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Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/03/2009 - 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 2

Oh, there's a Spuffy claim! Excellent! Now then... just as long as Angel doesn't manage to hide Spike's return from Buffy.......

Reviewer: Kirsty Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/03/2009 - 05:29 pm Title: Chapter 2

Now what will Spike do? Will he be gone before Buffy arrives?
Loved the update :)

Reviewer: Rainey Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/03/2009 - 03:28 pm Title: Chapter 2

I like the premise of this story. I can't believe it's been two years in your story-verse since the two of them have seen each other. More soon, please!

Reviewer: Charlie Aome Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/03/2009 - 03:34 am Title: Chapter 2

good start. i'm def enjoying it. couple suggestions tho since it's just the beginning. learn to love commas. they can be really vital to conveying what you need to. Also w/ the Spike talk. focus more on what he needs to say than having him have to say it in a Spike way. that was my problem too when i started writing and my betas were like argh lol. but i really like this idea and i can't wait to see what else you have :) i look forward to reading more :)

Author's Response: Thanks for the advice, I will try to remember that. I'm gld you like the story so far!

Reviewer: Jeana Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/31/2009 - 11:47 pm Title: Chapter 2

Can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/31/2009 - 09:56 pm Title: Chapter 2

Well Spike's first plan to watch what was in the drawer didn't go so well (because Spike got caught). Hopefully trying to get o Buffy will go better. :)
Especially when Spike doesn't know that Buffy will come to L.A.

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