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Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2009 - 10:08 pm Title: Hello You

Great beginning! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2009 - 04:31 pm Title: Hello You

Looking forward to hearing more on these two.

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2009 - 12:57 pm Title: Hello You

Sounds good so far,Sounds like Dru has come and gone which is also good,..Hope he doesn't have a current girlfriend like Harmony, Yuc, maybe they could start over.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2009 - 12:40 pm Title: Hello You

18? Then Buffy is 28 now. A long time to be away and alone for her. Make me wonder what happened that they didn't stay together (especially when Buffy is still in love with her even if Spike isn't that much - having been involved with Drusilla). No wonder Spike didn't recognize her after all that time.
Too bad it didn't work back then - I hope you'll 'make it better' now.

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2009 - 10:22 am Title: Hello You

Its been 10 years and no guys for Buffy.. and unfortunately Dru for William.
Waiting to see what happens..

Reviewer: Brett Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2009 - 03:56 am Title: Hello You

Oh what a beginning. Lot of history between these two.....but so much time has passed. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: grammar nazi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2009 - 02:14 am Title: Hello You

Your summary can use editing:

Each summer, Buffy Summers traveled from the States to England to visit her Grandparents and a good friend of hers, Spike, who lived next door. Then, one summer--the summer Buffy turned sixteen--things changed; she and Spike fell in love. But the summer Buffy turned eighteen, she left Spike so she could return to school and start her career. She returns to England a decade later, and everything has changed.

Do with it what you will. I think it reads better and will have people wanting to see what it's about. You may want to get a beta for the actual story, too.

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