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Reviewer: Charlie Aome Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/01/2009 - 05:01 am Title: Chapter 41 Home from Home

Alright well that was kinda disappointing ending. it just kinda trailed off into convo land. anyway, i liked the story as a whole. i thought it was sweet and fluffy and i kinda liked everyone getting along. that being said i do have some constructive criticism. this is in no way meant to be mean so please don't take it that way. i liked your dialogue, but all your characters sounded the same. they all sounded british and this was supposed to be set in Cali. the only brit was supposed to be spike according to you so ya that was just confusing. Also spelling/grammar errors are just irritating to try and read through. Also make sure that if u have show character names and then buffy character names that you keep the worlds names separate. sometimes you called Red Willow on the show altho that may of have been right i just thought her name was Red and same w/ Officer Jones. Also i thought Spike's name was supposed to be Liam on the show? I liked the pairing of Willow and Ford i think it worked well. i liked Xandy he was really cute and i think overall it was a good idea. maybe not the best execution in the world but not that worst. keep writing i did enjoy it

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2009 - 09:47 am Title: Chapter 41 Home from Home

I read your responses to the other reviewers, and all I can say is this installment was great! Can't wait to find out what happens to the two blondes in the next story! Thanks for the entertaining read!

Author's Response: I bow to you and offer my humble thanks for your lovely and encouraging reviews, without you I wouldn't write!! Yup, sequel and a christmas special on the way - all for my loyal readers!! And Thanks again for the reviews!!

Reviewer: nat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/25/2009 - 09:29 pm Title: Chapter 41 Home from Home

Oh come one!
Seriously, that's not THE END is it?
What about Buffy's & Spike's wedding and kiddies - corny I know but I want it!

Author's Response: Don't worry! There IS a sequel on the way, AND a christmas special!! Thanks for the review - i love them!!

Reviewer: sanityfair Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/25/2009 - 05:19 pm Title: Chapter 41 Home from Home

Kind of an odd note to leave on. Maybe you could do a oneshot of their future or something. I thought sure he'd propose while in England. Thanks for sharing.

Author's Response: Hi, there is a sequel and a christmas special on the way - thanks for the reviews, I love them!! You rock!!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/24/2009 - 10:47 pm Title: Chapter 41 Home from Home

Loved it! I'm hoping you have a sequel planned!

Author's Response: Yup, there is a sequel, starting ina couple of weeks, plus a Christmas special for you, one of my loyal reviewers, thanks for reading my fics, I do really appreciate it! XXXXXXX

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/24/2009 - 10:46 pm Title: Chapter 41 Home from Home

And so the visit came to an end. Back to U.S.A.
Is really the end? It's so open you could definitely write more about them. It feels as if you had marked this story finished by accident (you were in the middle of the story telling it and just ended it). But maybe I'm alone feeling this way.

Author's Response: Hi Cordy, well I thought they came full circle, back to the USA. There is a sequel planned, which I shall be starting in a couple of weeks, plus a christmas special dedicated to all my loyal readers!!! Thanks for reviewing, you are a star!! XXXXXX

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