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Reviewer: callmekitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/09/2009 - 11:00 am Title: Part 1, Chapter 8: Sex and Candy

MM mmm good. Food fetish fantasies.. GAA! Such a lovely way to share a dessert, :P

you are doing a fabulous job with this story. I wish these where the ones I heard as a kid :P oh wait. That would have just been wrong.

Heres to hoping that Buffy's prayer doesnt get answered. I cant wait for the next chapter!

*hugs and twirls PB in her naughty gingerbread house of lust*

MORE MORE MORE!



Author's Response: hehehe Sharing is caring ;)

lol We might have turned out more warped than we are if this was what he read as kids :P It means so much that you're digging the story *hugs* It would've sucked if you encouraged me to write it and then you hated it lol

How often have Buffy's prayers been answered in the past? Never ;) heehee

Thanks for the awesome review, sweetie! *twirls wiff you in the naughty gingerbread house of lust* hehehe (I looove that, btw) :P

Reviewer: Nell Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/09/2009 - 07:28 am Title: Part 1, Chapter 8: Sex and Candy

Awesome story, more please!

Author's Response: Thanks, Nell! I'm glad you're enjoying it! =D *smooch*

Reviewer: xoChantelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/09/2009 - 06:57 am Title: Part 1, Chapter 8: Sex and Candy

Ohhh, yay! More yummy smutty fantasies. I wonder when Buffy will just jump his bones? I think they both deserve a little... release lol

Grr on Witch. I despise her more and more with each chapter. I can't wait to read about her untimely (being late rather than early) demise. Muahahaha It shall be great!

More soon, I cannot wait for more!!

*hugs and smoochies*

Author's Response: hehehe I'm pleased that you liked it, Chan *hugggles* They both definitely could use and deserve a little (or big)... release :P

I really hate the witch too lol It's fun to write a cartoony villain with absolutely no redeeming qualities tho lol Spike and Buffy will need to pull out all the stops to defeat her, but it *is* possible :)

Thanks for reading & reviewing, sweetiepie! *hugs & smooches & love*

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/09/2009 - 05:45 am Title: Part 1, Chapter 8: Sex and Candy

Well, I've gotta say they are having some pretty wicked fantasies there. Not sure how either are missing how much fun the other is busy having up in their mind. And I've got to admit, being sticky really wigs me out, but those two really did have a good time of it. Perhaps you've converted me... a bit. Please, update soon. I imagine they will collide eventually. ;)

Author's Response: The only way they've missed how "effected" the other was is that they were freaked out about their own lusties heehee I had them go a little crazy with the food cos I figured that would be all Buffy wanted - food and naked Spike. Naked Spike being involved can make almost anything appealing :P

The next chapter is going to be tough for our heroes, but they will become closer

Thanks for the great review, BuffyRat! *smoochies*

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/09/2009 - 03:18 am Title: Part 1, Chapter 8: Sex and Candy

OOHHH PB, that was HOTTTT!!! Lovely, smutty, sexy daydreams.These two have got to get it on soon. *boom chica bah wah* And Buffy's were soooo naughty, even more than Spike's. ;D She must be so frustrated...ya know cause sex with Riley, just sayin'.This chappie made me hungry. lol And I don't know how Buffy can be resisting that bod for so long! Damn!!! ( I think she must be the stupidest woman on earth, giving up that sexy hunk of manly goodness)

LMAO at the thorn in the Pope's butt .

--> It was a reminder that many people need someone they can treat like shit to make themselves feel strong and superior. Yup...so true! they were guilty of that.. And especially Xander. I'm glad she apologized, it was about damn time. And they were suposed to be the good guys.:( Sheesh!

I'm gonna get down on my knees and beg you for Spuffy smut! Please, please and not just the dreams. *pouts*

Great chappie, loved it as usual!! *smooches and lurve*

Author's Response: Thanks, AMI! heehee *Bow chika bow-bow* Doesn't seem like they'll be able to keep a lid on their churning lust for much longer. Who knows, maybe God will help Buffy be strong... Nah! ;)

heehee Glad you liked the funny bits as well as the naughty ones :P And that thing about people needing to put down others, that's something that recurred to me about the Scoobies (like you said, specially Xander). Sure, Spike was a vampire who'd done evil things, but (being the "good guys") they should have been held to a higher level of conduct toward him. In contrast, I simply loved the way that the Ats crew accepted Spike, they treated and talked to him like a person :)

heehee I'll see what I can do about giving you a non-dream or fantasy roll in the hay :P

Thank you for the totally awesome review, AMI! I always look forward to reading them :D *smoochies & lurve*

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/08/2009 - 11:14 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 8: Sex and Candy

The sequels sounds cool :)
It was good to see them go along, especially Buffy apologizing too Spike.
Nasty splinter but it helped to build some trust.
Heh heh, Spike should trust his senses more. Buffy did react to his sucking. *gg*
Oh cheesecake can be really sexy. *gg*
Hot fantasies too, both of them.
Enjoyed, looking forward to more.

Author's Response: :) It's funny, Part 2 was actually the first thing I began years ago. It promises to be really cool, if the feedback I've gotten from my trusted advisors is accurate heehee I figure I'll take a little break after finishing Part 1 to write a shorter fic or two, then I'll start work in earnest on Part 2

Mmhmm this was a Spuffy getting along chapter :) After their spat in the last one, I wanted to have them being sweeter to each other. :P

Love that cheesecake - it's sinful enough by itself, but when eating it off of Spike's hot, tight bod... *spaces out for several moments* heehee

Glad you enjoyed the hotness, and thanks for reviewing, ck! *hugs & smooches*

Reviewer: Niori Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/08/2009 - 11:07 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 8: Sex and Candy

That was freaking hot. And it made me very hungry for a different reason. lol.
Great chapter. There's another couple scenes that should make it as illistrations in the book to give the Scoobies and Riley a collective heart attack- the finger sucking and the fantasies. God, that would be priceless. lol
Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: :D Thanks, Niori! Made me hungry writing it too heehee It *would* be funny if some of those steamy scenes made it into the book lol I can just see the looks on the Scoobies' faces :P

Thanks for reviewing, Niori! *huggs*

Reviewer: xaphania Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/08/2009 - 10:03 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 8: Sex and Candy

Fab chapter! Pity it's all in their minds... looking forward to more :)

Author's Response: heehee Thanks, Xaph! Yeah, it's a shame the smuttyness was only in their minds. But that may change before the story's over... ;)

Thanks for the review, sweetie! *Smoochies*

Reviewer: gopher101 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/08/2009 - 08:35 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 8: Sex and Candy

I was thinking, I want some smut. Than, wow, Buffy has a dirty, porny mind.

Are those magical pastries or something? Did the nuns bake them?

It is the same review (I reviewed at EF first)

Author's Response: heehee Thanks for reviewing twice, gopher! :D I lol'd at the nun thing - so funny! hehehe

*Smoochies & Hugs*

Reviewer: xaphania Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/07/2009 - 02:31 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 7: Never Leave Me

Aww, sweet ending to this chapter. I'm glad they made up, even if they're still in the witch's clutches. I still can't see how they're going to escape, but there must be a way...

Looking forward to more :)

Author's Response: Glad you liked it, Xaph :) It probably would've taken Spike and Buffy weeks to get past that kind of thing (if they ever did) back in the real world. But they had no choice but to be around each other and talk it out. So, being trapped can be beneficial in some ways lol

There *is* a way for them to escape, they just haven't sussed it out yet. They'll be saying "D'oh!" lol

Thanks for the sweet review, Xaph! *smoochies & hugs*

Reviewer: Deb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/04/2009 - 12:15 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 7: Never Leave Me

Oooo - I can't bear it! I can't stand it when they fall out, so glad they made up!! Hope they come up with a plan to get away from the evil witch soon!! Can't wait for more! Smoochies!!

Author's Response: Their new, more understanding relationship was strained for a bit, but they did get back on track in the end :) It's getting closer to the time when they'll have to do something drastic - but first, a bit of fun ;) Hope you like the next chapter too

Thanks for reviewing, Deb! *smoochies*

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/04/2009 - 07:51 am Title: Part 1, Chapter 7: Never Leave Me

That Wicked Willow is something else. I do hope that soon they figure out how to best that witch. I love the way their relationship is growing, but It seems like there's just no way out for them. I will continue to hope escape is just around the corner. Just gonna keep waiting patiently... So loving it, though. Update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks for being patient, hon :) Hang in there a bit longer. It's always darkest before the dawn, as they say :) There *is* a way for them to get out of the badness, they just have to figure it out.

Thanks for the review, BuffyRat! *huggz*

Reviewer: Hettie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2009 - 04:23 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 7: Never Leave Me

write MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE

Author's Response: heehee Thanks for the enthusiastic review, Hettie! :D Another update is coming (hopefully) on Saturday *smooches*

Reviewer: lynn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2009 - 12:58 am Title: Chapter 1: Once Upon A Time...

I love this. It's fun and funny. Can't wait to see what fairy tales they'll get stuck in and how they'll get outta them.

Author's Response: :D Thanks, lynn! It was such an interesting idea to me to dump them into fairy tales. I've got a bunch of tales I'd like to have Buffy and Spike work their way through :)

Glad you're enjoying, and thank you for the cool review! *smoochies*

Reviewer: Niori Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/31/2009 - 09:44 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 7: Never Leave Me

Happy Halloween (I'm wishing everyone that)!
Great chapter. Spike is so awesome- royally pissed off at Buffy and still doing all that he can to protect her. And she actually appreciates it for once.
God I hope the witch bites the dust soon.
BTW, I find it hilarious that Dawn gets sucked in she bercomes princess Dawn, and Spike and Buffy are appitizers for a witch. That just sucks.
Anyway, can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Isn't Spike a big ol' pussycat? He is, at least when it comes to the woman he loves. He wanted to stay mad at her, but he just loves her too darn much :) And Buffy really does appreciate it this time, she's seeing what a great guy Spike can be.

Lmao about Dawn being a princess and them being appetizers :P She's off in another story living it up while they're struggling. Not fair lol Thanks for reading & reviewing, Niori! *hugs & smooches* Hope you had a fun holiday :D

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/31/2009 - 07:03 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 7: Never Leave Me

Great chappie PB. Poor Spike, he was so upset when he found out Buffy tried to esape without him, That was a stupid thing to do, he was right to be mad. At least Buffy was genuinely sorry. I'm glad they got over it and are on the right track again. That line about Riley being there was low. Stupid Buffy. Loved Spike's line about Riley being a doormat and the doormat having more of a personality and a better conversationalist. LMAO.

The end was sweet. I liked Spike singing "Early One Morning." Our poor vamp loved his mom so much. *hugs Spike*

This had me LOL--> "Did you hope to round up some woodland buddies to help rescue me--such as a wisecracking racoon or perhaps a mentally-challenged squirrel?" OMG, I laffed for a minute I swear. Where do you come up with this stuff? You're a genius at smut and comedy PB.

Can't wait for the next chappie. *smooches and luv*

Author's Response: Buffy trying to get away without him was a shitty thing to do, not that she thought it out tho, she panicked - and then saying that thing about Riley made it worse. She really is dumb sometimes lol But they're on track again so Yay :D

*Joins you in hugging Spike* heehee I had to have him do that song *dreamy sigh*

hehehe I'm glad you got a good laugh from that one line :P I was giggling when I thought it up :D

I loved your awesome review, as I always do *smooches & luv back at ya* Thanks, sweetie! :D

Reviewer: sanityfair Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/31/2009 - 02:22 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 7: Never Leave Me

Thanks for another chapter. Poor guys. I know you''ve said they won't escape her until chapter 10. I can't imagine all the horrid things she has in store until then.

Author's Response: Hang in there *hugs* I know it can be tough to read (and write!) about our heroes going through that kind of badness. They do have to deal with more unpleasantness before ch. 10, but there will be some nice moments in between the bad :)

Thanks for the review, sanityfair! *smooooches*

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/31/2009 - 12:09 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 7: Never Leave Me

Not a nice way to be woken up (naked Spike would be so much nicer *gg*).
What a miss they are in; I feared the worst when Buffy tried to run away (Spike's reaction) because yeah, running away would have had him stay behind. And being punished, he's right about that. Glad to see that they are still working as a team.
PS: What I always wanted to ask: " Part 1 " it says, does that mean you're planning more sequels to this story or different fairy tales? *just curious*
And Happy Halloween to you too!

Author's Response: lol Oh yes, a naked Spike would be a much more pleasant way to be woken up :P They had a little lapse in their courtesy to each other, but they're back on track now :)

I am planning a bunch of sequels :) Part 1 is the Hansel & Gretel story, and Part 2 will be another fairy tale - I won't say which one/ones yet, I want it to be a surprise heehee It will take several stories before either of them get to where Dawn is lol But I hope it'll be a cool, wild ride for you guys :D

Thank you for the wonderful review, ck! *smoochies*

Reviewer: callmekitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/31/2009 - 10:23 am Title: Part 1, Chapter 7: Never Leave Me

Favorite line:
such as a wisecracking raccoon or perhaps a mentally-challenged squirrel

lmao!

another great chapter, PB. You have to know how inspired by these words I truly am. *sigh* You are a genius when it comes to torture :P

I feel so bad for these two, but the snuggly wuggly thoughts make up for it ;)

Keep up the fabu writing! who know, maybe I will write something for you again someday LOL. *Smooches and twirls round in the evil genius that is you*

Author's Response: I giggled when I came up with that line hehehe Glad you dug it too :D

I know I'm abusing our favorite twosome a lot, cos I'm evil >:D But they're getting closer than they would have if they were free-range Spuffy lol And I'm glad you found some inspiration in the chapter :P ;)

*smooch smooch smooch* You fill in for my muse when it tries hiding from me lol I wouldn't be writing this story if it weren't for you :D Since I'm your #1 fan an' all, I'll be wishing real hard that I have more yummy Kitten Krack-y goodness soon! heehee Thanks for reviewing, Kitten!

Reviewer: Deb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/29/2009 - 01:38 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 6: Rub-A-Dub-Dub

Great chapter! Good and hot- could have done without Sting though!! - Probably because I know him...anyway here's hoping they can get away from the evil witch soon!!

Author's Response: lol Wowzers, you know the Stinger? I so would've jumped his bones back in the day :P

Glad you enjoyed the hotness of bathtime :D Thanks for reviewing, sweetie! *hugggles*

Reviewer: Deb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/29/2009 - 01:14 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 5: Toil & Trouble

Love it that they're getting along better now and Buffy trusts Spike some. But how will they get away from the evil witch? Can't wait for more, so off to next chapter!!!

Author's Response: :) Glad you liked it, Deb! Mmhmm they're learning to get along and liking each other a bit more, that's of the good :D But they're still in the witch's clutches - they gotta work on that lol

Thanks for reading & reviewing, Deb! *smoochies & lurve*

Reviewer: cal Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/28/2009 - 12:57 am Title: Part 1, Chapter 6: Rub-A-Dub-Dub

I don't know if the Spuffy sex was just a dream or what. If I had to guess I think they really did sleep together but something is messing with their minds. I think this is a record for you though. It took 6 chapters until there was Spuffy sex whether they really had sex or not. I think that is a record for you. I could be wrong though. Not that I'm complaining because I can enjoy both hot sex stories and non-sex stories pretty much the same. I don't mind either one just as long as it is a well written story which this is. Oh, I love the part where Buffy was looking at Spike taking off his clothes and wanting to see how big he was. I would probably look too. He is hot. LOL
Thanks for the good read. Reading a new chapter from this story always makes me feel better, Pagan. hugs and kisses

Author's Response: LOL You may be right about it being a record for me, cal :D This time around, I'm trying for a story with some hot smut instead of hot smut with a little bit of story :P

heehee Who can blame Buffy for wanting a peek at nekkid Spike? I definitely would have, but then I'm much naughtier than Buffy lol

Thanks for the wonderful review, cal! *hugs & kisses & lurve*

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2009 - 02:06 am Title: Part 1, Chapter 6: Rub-A-Dub-Dub

Love sexy bath time. Surprised that they didn't get water all over the floor and get the witch all kinds of upset... but I'm glad that they didn't. Still thinking all the lustiness has something to do with all that bubble bath...

Great chapter. Please, update soon.

Author's Response: heehee If they'd done what they were fantasizing about, the floor definitely would've gotten wet :P Good theory about the bubble bath! I ain't sayin' if it's true or not yet lol

Glad you enjoyed, BuffyRat! Thanks for reviewing! *smoochies*

Reviewer: xaphania Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/25/2009 - 09:56 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 6: Rub-A-Dub-Dub

Heehee, fun bath time with Spuffy. Loved the chapter!

Author's Response: :P Glad you liked the bathtime fun, xaph! heehee *smoochies & love*

Author's Response: :P Glad you liked the bathtime fun, xaph! heehee *smoochies & love*

Reviewer: xaphania Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/25/2009 - 12:20 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 5: Toil & Trouble

Hee, great chapter. Still can't work out how they're going to get away from the witch, hope they figure it out soon.

Author's Response: :D Thanks, Xaph! Spike and Buffy will keep on trying to find a way to escape. They missed something (which they'll figure out later and say "D'oh!" lol) but they'll have another chance :)

Thanks for reviewing, sweetie! *hugggles and smoochies*

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