Well first I wanted to say this is my first fic of yours that I have read and I am quite impressed. You are an excellent writer. You develop a plot, and are detailed about it, which I like, your wiriting is real, too often I think some writiers want to make it too flowery, and the details are not in the right place. Your story line is great, and I have really enjoyed it and look forward to more installments. In the meantime, I am going to read your other stories, you have a new fan.
And I just want to say thank you

Debbie

Awe :) At last William is giving Buffy some ideas for writing. (I think she had trouble to write, must check the first chapter again.) Ah no need, she had indeed a writer's block.
Glad you updated again, looking forward to more.

Really enjoying the story. It has a nice freshness to it, and I'm already attached to the characters.

Gotta say I'm a fan of the final version. It has all your original spunk and witty observations of Buffy the author, but now with better flow and more necessary details. I especially like the improved flow on the confrontation between Mr. Pratt. I hope the second meeting is as humbling as the first was heated and embarassing. Keep up the good work.

I'm loving this already! Can't wait for more!

Very interesting start, looking forward to seeing where this is going. I was wondering if that Island was made up :D

You write a lovely first person story, but I personally still like to read in third person. I think it's because that way you get a view into all the characters heads. I find myself always wondering what other characters are thinking which you can't always tell using first person narrative. Great start.

I think your bout with writing in first person is going quite well. And her rage at men is not only well spoken but quite humorous. Very enjoyable. And I love the way Joyce is helping out. Looking forward to her apology. Please, update soon.

I love it so far. The first person narrative gives the story a nice intimacy.