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Reviewer: cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/01/2009 - 06:37 pm Title: Trial IV: Closure

I wonder if Spike didn't loose this good luck charm tie at Buffy's; he should have found it by now if not.
It doesn't sound as if Buffy will have an opportunity to talk to Spike in the (near) future.

Author's Response: keep reading......

Reviewer: lovesparklys Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/01/2009 - 12:13 pm Title: Trial IV: Closure

good for spike..... buffy broke up with him and she always wants to talk when she wants to, bury the hatchet when she wants to, and break up when it suits her. Any high moral attorney as buffy says she is would have know that the defense should have adequate time to prepare for Angel/us and would have have suggested the defense receive that time. She felt she had an ace in the hole, wanted to win, and did not care if she sprung a last minute witness on spike to do it. Except when it refers to her or her friends, Buffy has never understood how people get sucked into the black side/gray side of things. It was one of the things I always disliked about the scoobies.

Author's Response: you and me both! Thank you so much for your insighful review and continued readage!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/01/2009 - 10:15 am Title: Trial IV: Closure

I guess.. good for Spike..

Author's Response: Thanks for reading

Reviewer: nat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/01/2009 - 06:10 am Title: Trial IV: Closure

Spike's pretty harsh! I feel a bit sorry for Buffy - after all having Angelus on the stand was part of her job.

Author's Response: It was part of her job. The issue that Spike had was how she did it, not why she did it. Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/31/2009 - 06:06 pm Title: Trial III: Realizations

Spike sounded as if he was jealous but when talking to Buffy he was so cold.
Interesting, the witnesses Darla had were all being paid by her family in some way.

Author's Response: Each character are going through a gamet of emotions right now. It's not uncommon for someone to feel one way and act another

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/31/2009 - 06:05 pm Title: Trial III: Realizations

ugh, they're really pissing me off.

Author's Response: Sorry! Not my intention! But you have to remember this is Buffy and Spike.....drama is a given!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/31/2009 - 03:57 pm Title: Trial III: Realizations

Spike was such a prick to Buffy. Hitting below the belt about Angelus just before trial began. Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Well...when we are hurt we sometimes go for the throat! More will be coming soon! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/30/2009 - 12:37 am Title: Trial II: Enlighten Me

Angelus sure gave Buffy something to think about! More please!

Author's Response: I loved writing this chapter. Angelus was creepy but insightful!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/29/2009 - 03:46 am Title: Trial II: Enlighten Me

Love Angelus sweeping in and shaking things up. And any time someone can help explain to Buffy what is going on in her own head is a good thing. Poor, sad little William, he surely has a lot to think about, too. Great chapter. Love the surprise witness.

Author's Response: Thank you. Don't feel too back for William/Spike, he will get his rocks back soon!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/28/2009 - 09:22 pm Title: Trial II: Enlighten Me

Still reading, I want to know how it ends.
Angelus was right, Buffy doesn't trust; that's her problem.
I wonder how Angelus managed to get Buffy's phone number.

Author's Response: I'm glad that I haven't lost you! Angelus getting Buffy's phone number, it's like how many licks does it take get to the center of a tootsie roll pop, the world will never know!

Reviewer: Eddam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/28/2009 - 04:10 am Title: Trial II: Enlighten Me

Ooh... one of the best chapters yet!

This was the first time I actually liked Angelus! He was sleezily charming! Imagine that! XD

"his pencil thin lips were framed by a full and thick, porno-star-like mustache "... Brilliant!

"she’s seated next to Mr. Cockney over there"... also brilliant! (Mr. Cockney... *snickers*)

Update, update, update soon!



Author's Response: Thanks so much! I didn't know if I made any sense or it was just ramblings of a crazy chick! Thanks for saying that it worked. I remembered Angelus from Amends and when I thought about this character, his face instantly popped into my head!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2009 - 02:18 am Title: Changes

Having not read the updates to the last chapter, I'll say it came out of nowhere. She still can call him evil even though she knows he hates it. She watched him break down because of what he has to do... Not her biggest fan right now...

Author's Response: Sorry.....I tried to make the connections clear but not completely obvious. Well hopefully it will all make sense in later chapters

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2009 - 12:44 am Title: Trial

Seems like it would have been wise if Buffy and Spike started their relationship after the Masters trial was over. More please!

Author's Response: yeah....but relationships don't always start when timing is perfect. If we waited for that, we would all be single....forever!

Reviewer: immortalangel08 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/25/2009 - 06:25 pm Title: Self-Loathing

I will honestly say I think I am the only one who saw the break up coming from the Halloween chapter without the new hints but I thought that it was going to be prolonged a little more. So I guess I am good at seeing the subtleness in things. I can't wait to see where you are going with this and how you will bring them back together.

Author's Response: Ok...now I feel better that someone...well besides me and a few others, saw this coming. I was wondering if my inner muse steered me wrong. I will be updating soon, hope not to disappoint!

Reviewer: sanityfair Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/25/2009 - 04:45 pm Title: Trial

You did a great job on this chapter! Can hardly wait to read the next.

Author's Response: Thanks babe!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/25/2009 - 11:05 am Title: Trial

Spuffywise I don't like where the story was heading because this turn was too abrupt (my opinion but your story, no offense).
I wonder who will win this case; Angelus as a witness sounds like a bad surprise for Darla.

Author's Response: I'm sorry that you're not happy where the story is heading. Like I've said before relationships have there ups and downs....expecially theirs. I hope you'll keep reading....I hope that all will turn out as you would like it

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/25/2009 - 10:47 am Title: Self-Loathing

Your hints were to subtle, the break-up came out of the nowhere. :(
Buffy is right, she brought this all upon herself. She didn't give Spike a chance to work things out and break up then when it doesn't work. Then he would be warned that it could happen.

Author's Response: I understand that you feel that it came out of nowhere....your in the majority. The only thing was even if she did tell him what was wrong, how could he fix it? withdraw from the trial? quit WR & H? Even though she holds him at fault for his decisions to be with them, she wouldn't ask him to leave. That's why she felt that the only way to resolve this was to break up

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2009 - 11:29 pm Title: Self-Loathing

Very depressing chapter. Both Spike and Buffy are all torn up! What will happen when they return to court?? More please!

Author's Response: Sorry to make you sad. But I'm glad the feelings that I wanted to convey did come through. You don't have to wait any longer....I just posted my next chapter.....Trial time!

Reviewer: teal Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2009 - 06:50 pm Title: Self-Loathing

i'm still really lovin this story. you can really tell that they're both strongly affected by the break up and that they're both so lost and scared of the future w/o each other. can't wait to read more

Author's Response: thanks.....you don't have to wait long...I just posted the next chapter...hope you like!

Reviewer: Amanda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2009 - 02:42 pm Title: Self-Loathing

I knew from the beginning that Buffy was going to break up with him. I think she's totally on a high-horse and needs to get kicked down several notches and I'm not talking about self-loathing. I'm talking about Spike making her work for it when she wants in back. I also sort of want Spike to kick her ass in court. Have since I started the fic. Actually, I was shocked with their break up. I was sure it was going to be after the court case if Spike won. But I think this is better. This'll put more pressure and tension in the courtroom! I really hope Spike kicks her ass!

Great job on the fic. I'm really enjoying it!

And despite everything I do enjoy your Buffy, I think she's true to the characterization...but let's all admit it, Buffy needed her ass handed to her on the show, too.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review. I love when people enjoy my story...it makes my inner muse so happy! I'm glad that I was able to shock you with their break up. Don't want my story to be too predictable! Ya high and mighty Buffy does need to be taken down a peg or two!

Reviewer: ghostofsnickerdoodle Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2009 - 01:14 pm Title: Just Hanging with the Ladies

I passed this one over after reading the summary (in general, I'm not a huge fan of human AUs and I've read a few lawyer fics that I didn't like), but the writing and story sucked me in. I'm really enjoying it!

I also thought that Buffy's actions seemed to come out of nowhere - I think it would have made more sense if we had seen him doing something truly reprehensible in his role as a W&H lawyer, instead of just representing a morally repugnant client. Still, I think it's a teeny bit of an overall enjoyable story.

Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: I'm glad that I was able to suck you into the abyss that is the crazy ramblings of a mad woman!!! Like I said in the beginning notes...sometimes people break up with others for things that may not understand or agree with.

Reviewer: teal Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2009 - 10:31 pm Title: Changes

it still kinda feels like her decision came out of nowhere but there were little hints that something was wrong. awesome chapter though. very emotional. can't wait to read more.


Author's Response: her decision was coming, she just didn't let it be known because she was enjoying her time with Spike and now dealing with the trial that was coming.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2009 - 09:08 pm Title: Changes

Huh? Where came Buffy's break up from? They were happy and Buffy knew that Spike wanted away from W&H.
That came indeed out of nowhere; Buffy's reaction didn't make sense to me.

Author's Response: Hi...you're comment has been a running trend. I did add subtle hints that this was bothering her, I guess they were too subtle! I added a few lines to All Hallows Eve...hopefully this will make this chapter make more sense

Author's Response: Also Spike never told Buffy what was actually bothering him. He told her that he would tell her after the trial.

Reviewer: laur Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2009 - 05:24 pm Title: Changes

HUH?????did i miss something where did that come from???? just like buffy to overthink things...but it did come kinda outta no where she all of a sudden has these thoughts if something had happened i could see it but this was just out of left field (so to speak lol)......but its totally buffy always going with her HEAD instead of her heart and trying to work things out......i will trust i guess but its hard lol.....



Author's Response: This is true that Buffy lets her emotions and uncertainties rule her mind. I did have hints throughout the story about her doubts with their relationship since the beginning. I did add a few sentences in All Hallows Eve.....hopefully this will bring it together

Reviewer: Eddam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2009 - 04:33 pm Title: Changes

Wow... You really didn't spare the angst on this chapter. The sad part is that it was so true to charachter for Buffy to sabotage something so good for herself. I've followed the story from the beginning, and I totally saw this coming, but you still managed o surprise me. Well done! I hope you update soon, this is a truly addictive fic!

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and being addicted to my fic! Well you'll get your fix soon my pretty!

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