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Date: 11/28/2009 - 06:24 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 11: The Shape of Things to Come

*nods* to your answer - would be a shame not to show all the pretty banners you have.
Mmmh wet Spike - yummy :D
And good that Buffy has opened her eyes now and is seeing Spike, really seeing.
Oh! Like Buffy I feared the worst but it was 'only' the mirror. Maybe they can use that fact to their advantage.

Author's Response: Oh yes, I can zone out for mintues at a time when imagining wet Spike... @_@ heehee

Buffy is coming along nicely in her new attitude towards Spike. She seen that there's much more under the surface of his tough (and uber-hot) exterior :P I thought there should be one more scare for them before they left the house lol More with the Mirror in the 2nd half of ch. 11 :)

Thanks for reviewing, ck! *huggz*

Reviewer: Lise Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2009 - 04:59 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 11: The Shape of Things to Come (continued)

Love it. Absolutely adore it! Thank you

Author's Response: Aww thank you, Lise! It makes me so happy to know you're digging the story :D

Thanks for the sweet review, hon! *huggggles*

Reviewer: LoobyLoo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2009 - 04:24 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 10: Desperate Measures (continued)

Aww, SO sweet that he's taking care of her! And naughty thoughts abound!! I hope she'll be taking up some courge and jumping his bones sometime soon!! Reading about the licking gave me goosebumps! Spike licks...licks from Spike! Brrrrrrr - delicious!! more please and soon! smoochies and hugs!! :) XX

Author's Response: Mmm I love nurturing Spike, just does somethin' to me. Licky Spike is stimulating too :P Spike tongue - Tongue of Spike heehee

Naughty thoughts abound, indeed! :D Mmhmm I would SO jump his sexy undead bones if I were Buffy lol

Thanks for they yummy reviews, Deb! *hugz & smoochies*


Author's Response: Mmm I love nurturing Spike, just does somethin' to me. Licky Spike is stimulating too :P Spike tongue - Tongue of Spike heehee

Naughty thoughts abound, indeed! :D Mmhmm I would SO jump his sexy undead bones if I were Buffy lol

Thanks for they yummy reviews, Deb! *hugz & smoochies*

Reviewer: LoobyLoo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2009 - 04:09 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 10: Desperate Measures

I'm SOOOOOOOOOOOO glad that Spike took Buffy's blood and made good their escape. poor buffy is so weak now! But FREEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!! Can't you tell I'm happy - now onward with the story....

Author's Response: lol Yes, they're finally free! :D *rejoices wiff you* Hope you like the 2nd half!

Thanks for reviewing, Deb! *smoochies*

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2009 - 07:15 am Title: Part 1, Chapter 10: Desperate Measures (continued)

Glad that they are keeping their healthy relationship now that they are free of the witch. And I love how even in their weakened states they are still fighting their shared attraction. Awaiting that combustion, too. Great chapter. Looking forward to the next.

Author's Response: Spike was (and still is) afraid that their relationship will regress once Buffy regains her strength and doesn't need him as much as she did. But so far, so good :)

Mmhmm the Spuffy lusties are still in full force lol They still want each other in a bad way :P

Thanks for the sweet reviews, BuffyRat! *smoochies*

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2009 - 06:47 am Title: Part 1, Chapter 10: Desperate Measures

Love that they finally bested that darn witch. And that it took a bit of slayer blood, even if it wasn't still in the slayer, to do it. Gotta get to the next chapter... But I'm loving it. Hope she's okay.

Author's Response: I thought about letting Spike beat up the witch, but a quick dispatching of their enemy seemed the best way to go. Buffy needed help, and he wouldn't leave his girl in peril :)

Hope you like the thrilling conclusion to the over-long ch. 10! lol

Thanks for reviewing, BuffyRat! *hugggles*

Reviewer: Niori Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/21/2009 - 10:35 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 10: Desperate Measures (continued)

Another great one. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed, Niori! :D Thanks for reviewing, sweetie *smoocheis*

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/21/2009 - 10:26 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 10: Desperate Measures (continued)

*phew* They still aren't save but at last they killed the witch.
It's right, it was inconvenient that they could have escaped a lot earlier but now they had the time to get to know the other better. Build some trust.
And fitting A/N at the end of the chapter *ggg*

Author's Response: Witchiepoo won't be bothering them anymore :D They're out of any immediate danger, but they've got a little ways to go.

Poor Spike, the most noble thing he's ever done turned out to be the "wrong" decision *cuddles him* I felt that would be so typical a thing to happen to our favorite vamp lol But it wasn't all for naught. Under different circumstances it would have taken them a long time (if ever! lol) to get as close as they have :)

Heehee I had that song from The Wizard of Oz going through my head as I wrote the chapter :P

Thanks for the yummy reviews, ck! *smooooochies*

Reviewer: Niori Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/21/2009 - 10:22 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 10: Desperate Measures

YES! Take THAT bitch!
That made me very, very happy. Good ol' Slayer's blood- the magic cure all. Makes me oh so happy, but now I'm wondering if the other side effect is going to come into play now that the danger is over (let's face it, Spike trying to explain the aprodeshic effect would be funny).
Off to read the next chapter now (btw, lovin the two for one)

Author's Response: heehee *Joins in celebrating* I hated the witch and I'm the one who created her lol I can only imagine how relieved you are that she's gone :D

Gotta love that Slayer blood, eh? lol Spike telling her about what other effects her blood has on him (or her finding out without him having to say a word hehe) *would* be funny :P

I didn't intend to make it 2 chapters, but it wouldn't fit lol I'm going to have to split up future chapters that I post to TSR, too. It is kinda neat to have 2 updates at once :D

*huggggles*

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/21/2009 - 09:43 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 10: Desperate Measures

I thought first I missed a chapter / it was posted double :)
Oh my, this chapter was sad / not good, regarding the witch. Bittersweet spuffyness but that nasty witch. I'm convinced she gave Buffy something to sleep (in the water?).
*phew* But the chapter ended better than it started. Spike did it! But only because Buffy helped. Teamwork rules.
(PS: An author said once: And SR lets you add the story banner once and it's always there, but on EF and BSV you have to add the code to the top of each new chapter. So it seems you can use different banners for a story? Because the one in this chapter and the next one are different. *wonders*)

Author's Response: I was dismayed when I found that ch. 10 was too long. I hate it when things don't go according to plan. But it was like an extra little chapter for you guys, so I guess it's okay lol

Yay for Spuffy teamwork! :D I didn't want it to be just Spike or just Buffy that saved the day. They had to do it together, and I'm pleased with the way it worked out :)

Yep, you can change the banners for each chapter. I've got 3 different lovely banners for FFT. When I have multiple banners for a story I like to mix 'em up and give the readers different purdy pics to look at for each chapter :D

Thanks for reading & reviewing, ck! *huggs & smooches*

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/21/2009 - 08:09 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 10: Desperate Measures (continued)

Oh thank god they escaped that horrid Witchiepoo! And all along it was Buffy's blood that would have done the trick. Poor Spike thinking that even doing good he always messes up. *hugs him*

I loved it PB...the image of Spike pushing the witch in the oven is priceless.
--> He would do or suffer through anything if it meant Buffy had a chance to go on living. Yup and that's exactly what he did in S7.

Spike is such a good caretaker, I don't like Buffy thinking the Unari and this demension is the reason for her feelings for our vamp. I'm sure she'll realize it's not that. :)

That mirror is the portal isn 't it? Is the next fairytale Sleeping Beauty perhaps? Oh I can't wait to find out!

More soon pleaz! *huggles and smooochies*

Author's Response: I'm glad you dug it, AMI :D *hugs Spike too* lol Our poor Spikey always seems to have bad luck. He thought he was doing the right thing, that's what counts :)

I loved having Spike kick the witch's evil ass into the oven lol He would have preferred to beat her to a pulp first, but he settled for a quick end to it.

Mmm I just love the nurturing, caregiver side of Spike. You just know he'd be great at it :) They'll find out for sure (eventually) whether they're being influenced by the Unari, until then Buffy and Spike will have to wonder >: D

heehee You'll see in the next chapter if there's anything up with the mirror. I can't reveal where they'll end up next :P Sleeping Beauty may or may not be included heehee There are still a few more chapters in Part 1, I hope you'll enjoy!

Thank you so much for the awesome (as usual!) review, AMI! :D *Smoochies & love*

Reviewer: Sanityfair Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/21/2009 - 05:27 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 10: Desperate Measures (continued)

At long last! Can't wait to see where they go from here.

Author's Response: lol I'm going to enjoy writing Spike and Buffy being free-range again :D They'll have to puzzle out a few more things before they move on. But they'll be moving on together :)

Thanks for the review, Sanityfair! *smoochies*

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/21/2009 - 03:03 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 10: Desperate Measures (continued)

Great ending. Is Sleeping Beauty next. I think that is how Buffy will get her kiss. Plus you have that big mirror in the witches bedroom and Buffy is so tired. I can't wait for the next chapter. I am enjoying our trek through these fractured fairy tales.

Author's Response: :D Thanks, Bridget! There will be a few more chapters in Part 1, but then it'll be off to another fairy tale. I won't confirm or deny if Sleeping Beauty will be included heehee I want 'em to be a surprise for ya'll :P

Thanks for reviewing, Bridget! *hugggz*

Reviewer: callmekitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/19/2009 - 06:51 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 9: Pangs

SOOOOOOO SOOOOORRRRYYY for the delay in review! You know I read it and loved it so I guess you cant be mad :P

I love this story more and more with every chapter. Poor Spike so hungry and trapped in a cage :( An RIley... Damn I want to bitchflick him! I cant wait to see what happens to our pair, and Riley... I hope Spike kicks his ass, maybe even tosses him onto the book and shreds it with his supervampire strength,

and poor Buffy... she's been through so much... I feel for both of them.

Please post again soon! I cant wait for more!

*hugs and squishes* PB you so rock!

Author's Response: Aw that's ok, babe *hugggles* I couldn't be mad at sweet li'l you ;) Better late than never :D

I'll add your suggestions for killing Riley to the ever-growing list heehee I say it every time, but it means a lot to me that you're digging this story *hugs & squishes & twirls*

Thanks for reviewing, sweetie! And you rock pretty darn hard your own-self :P

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2009 - 06:11 am Title: Part 1, Chapter 6: Rub-A-Dub-Dub

Loved it! All you needed was a little 'bawchickawawa" in the background while he was having his bathtub fantasy! Enjoying the whole concept of this story!

Author's Response: Some porny music in the background would definitely enhance it :P lmao! Glad you're enjoying it, hon!

Thanks for reviewing, bbe! *smoochies*

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/16/2009 - 06:13 am Title: Part 1, Chapter 9: Pangs

My, those two are sure in a rough place right now. I'm glad that they at least got to touch the tip of their emotional ice burg, though I know they have many more places to go regarding their feelings. And I love all of the ways they are trying to get out still, even if they haven't succeeded. Any day now. Not too much story left before it would all be over, and I know you're not going to let it end that way. Update soon! Please...

Author's Response: I do tend to put our heroes through really rough times lol But one thing I always do in my stories, is reward the readers for having to read about sad and bad things lol I promise that the story will have a lighter tone coming soon :)

FFT Part 1 won't be over immediately after the showdown with the witch. There will be a few more chapters after that, so stay tuned :D

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Niori! Mmm yummy review *gobbles* heehee


Author's Response: lol Oops, I meant "Thanks for reading and reviewing, BuffyRat!" lol That's what happens when I respond to several reviews in one sitting *hides* Sorry, BuffyRat! The review was still delicious :P

Reviewer: Deb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/16/2009 - 12:44 am Title: Part 1, Chapter 9: Pangs

AAAARRRRRRRHHHHHGGGGGGG!! What's happened to poor Buffy!! And poor spike! I want to cry and cuddle him and kiss his boo-boos better all over and um....ahem, yes well....i'm loving this and want more please! Smoochies and huggles!

Author's Response: I know, I left them in dire circumstances :( If the chapter wasn't already super-long, I would've added more so it didn't end on such an angsty note lol But you'll see how it's resolved in the next chapter :)

heehee Yes, let's all kiss Spike's boo-boos better :P There will be quite a line for that privilege lol

Thank you for reviewing, Deb! Love ya! *smoochies*

Reviewer: Niori Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/15/2009 - 11:08 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 9: Pangs

Damn. And here I was thinking that the witch would meet her end. Since that was how she died in the fairy tale, I thought that she'd finally bite the dust. I'm out of potential ideas on how to get out. Not looking good (though, since this is part one I'm gonna go on a limb and say they eventually do get away- they better hurry too, since she wants to eat Spike tomorrow. Which is demented in my opinion- why would you want to marr the entire Spike package?)
Riley is a douche. I've probably said it before, but I feel the need to repeat it. I'm really hoping some of the hot scenes show up in the book, just so we can havbe the pleasure of his head exploding. That plus Anya's running commentary would do the trick.
I'm shocked that buffy made the first move. She's usually overboard denial girl. Well, she is sorrta in denial with looking for an explanation (I've never understood what's to explain- who doesn't want the sexiness that is Spike?).
Also nice to see her actually think for a change and not jump into the Spike is oh so bad adn tried to bite me the minute he had a chance. I like your Buffy- she uses her brain.
Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: I know it was really evil of me not to have Buffy kill the witch >:D But I do have a plan lol And I agree, the witch has to be totally insane to want to mar Spike's beauty in any way. Eating him up should be the furthest thing from any female's mind... in a literal sense, that is :P

lol It would be great if Riley's head exploded! That'd be one problem solved heehee There *will* be pictures in the book that cause some raised eyebrows (tho I can't promise actual exploding heads) hehehe

Buffy is becoming less dumb lol She's hanging onto some denial, but what she can't deny is that she does care about and needs Spike. Whether it's her own emotions or the Unari are making her feel it - she still *does* feel it right now. I know, she shouldn't need any excuse other than 'he's smokin hot!' lol And I enjoyed writing that part about her not jumping to the conclusion that Spike got zapped because he'd wanted to hurt her. Hooray, she actually learned from her similar past mistakes! lol

Thanks so much for the delicious review, Niori! *hugs & smooches*

Reviewer: Deb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/15/2009 - 07:47 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 8: Sex and Candy

Coo, gotta lurvvvvve those fantasies!! Hmmmm .......................................................where was I - oh yes, ahem! Great chapter - wish they could catch the green meanie unawares and get away though!! Smoochies!!!

Author's Response: hehehe Glad you liked the foody fantasies, Deb! :D That's the first time the food thing went that far in one of my fics (i.e. the smearing and swirling all over the other's body), but Buffy is craving Spike's body and food so I thought she'd have a happy li'l daydream about getting both :P And Spike would want to feed her if he could (while ravishing her lol), and he got a little snack in his fantasy too :P

Thanks for reviewing, sweetie! *hugggles*

Reviewer: cal Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/15/2009 - 06:11 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 9: Pangs

This chapter was so sweet when it comes to Spike and Buffy. Spike first not wanting to take any of Buffy's blood no matter how many times she offers him. Then Buffy trying to find any little animal for Spike to eat. They care about each other and are worried about the other one getting weaker. I must tell you that I was worried right along with Buffy when Spike had his eyes close and didn't reply to Buffy right away. I know he is a vampire so he can't be really dead, dead. I do think that if a vampire who didn't have any blood would eventually die. That is their food and they need it to survive. Just as a human needs food to survive and just as a human needs blood to survive at that. Not only was it a sweet chapter but we also got Spuffy kisses. I hope that our favorite couple is able to escape soon. I'm love that Anya is telling Riley off. I do love Anya.
Very cool chapter, Pagan. I need to read more though so get with the writing. Please. Much hugs and love, PB.

Author's Response: :) I'm glad you liked the Spuffy sweetness part of the chapter. I don't like having *just* the despair or badness, I like to mix in some nice stuff too lol

That's true, we don't really know what can happen to a vamp if they don't get their food - so maybe Buffy was right to be scared. But Spike isn't the 'fade away' type, he takes a lickin' and keeps on tickin' :D You know that if there's any way out of this, he's gonna find it

Thanks for sticking with me and for the yummy review, cal! *smoochies & lurve*

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/15/2009 - 03:17 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 9: Pangs

Wow !!What a fantastic chappie, Pagan! I love the Spuffy kissage. And it's nice to see that Buffy is admitting she has feelings for him, and Spike is still refusing her blood. Awww. He's so honorable and sweet.
The visual of Witchiepoo chopping up Spike into pieces until he dusts was so horrifying. Ugh, I hate that bitch. I don't know how they'll get out of this, you've done an excellent job conveying the helplessness, cause I can't think of what they can do to escape.

Riley is really losing what's left of his mind isn't he? He's a real jerk. I never liked him and I HATED him when he staked Spike with the plastic stake. Big, giant stupid bully! I hope he sees alot of Spuffyness in the book and they all laff at his stupidness, and Anya makes fun of his penis again. lol

I loved it sweetie, can't wait to see the conclusion. I hope you post soon. *huggles and lurves*

Author's Response: Thanks, AMI! :D I loved having Buffy tell Spike about her feelings, and the real kissage was fun too :P Spike is rediscovering his honorable and selfless side thanks to his feelings for Buffy. I don't think he would've batted an eye if it was Harmony he was asked to drain, for example lol But we all know that Spike and Buffy are meant for each other :D

I'm so glad and relieved that you don't think I've gone overboard with the helplessness lol But it's almost at an end - yay! There will be a few more chapters after the showdown, so it won't be over just yet ;)

Oh, Riley and the plastic stake... that made me SO mad. I actually gasped and said "Nooo!" when I saw that for the first time lol I'm gonna make him pay for that in my own way *evil laughter* Yes, he's losing his shit lol He can't handle having no control, and knowing deep down that there really is an attraction between Buffy and Spike. He'll see some things that ain't gonna help his mental state one bit :P heehee Anya can always be counted on to have no tact :D

Thanks for your awesome review, sweetie! *huggs & smooches*

Reviewer: xoChantelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/15/2009 - 07:12 am Title: Part 1, Chapter 9: Pangs

Awww, yay! They made with the smoochies! I like when they smoochies.

So, they are getting really close, having been through everything that they've been thoughtt and now Buffy can't deny the feelings that she is feeling. I hope she doesn't really belive that Unari are doing this, making them feel for each other. That would be sad.

I love how concerned they are for each other in this chapter. Spike is all concerned that he will hurt Buffy and Buffy is concerned that Spike will hurt himself or get hurt by the witch if he can't calm down. I can't help but feel hopless along with Buffy and Spike. They just lost their (might be) last chance, and now they both are at a loss for what to do =( I hope the perfect situation comes up soon. Just reading the witch dying will be soooo satisfying. He is a major bitch. Maybe she will slip on a peice of candy and break her neck... That would be fun to read, heehee!

They've grown so close, and its just such a great fic and I love it!

I want to flick Riley though. He is starting to over react to every little thing that is happening in the story, adn I'm afraid of what he is gonna do when Spike and Buffy get back with Dawn. I really hope he can understand Buffy's choice and let her be with Spike in peace. Probably woun't happen though, because Riley is a big fat buttmunch. I love how you have him acting all crazy, like something in him is snapping because he knows he is gonna lose Buffy.

He deserves to not have Buffy, the bastard lol

I can't wait for more, PB! I love love love this fic! Update sooooon!!!

*hugs and smoochies and lurve*

Author's Response: lol Yay for smoochies! :D Buffy's being less Denial Girl, but it wouldn't be Buffy if she didn't try finding a way to make it 'not her fault' that she lusts after Spike lol But it's a step in the right direction :P

I'm still giggling over the 'Riley is a big fat buttmunch' thing heehee You got it right: Riley *did* snap. Having no control over what's going on and thinking the worst is making him nutty. The Riley on the show had the potential to be that way, I just gave him the push he needed to be a crazy a*hole lol

I'm so glad you're loving the story, Chan! Thanks for the lovely review! *hugs & love & smooches*

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Date: 11/14/2009 - 07:43 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 9: Pangs

Oh kissing :))
Didn't expect Buffy to go to Spike.
I'm glad she was still thinking and not assuming Spike got hurt because he wanted to bite her.
And even if these two got nearer they still are not nearer to get away. It got worse after Spike's try to attack.
*sigh* And there I hoped Buffy would be able to trick the witch. No such luck.
Riley? He's bad news too. And the others don't suspect a thing.
Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: :P I thought I'd have Buffy finally just give in and say the things she's wanted to - and have some real kissin lol And she actually learned from her mistakes by not assuming Spike had gotten a shock from trying to bite her - it's a miracle! lol

Riley's an unstable a*hole lol And he's definitely bad news. The others will be worried about him, but not see how bad it really is.

Thanks for reading & reviewing, ck! :D *smoochies*

Reviewer: cal Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/11/2009 - 04:13 am Title: Part 1, Chapter 8: Sex and Candy

Very hot. Spike and Buffy all with the hot daydreaming. Or are they really dreaming. Dream or real life is still very hot. Buffy should just jump his bones already. I know I would. I still wonder how our blond couple is going to get out of the evil witch clutches.
Thanks PB for another fantastic chapter. I think I need to take a shower after reading this chapter. You really are a star. Lots of hugs, Pagan.

Author's Response: heehee Glad you enjoyed the 'is it real or a dream?' hotness :P Hells yeah, I don't know how Buffy ever stopped herself from jumping Spike and having her way with him lol

Aww you are so sweet, cal! *huggs* Your reviews always make me smile =D *smoochies & love*

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/09/2009 - 03:18 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 8: Sex and Candy

Hot hot hot chapter! Whew you know how to turn it on. Although I have to say the best scene is the quiet one of Spike sucking Buffy's finger. Definitely sexy. Can't wait until they finally free themselves from that witch though. Just reading about hunger like that is torturous.

Author's Response: Thanks, demona! Glad you liked! Mmhmm I do enjoy imagining the finger sucking scene - more of a subtle eroticism than smearing and eating food off of each other heehee

The next chapter is going to be rough on Spike and Buffy, it's getting down to the wire now. No more gingerbread house after ch. 10, so just hang in there a bit longer :)

Thanks for reviewing, hon! *hugggs*

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