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Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2010 - 10:41 pm Title: Chapter 7

So good to see an update :)
I'm glad they had the opportunity to talk. Enjoyed the back-story.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2009 - 05:49 pm Title: Chapter 5

Bingo - that was it! Perfect.
BTW if you need a divider you can always use the
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in the brackets.
That looks like:



I try to post the code here but you have to take out the * (sometimes the text won't get posted when I use the brackets in a review:

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/28/2009 - 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 6

(This chapter is normal again BTW, regarding the scrolling.)
And good to have two chapters today to read.
Awe, Spike knows now that he is a father. He took it really well. :)
Enjoyed the big update.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/28/2009 - 09:42 pm Title: Chapter 5

PS: Your divider (``````````````````) is a bit too long, means I have to scroll the chapter to read. (At last I think that causes it.) Good to see an update. :D
Too bad that Angel is acting as such an idiot here. He didn't listen to Buffy it seems. He doesn't see how much he has hurt her with not telling that Spike was back.

Author's Response: Well thanks for the review, it was easy for me to see Angel reacting this way, I kind of saw it when he appeared in Season 7. I also got rid of the divider hopefully that'll help. Thanks!

Reviewer: Amaya Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/28/2009 - 08:02 pm Title: Chapter 6

Hello. I like this story and I would like to read the end of it, a happy end for our favourite couple, of course. So, please keep writing and update as soon as you can. bye.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2009 - 05:33 pm Title: Chapter 4

I'm glad you've found time after all to write. :)
I don't feel bad for Angel but he got to knew some sad truth for him. *gg*
Especially when he was caught lying to Buffy to make her feel bad (about keeping secrets). Now Buffy knows the truth - Spike *is* alive.

Reviewer: Tammy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2009 - 10:49 am Title: Chapter 4

This is awesome.

Reviewer: Charlie Aome Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2009 - 03:20 am Title: Chapter 4

Oh ur so mean! What a crazy reveal tho. I love how Angel just totally lost it liek a douche bag. i can't wait to see Spike and Liam become friends. Liked the update alot :) can't wait for what's next!

Reviewer: Mary Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2009 - 02:53 am Title: Chapter 4

Hi,
love this story... Can't wait for you to update it.... More, More, More
lol

keep up the good work

mary

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2009 - 01:44 am Title: Chapter 4

I really enjoyed this chapter , take that Angel . i like Liam alot to. Did u have to end the chapter there? How long must I wait for the next one, i feel like i was waiting forever for this one. Update soon please.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/04/2009 - 06:35 pm Title: Chapter 3

Oh two :))
I thought it was one baby. That's an even greater surprise for Spike.
Very thoughtful of Buffy to want to have the children Spike's name, to connect them with him.
Meeting Angel next and maybe finding out his secret? Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/04/2009 - 04:15 pm Title: Chapter 3

Thanks for filling in the backstory. Very credible. Can't wait for the confrontation with Angel... will his head explode when he learns of the twins? Will Liam detect Spike's scent? Can't wait.....

Reviewer: Amaya Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/04/2009 - 09:50 am Title: Chapter 3

Keep updating this story. I like it very much. I hpe for a happy ending. Bye.

Reviewer: flyingnicole Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/04/2009 - 03:58 am Title: Chapter 3

loving this so far..keep up the good work

Reviewer: Charlie Aome Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/04/2009 - 03:36 am Title: Chapter 3

Oh are they gonna see each other next chapter? great update. i really loved all that stuff about Buffy and the Twins. It's so sweet that she changed her name to his :) it's just so sweet. i really liked the update and can't wait to see what happens w/ Angel and the eventual Spike reveal :)

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/03/2009 - 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 2

Oh, there's a Spuffy claim! Excellent! Now then... just as long as Angel doesn't manage to hide Spike's return from Buffy.......

Reviewer: Kirsty Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/03/2009 - 05:29 pm Title: Chapter 2

Now what will Spike do? Will he be gone before Buffy arrives?
Loved the update :)

Reviewer: Kirsty Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/03/2009 - 05:14 pm Title: Prologue/Chapter 1

A very promising beginning :)
And a baby? yay. And Spike and Buffy are mated, even better :)

Reviewer: Kirsty Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/03/2009 - 05:08 pm Title: Prologue/Chapter 1

A very promising beginning :)
And a baby? yay. And Spike and Buffy are mated, even better :)

Reviewer: Rainey Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/03/2009 - 03:28 pm Title: Chapter 2

I like the premise of this story. I can't believe it's been two years in your story-verse since the two of them have seen each other. More soon, please!

Reviewer: Charlie Aome Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/03/2009 - 03:34 am Title: Chapter 2

good start. i'm def enjoying it. couple suggestions tho since it's just the beginning. learn to love commas. they can be really vital to conveying what you need to. Also w/ the Spike talk. focus more on what he needs to say than having him have to say it in a Spike way. that was my problem too when i started writing and my betas were like argh lol. but i really like this idea and i can't wait to see what else you have :) i look forward to reading more :)

Author's Response: Thanks for the advice, I will try to remember that. I'm gld you like the story so far!

Reviewer: le Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/01/2009 - 05:57 am Title: Prologue/Chapter 1

hmmm...sounds like a baby!

Reviewer: Jeana Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/31/2009 - 11:47 pm Title: Chapter 2

Can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/31/2009 - 09:56 pm Title: Chapter 2

Well Spike's first plan to watch what was in the drawer didn't go so well (because Spike got caught). Hopefully trying to get o Buffy will go better. :)
Especially when Spike doesn't know that Buffy will come to L.A.

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/31/2009 - 02:22 pm Title: Prologue/Chapter 1

OHHHH! i love this kind of reunion fic , so when are u updating next? Soon right? i need to read more.

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