Date: 08/03/2009 - 05:14 pm Title: Prologue/Chapter 1
A very promising beginning :)
And a baby? yay. And Spike and Buffy are mated, even better :)
Date: 08/03/2009 - 05:08 pm Title: Prologue/Chapter 1
A very promising beginning :)
And a baby? yay. And Spike and Buffy are mated, even better :)
Date: 08/01/2009 - 05:57 am Title: Prologue/Chapter 1
hmmm...sounds like a baby!
Date: 07/31/2009 - 02:22 pm Title: Prologue/Chapter 1
OHHHH! i love this kind of reunion fic , so when are u updating next? Soon right? i need to read more.
Date: 07/30/2009 - 11:04 pm Title: Prologue/Chapter 1
LOVE IT!! Please review soon!!
Date: 07/30/2009 - 11:01 pm Title: Prologue/Chapter 1
Intriguing start, but the huge chunks of text do make it a bit hard to read. Might be a good idea to break up into more paragraphs. I'm guessing the 'precious cargo' is a baby? Looking forward to the revelation that Spike is back!
Date: 07/30/2009 - 10:39 pm Title: Prologue/Chapter 1
Ah I'd guessed right what this precious cargo is. :D
Interesting start / twist. Looking forward to more.
Date: 07/30/2009 - 10:24 pm Title: Prologue/Chapter 1
okay, i see this is your first fiction, so i'm not being mean, just a word of advice, i would break up the huge paragraphs, it would make it a lot easier to read, i would also suggest getting a beta.
Date: 07/30/2009 - 09:05 pm Title: Prologue/Chapter 1
Hi. Please keep updating this story because I am liking it so far. I hope that it has a happy end. Bye.