Date: 09/13/2009 - 11:10 am Title: 1
Wow!!!That was amazingly hot and I cannot believe that was your first fanfic!
Well done and wow again!
Date: 09/04/2009 - 05:32 am Title: 1
crap..that was hooottt. Normally, it's hard to get involved into a PWP right away because you want some character development, but you strike up just the right mood.
Date: 08/31/2009 - 08:55 pm Title: 1
Really loved it! Is there more?
Date: 08/31/2009 - 08:15 pm Title: 1
Wow! Awesome! I can't believe that was your first fanfic! I'll definately be on the lookouf for more of your work. Brilliant! :)
Date: 08/31/2009 - 05:44 pm Title: 1
I overlooked 'all human' first and wondered if Buffy was the slayer here, being in heat. Because it really sounded as if she was in heat here. Poor one. :)) Lucky for her she ran into William to 'scratch her itch'.
Is there more? Because it isn't marked as finished. And I wonder why Buffy reacted this way, would like to get to know why. ~ Not bad for your first fanfic (I saw only some minor typos).
Date: 08/31/2009 - 04:09 pm Title: 1
Not bad for your first fanfic..
Little Buffy definitely got her itch scratched..
Enjoyed..
Date: 08/31/2009 - 04:16 am Title: 1
I liked it a lot but I noticed some simple mistakes but othersise can't wait for more.
Date: 08/31/2009 - 03:10 am Title: 1
It got me aroused and throbbing.