* how disrespectful she was to Buffy. Like, didn't anyone ever teach her to respect her elders? Buffy friggin *died* for her and in season 7, she kicks her *older* sister out of the house. That was Joss Whedon gone bad, I'm sorry. : P Yeah, when she screamed "Get out" like that, I was just like, "Eh, are you like five or something? God, just shut UP." LOL. Haha yes, she definitely does have much to learn! *smooches* Thanks for reviewing again, Lindsay! You're awesome!

Reviewer: LCF Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2009 - 01:24 am Title: 3. Making Plans

Buffy, Buffy, Buffy..! (~smacks her with a ball pin hammer!~) I'm tempted to just smack her one and say "GROW UP, ALREADY!!" What's it gonna take (~besides a gratuitous bribe sent your way...)?
Love seeing Clem getting some action, (offers up yet another bribe in hopes of Clem beating Riley to death!)

I'm liking this - a lot!! Crazed & demented pairings are always fun!

LCF

Author's Response: Hey LCF! =D LOL Hahaha funny funny. I could definitely see someone hitting her with a ball pin hammer, since she LIVES in the land of Denial. =P haha, yeah it *is* a crazed/demented pairling! Thanks for your comments and your review! *hugs*

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2009 - 12:49 am Title: 3. Making Plans

Loved the chapter! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2009 - 11:53 pm Title: 3. Making Plans

Clem and Dawn are so cute,can't see Buffy so accepting of them tho. Good to see Buffy is missing Spike. sneaky Clem telling B about a demon rave.LOL
Wonder what his plan is?

More soon ...liking it alot.

Author's Response: Hiya AMI! LOL Well, we shall just have to wait and see! :P Thanks for your review and I'm glad you're liking it! :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2009 - 09:28 pm Title: 3. Making Plans

Wow, I had two chapters to read today.
But I can't see Dawn falling for Clem, I must say. ~ Good to see that Buffy acknowledges that Spike wants to help her (fighting demons to her). Not sure how Buffy would feel if Spike tried to give her money.

Author's Response: Hey cordykitten! =) Yeah, Dawn/Clem is an iffy thing for almost everyone, but fanfic is cool like that. Everything goes :P. Thanks for your review hon! *hugs*

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