Wow! This was unlike anything I've ever read before. You have such a vivid imagination and an incredible knack for writing. Truly fantastic! So much detail put into only two chapters!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and letting me know you enjoyed the story. You probably know there is a novel length sequel waiting for you called Tracked Down. :)

Glad Spike finally got his happy ending, but I can't help wondering why Buffy allowed the Initiative to get so out of hand.

Author's Response: In my world the Initiative was a huge and openly known organisation. There was no way that Buffy could take that on. Plus to be honest, she was more concerned with trying to have as normal a life as possible. Maybe now Spike is with her they could plot a little revenge...?

Great story. Lots of angst and pain but very well written. I once again got pissed off at Buffy for not helping Spike when she first saw him. Maybe she felt that she couldn't get him out. But she didn't even try. Makes me want to hurt Buffy even more. I was a little upset with Jerry as well. Although, he treated Spike ok he still seem to treat Spike like a thing. But I guess he was just afraid of what will happen to him if he didn't. Plus, Jerry done good by calling Buffy to get Spike out of there. I knew Jerry cared for Seventeen. So, I wasn't mad at Jerry as much as I was with Buffy. One thing that you didn't say is if Jerry and Spike had a relationship after the rescue. I could both see it happening and not. Happy that Spike got his sight back even if it is 100 percent. Very good story. I think the only story that I really didn't care for is the evil twin Spike. Not so much because of the torture or that it wasn't a happy ending. But that might be a little part of it. But mostly for not being able to picture Spike doing some of those things even when he was evil. At least not to another Spike. Maybe to someone else but not to another Spike. That is just the way I feel though. So, didn't really care for that story. But I think I like the rest that you have on here. So, keep up the good writing.

Author's Response: Thank you for letting me know you enjoyed the story. I just felt that Buffy would feel unable to do anything about so large an organisation and unlike the show - it was out in the open - not secret. Jerry tried his best for Spike but he was just doing his job. Jerry certainly didn't have a relationship with Spike - he cared for him but as a friend. As for the evil TwinSpike fic - the thing to remember is that the twin wasn't Spike - he looked like him and shared his memories but he, as we quite clearly see, wasn't like Spike at all. :D Check out my lj for more fics - most are slashy tho. I'm sure it won't be long before I have something new to post. Thanks again :D

Really enjoyed this story, well written and full of angst although hated what happened to Spike & disappointed that Buffy didn't rescue him when she first found him, but altogether a great read

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I don't think there was much that Buffy could have done - the Initiative were too public and huge an organisation for her to be able to affect it. :D

thanks for the happy ending.

Author's Response: I figured he deserved it. :D