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Reviewer: Kiera Thornton Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/13/2009 - 10:37 pm Title: 9. Love

I'll amend my age correction due to the fact it's AU, but my opinion still stands on Buffy's reaction. I definitely think she would've flipped a lot more, cuz Dawn will always be her baby sister. Also Dawn and Clem... kinda squicky to me, but I survived.

Author's Response: Thanks for being fair in that sense and I think you have absolutely every right to your opinion; I partially agree, though I disagree in some senses. Otherwise, Clem/Dawn IS kind of weird but eh, challenges like these are kinda fun to take on. Thanks for taking the time to write this, it's very sweet and kind of you! *hugs*

Reviewer: Kiera Thornton Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2009 - 06:53 pm Title: 9. Love

Well I think it's cute, but a tad unrealistic. Firstly because Dawn wasn't 18 in season 6. She was still a sophomore in high school actually... In season 7 she was a junior. Also I think if Buffy caught Dawn having sex with anyone, let alone a demon, she would totally flip out. I definitely don't think she would allow said demon to come back to her house and sleep there. Also, Dawn has blue eyes, not brown.

In one of the paragraphs toward the end you've got some strange parentheses going on. I'm not sure if that was something a beta did and you forgot to change it, but I thought you ought to know. I noticed that this was rated NC-17, but so far it's only been R. If the sex isn't going to actually be described, you should consider changing the rating. But other than that, I think this is a cute story so far. Off to read the rest!

Ciao

Author's Response: Hi Kiera Thornton, Terribly sorry for not getting back to you sooner for any of your awesome reviews! Life got really tangled and crappy and eh, the fandom had to be put on hold for a bit (with the exception of SOME immature indulging...hey, I'm only human =P) Regarding your first paragraph, I put this fic at AR because of the age difference so that was a given. Additionally, I agree that it was probably a tad OOC and I'm totally with you there. Though, said demon IS the reason why she and Spike are a happy couple now. Mhm, mistake on my part. The brunette hair/blue eyes always screws up. Apologies *bows* Strange parentheses, huh? Well, damn. Thank you for pointing that out! I'll definitely get around to fixing that bit up when I get some free time! As for the rating, I prefer to be safe and stick with R unless I absolutely know where I'm going with a story. This way, it's relatively fair to my readers, as well. But you're definitely right in this case; I'll probably switch the general rating right around to NC-17 for all chappies. Thanks for reviewing, sweetie! I appreciated all the constructive criticism! It's very helpful and strangely motivating! *hugs*

Reviewer: lindsay Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2009 - 10:43 pm Title: 9. Love

LOL ok so Spike more focused on Sugarlumps, fantastic name btw, had me lol'ing hard! Dawn being 18 clears my mind about a lot of things too. All in all the chapter was hilariously uplifting and a little hot, i also love that Buffy drops the why's of Dawn's crush, doing something i am apparently not capable of :):):):):):)
I truly cannot wait to read more, good job, reading this has lifted my spirits so thank you. I also cant wait for the showdown between the 'friends'
xx
L

Author's Response: Hey lindsay!!! =) OMG you're like the bestest spuffy-shipper there is! Haha your reviews rock, baby! : D Ookay, sooo, let's see...LOL Haha, yeah, Sugarlumps was, like, the first thing that popped into my head and I was like, "OMG This must be used!!" Glad to see someone appreciated the humor! :P Also, yesh, terrible me! I neglected to include in the first A/N for chapter 1 that in this particular AU, Dawn is 18 years old. I AM glad, however, that this cleared up any of your doubts; don't worry, I'd be kinda worried too if my 15 y/o baby sister was, like, "doing it" with this demon dude. =D Aw, your comments and feedback are too, too kind and they just make me feel all cuddly inside! *don't worry, I'm not some crazy perv stalker. : P* Thank you SOOOOO much for your review, lindsay!! You're THEEE best!!! =)

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2009 - 11:50 pm Title: 9. Love

Loved how Buffy thanked Clem! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks for your review, PhotographyNut! *hugs* =)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2009 - 05:51 pm Title: 9. Love

Dawn is 18 already? Then there is not much Buffy can't do about her seeing Clem I think. (Dawn's older here than she was in the TV-Series, huh?) Trust is important. I hope the telling of the friends will go well.

Author's Response: Hiya cordykitten! Aha! I neglected to include in the A/N that Dawn, for the purposes of this AU fic, is 18. Sorry! : ) Also, yes, definitely agree with you there; trust is *definitely* imperative! Thanks SO much for your review! *hugs*

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2009 - 02:32 am Title: 9. Love

um, wait a second, isn't dawn supposed to be 15 here? how is it possible that she's 18?

Author's Response: Terribly sorry about the confusion; in my original posting, I had included the A/N that for the purposes of this story, Dawn was 18. (This is AR/AU after all, hon! : P) Thanks for the comment anyhow! Good to know people still pay attention to the little things!! :D *hugs*

Reviewer: Brett Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2009 - 01:33 am Title: 9. Love

Hehe! I loved when Spike and Buffy walked in on Dawn and Clem. SO funny. I mean really what is a kitten doing in Spike's crypt, its right unmanly.

Author's Response: Heeey Brett! It's great to hear from you again! LOL I know, I was like, "It must be done! They *must* walk in the crazy sex because it's like, inevitable and a joke just waiting to happen!* Ha, I'm glad you liked the kitten. And damn it, it *is* right unmanly!! :P Thanks for your review! *hugs*

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