[Report This]Date: 09/07/2009 - 01:19 am Title: Willie's
I eagerly await Buffy's reaction to Spike trying to be a gentleman. I foresee a few bumps (possibly sink hole swallow your car size!) but that doesn't mean they won't end up in bed. Fantastic.
[Report This]Date: 09/07/2009 - 01:07 am Title: Willie's
So the attraction is mutual..
Enjoyed the dialogue in this chapter.. Men .. LOL Waiting to see if they have a late night run in..
Author's Response: thank you! I had fun writing this chapter.
[Report This]Date: 09/04/2009 - 05:21 am Title: Letting your Freak Flag Fly!
They are going to have quite a trial. Looking forward to more!
[Report This]Date: 09/03/2009 - 10:21 pm Title: Letting your Freak Flag Fly!
Enjoyed!
[Report This]Date: 09/03/2009 - 09:37 pm Title: Letting your Freak Flag Fly!
Yes, Anya would be a good attention to Buffy's team. But indeed not enough money for her.
Looking forward to more.
[Report This]Date: 09/03/2009 - 02:32 pm Title: Letting your Freak Flag Fly!
Loving this story! The gals all together are hilarious. Can't wait for more Spuffy interaction. :-)
[Report This]Date: 09/03/2009 - 12:00 pm Title: Letting your Freak Flag Fly!
The word is orgasm, not organism...
Author's Response: I fixed it thanks!!
[Report This]Date: 09/03/2009 - 11:22 am Title: Letting your Freak Flag Fly!
Looking forward to seeing this progress. however, it is always good to have a beta: In the last chapter I think you may have meant "You're so vain" and when you talk about Darla's clothes, it is "garters." I don't mean to nitpick, but sometimes those things are distracting to readers. Enjoying the story so far though!
Author's Response: I've made the corrections....thanks. In regards to a beta, I have had ones in the past and they never really worked out......they would sit on my story for weeks and/or they couldn't do it anymore. I've been trying really hard to beta my own work but sometimes things slip through......thanks for the suggestions
[Report This]Date: 09/03/2009 - 10:25 am Title: Letting your Freak Flag Fly!
Interesting case..
[Report This]Date: 09/03/2009 - 12:27 am Title: Arraigment
Not much bail.. for a very rich girl..
Waiting for more fireworks.. maybe they both need a drink..
Enjoying.
Author's Response: Thanks Pam....That was a typo....all fixed!
[Report This]Date: 09/02/2009 - 10:15 pm Title: Arraigment
Heh... seems that Spike has won the first round. But this is only the begin.
The begin of noticing the other (for both of them) too.
[Report This]Date: 09/02/2009 - 09:59 pm Title: Monday Morning
Buffy seems to look forward to the fight. There seems to be a story behind the Buffy's reaction that it will be Judge Synder's court.
(Thanks for the explanations.)
[Report This]Date: 09/02/2009 - 09:51 pm Title: The Harsh Light of Day
Bad hangover for Spike *g* but a lot of chapters for me to catch up to.
[Report This]Date: 09/02/2009 - 08:25 am Title: Arraigment
I'm totally loving this...please proceed, your honor
Author's Response: Thanks.....more coming soon!
[Report This]Date: 09/02/2009 - 06:10 am Title: Arraigment
Great story, passions are brewing..
Hope we get more!!
Love it btw
[Report This]Date: 09/02/2009 - 03:18 am Title: Monday Morning
Hmmm... Seeing sparks in the court room, up and coming. Gotta wonder though, if Jesse wasn't upset about stuff, why arrest the chick. Nothing wrong with the freaky shit if both parties are into it. And if he's and escort, wouldn't he be facing charges? Awaiting more to come.
Author's Response: well the way the criminal system works that despite if the victim feels their wronged, if a crime is committed the state doesn't need the victim to bring a case forward. It would be the state versus the person. Not person to person like a civil case. I agree if both parties agree, but if it happens to come out into public domain it's not private anymore. Also since it's an upscale service it would be extremely difficult to get him for the crime of sex for money. Plus sometimes DAs will go after bigger crimes and let the small ones go. Jesse's Sex for money is a misdemenor, Darla's offenses are not there criminal.
Author's Response: what I meant to say if people want to get freaky I'm all for it. The only problem is when private stuff becomes public.....
[Report This]Date: 09/01/2009 - 10:33 pm Title: Monday Morning
Can't wait to see Buffy in battle with William! More please!
[Report This]Date: 08/31/2009 - 11:44 pm Title: Monday Morning
Now we know how Buffy and Spike meet..
The battle will begin...
Waiting for the banter.
[Report This]Date: 08/31/2009 - 09:04 pm Title: Just Hanging with the Ladies
Great beginning! Can't wait for more!
[Report This]Date: 08/31/2009 - 08:36 pm Title: Just Hanging with the Ladies
Waiting for the confrontation between Buffy and Spike..
Enjoyed.
[Report This]Date: 08/31/2009 - 06:01 pm Title: Just Hanging with the Ladies
You're picture (if you tried to insert one) isn't showing. And what is an ADA? Assistant DA? (I'm not English.)
Heh... it's always funny how Anya's bluntness can get the others into embarrassing situations,
I like the start; looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thanks....I had a really NICE picture of James in a suit, but someone complained that it was too large. I tried to replace it to no avail. An ADA is an assistant district attorney
[Report This]Date: 08/31/2009 - 04:27 am Title: Just Hanging with the Ladies
The picture is so wide that it makes the text lines too long. I have to move the slide bar back and forth to read every single line.
[Report This]Date: 08/31/2009 - 04:14 am Title: Just Hanging with the Ladies
I need more. This is way to good.
I wanna see how it ends. =]
Author's Response: Thank you.......my inner muse loves reviews!!!
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