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Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/21/2010 - 06:03 pm Title: Chapter 6 Have a Little Faith

this is a very interesting story line and I think you should keep it. hope your exams go well.

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: magnus374 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/21/2010 - 05:41 pm Title: Chapter 6 Have a Little Faith

It's nice.

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: anon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/21/2010 - 02:05 pm Title: Chapter 6 Have a Little Faith

Please keep writing! You've got a good start on plot and I like your characterizations. Your conversations are natural sounding, and they help the story flow. Look for a good beta reader: not one who will just look for spelling or grammar mistakes. Find someone you're comfortable with, and bounce ideas around. You've got a good start here. I look forward to reading this story, and all the others you'll write in the future.

Author's Response: Thanks for the advice. I have got another fic on this ssite called Older but Closer Together, and as the title suggests, it is an alternative storyline to Older and Far Away. That is just the first part in the series and is almost finished though and I hope to wait to work on the next part until I had this finished so look out for updates for both.

Reviewer: spike_lizard Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/21/2010 - 02:42 am Title: Chapter 6 Have a Little Faith

keep going please

Author's Response: I will, thanks. May be September before I update next, though.

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/21/2010 - 02:33 am Title: Chapter 6 Have a Little Faith

Please keep this story. I enjoy reading it and you can't leave it on a cliffhanger. Good luck on your exams.

Author's Response: Thanks for the encouragement, I'll keep going but it may be September before I update next.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/2010 - 09:37 pm Title: Chapter 6 Have a Little Faith

Good to see an update for this one again - but please don't delete it, let it sit here till you can work on it again.
Good luck for your exams.

Author's Response: Thanks for the encouragement. I'm currently working on the last chapter of Older but Closer Together and then I can focus more on this and plan the sequel to Older.

Reviewer: Amaya Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/20/2010 - 09:06 pm Title: Chapter 6 Have a Little Faith

Please update as soon as you can. I hope that they send Angel away. I don't like him.

Author's Response: I don't like Angel much either, but he is required in the fic as he is Connor's father and will help explain some things. But don't worry, there is going to be some Angel bashing coming up.

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