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Reviewer: xoChantelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/25/2009 - 03:26 am Title: Part 1, Chapter 6: Rub-A-Dub-Dub

Ahhh! PB!!! *pouts* They should have really experienced that together =P

Great great greaaaatt chapter! I adored it! Thank God the witch tlet them take a bath; even if the thought behind it is evil lol. Buffy and Spike got the actual good part, if you ask me. I hope that they get out soon though, I don't want them to be tortured by stupid witch bitch any more =(

Can't wait for more, hon!!

*huggles and smoochies and lurve!*

Author's Response: lol I know, I'm evil >:-D But it's too soon for that sort of thing lol Buffy still has some anti-Spike lusting issues to work thru :P

Spike and Buffy got a little niceness out of the situation with the baths, at least lol They're both randy li'l things, ain't they? heehee There's going to be some further rough treatment by the witch - I know it's tough to have them go through that stuff. But it *does* bring them closer together :)

Thanks for the yummy review, Chan! *smoochies & lurve*

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2009 - 09:32 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 6: Rub-A-Dub-Dub

OOOH HOT, SPUFFY BATH SMUT!! Loved it PB! Too bad it was all a dream/fantasy. Or was it? Cause they were both fantasizing the same thing. Did Witchiepoo put something in the bubble bath? Hmmmm .
Pervy Withchiepoo wanting to see Spike's naughty bits. lol And Buffy's reaction on seeing the shadow of Spike's penis was too funny.
I like how they're getting along better now and Buffy's thoughts about what she wants in a man. Duh Buffy it's Spike of course. :)

Loved Spike singing to her and the new song he sang. Awww!

This is a great story , I can wait for le smut cause this makes sense . I like the sense of trust you're building.

LOVE, LOVE IT!!! Can't wait for the next update. *smooches and lurve*

Author's Response: Thanks, AMI! Glad you enjoyed the chapter :D lol It is a bit of a coincidence that they both fantasized the same thing, eh? More about that later ;)

Spike was putting on a shadow puppet show for Buffy without knowing it heehee

Exactly. Silly Buffy just doesn't realize that Spike is her perfect mate. But her eyes just might get opened ;)

Thank you so much for the kewl review! *smoochies & love*


Author's Response: Thanks, AMI! Glad you enjoyed the chapter :D lol It is a bit of a coincidence that they both fantasized the same thing, eh? More about that later ;)

Spike was putting on a shadow puppet show for Buffy without knowing it heehee

Exactly. Silly Buffy just doesn't realize that Spike is her perfect mate. But her eyes just might get opened ;)

Thank you so much for the kewl review! *smoochies & love*

Reviewer: Niori Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2009 - 08:56 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 6: Rub-A-Dub-Dub

Now THAT'S one hell of a fantasy. Since they both had the same one, I'm going to assume there's more to it than just an excuse for some hot spuffy lovin'.
Oh, do you know how absolutely perfect it would be if that was one of the scenes that showed up in the book? Hell, even just the washing each others back. I think that everyone back home's heads might explode. Except Anya...she'd wish them plenty of organsms.


Author's Response: heehee It *would* be fun if a picture of bathtime appeared in the book ;) You're right, I'm sure Anya would be cheering them on lol Though, Riley might go on a killing spree lol

It is interesting that they both had pretty much the same fantasy. I'll have more about that in future chapters :)

Thanks for reviewing, Niori! *huggz*


Author's Response: heehee It *would* be fun if a picture of bathtime appeared in the book ;) You're right, I'm sure Anya would be cheering them on lol Though, Riley might go on a killing spree lol

It is interesting that they both had pretty much the same fantasy. I'll have more about that in future chapters :)

Thanks for reviewing, Niori! *huggz*


Author's Response: heehee It *would* be fun if a picture of bathtime appeared in the book ;) You're right, I'm sure Anya would be cheering them on lol Though, Riley might go on a killing spree lol

It is interesting that they both had pretty much the same fantasy. I'll have more about that in future chapters :)

Thanks for reviewing, Niori! *huggz*

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2009 - 06:11 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 6: Rub-A-Dub-Dub

Wow, two chapters today? Even more to read. :)
Argh.. not a good reason to bath.
But the bath time was nice. That the screen made it able to see a shadow, too. ;)
Hot dream Spike had; I thought first it was real. But! After Buffy's reaction I wonder if she had the same 'dream'. Or was it real? Oh yeah, Buffy had the same dream. Sounds as if it was real, huh? At last for them.

Author's Response: I don't know what's up with TSR today. I had to delete a duplicate chapter twice! Hopefully the problem is taken care of now :)

Glad you enjoyed bathtime :) Finally some happy Spuffy groiny-ness :P Was it real or Memorex? heehee You're right, it was real enough to them, that's what counts. And that won't be the last time they get an attack of the lusties ;)

Thanks for reading and reviewing, ck! *smoochies and hugz*

Reviewer: CallMeKitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2009 - 05:25 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 6: Rub-A-Dub-Dub

I think I steamed up my lappy screen! Such a hot fantasy. You did a fine job with these two, working their way to this and their budding relationship. It should be very interesting to see where it goes from here.

Spike had been in a happy little world all his own, having a red-hot fantasy about a bathtub boff with Buffy. He snapped back to reality, surprised and confused. He wasn't in the tub with her, he was still on his knees behind her, washing her back. His hand was slowly jacking his cock of the last few drops of cum, the rest being splattered on the back of the tub.

His eyes wide, he thought, 'Bloody hell! What's wrong with me!?'
OMG I THOUGHT I WOULD DIE LAUGHING! MEN!

I do so love the yummy pictures of Sting too. Awesome! Cant wait for more of the fairy tale fantasy fun you have for us. *hugs and squishes wiff lurve*

Author's Response: *giggles* Yay! I'm glad you liked the bathtime fun! :D heehee Poor confused Spike :P Yes, Spike and Buffy will be thinking of each other a bit differently now. Buffy's starting to see how very much she likey him too :P

Mmm Sting did look so yummy in those pics. It's even more fun to picture Spike in that codpiece heehee Thanks for suggesting including the piccies, sweetie! *smoochies* And, as always, thank you for the awesome review! *hugs & twirls*

Reviewer: jackson Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/19/2009 - 04:55 am Title: Part 1, Chapter 2: Into the Woods

great story so far looking forward to more

Author's Response: Thanks, Jackson! Glad you're enjoying! :D *smooches*

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/19/2009 - 04:31 am Title: Part 1, Chapter 5: Toil & Trouble

Love the growing trust between Buffy and Spike. And the growing instability of Riley. Hope they best that witch soon. She's a pretty big drag.

Author's Response: Thank you for getting that it's about Spike and Buffy learning to trust and seeing that they care about each other *hugs & squishes* I hope you'll stick with the story as I explore more of those Spuffy feelings rising to the surface :P And Riley losing his shit is fun to write heehee

Thanks for reviewing, BuffyRat! *smoochies*

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2009 - 11:46 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 4: Crime and Punishment

Boy, I'm thinking I know why the Inari didn't want Riley through that porthole. Not a very nice guy this time around. Hope that Buffy and Spike can hang in there and pull through.

Author's Response: Maybe the Unari did see that Riley would get flaky lol Or maybe they just had good taste, as Spike surmised ;) Riley's an a*hole heehee

Buffy and Spike are both very strong-willed people, they're hanging tough :)

Thanks for reviewing, BuffyRat! *smoochies*

Reviewer: xoChantelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2009 - 06:41 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 5: Toil & Trouble

lol the thought of seeing Riley's penis actually made me cringe. I was definitely not wanting to read that, lol.

Stupid Wicked Willow, with the invisible forcefield around her and her property. She's the one with every centimeter in her body being evil. I really hope she dies bloody.

I was thinking that the sun wasn't going to affect Spike in this dimension and she would punish him for being a liar. Good thing (sorta) that it worked. I don't want to see Spike get hurt anymore. Maybe she will come back with some animal blood for Spike to get all flubbery on. I don't know why she wants him all fat lol wouldn't she rather the meat than the fat? Meh, maybe she is just disgusting like that lol.

Can't wait for more! Update soon.

*hugs and lurve*

Author's Response: lol I subjected you guys to having to read about Riley sporting a stiffy before, so I couldn't, in good conscience, have him do the Full Monty. There *will* be some Spike stiffys in the future as a way of me making amends to y'all :P heehee

lol I know what you mean about the witch wanting Spike to get fat. Seems like she'd be happier with lean meat *shrugs* lol Buffy and Spike did miss an opportunity to get away, they won't figure it out until later.

I'm glad you're enjoying the ride, Chan :) The main thing I want to accomplish by having this scenario last so long is Buffy and Spike realizing that their feelings for each other go much deeper than they thought possible :)

Thanks for reviewing, sweetie! *hugs & lurve*

Reviewer: xoChantelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2009 - 05:59 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 4: Crime and Punishment

heehee, or maybe the thought of being in Spike's personal space is what is giving him a hard-on lol.

I don't like Wicked Willow. She is being mean to Spike and Buffy. I hope they kill her in a very painful way in the next chapter.

Love this so far, now off to next chapter!

*smooochieesss*

Author's Response: Hey, Chan! *hugs* Lol and Eww about Riley being secretly hot for Spike! Although... it is an interesting idea :P

Yep, Wicked Willow is nasty and sure does need a killin'. Wait 'n see how (and if!) they can get 'er done heehee

Thanks for the review, Chan! *hugs & smoochies*

Reviewer: cal Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2009 - 12:56 am Title: Part 1, Chapter 5: Toil & Trouble

I'm wondering how Spike and Buffy are going to get out of this mess. Spike is getting weaker by the day from not having any blood and with his messed up hand. Buffy isn't really eating that much and doing a lot of physical work so she must be feeling weaker too. If they don't get out soon then I'm afraid they are going to be too weak to do anything. I love that Spike didn't take any of Buffy's blood. He is proving to Buffy that he cares and that she can trust him. I felt bad for Spike when the evil witch put Spike's hand in the sun. Then she wanted to take a bite of his hand. Gross much. I do hope that Spike and Buffy think of something soon to get out of there. I got a good laugh at Anya going on about how big Spike's package is and how small Riley must be. Riley getting mad to the point where he was going to whip it out. Too funny. I love Anya at least she can openly admit that Spike is hot. I think Giles is right. I think Riley is cracking up.
Thanks for another wonderful chapter, PB. You never disappoint me. I did have to read this chapter twice because the first time I read it I was just too tired. But I need more please. Please Pagan. hugs and kisses

Author's Response: *hugs Cal* I'm happy you're still digging the story :D

Spike and Buffy missed a chance or two to get away, which they won't find out about until later. They're going to start feeling pretty hopeless, but those two aren't the types that give up :)

heehee Anya made Riley snap - he stopped before he made a total fool out of himself though (and prove her theory correct) lol

Love ya, Cal! Thanks for reviewing *smooochies & lurve*

Reviewer: Niori Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/17/2009 - 09:37 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 5: Toil & Trouble

*snicker* I love Anya. That was epic. It had me laughing out loud.
Damn! I was hoping the axe would work. The wtich is seriously starting to irritate me- I hope Buffy and Spike off her soon.
Anyway, can't wait until the next chapter.

Author's Response: heehee I love Anya too! Glad I gave you a chuckle :D

That was mean of me - to have the axe attack not work *hides* But I've got lots more Spike and Buffy getting closer moments ahead, and had to have them stay put a while longer lol

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Niori! *smooches*

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/17/2009 - 08:01 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 5: Toil & Trouble

Oh boy PB it's getting really bad for our duo. I don't see how they can get out of this. I liked Spike refusing to drink from Buffy when Witchiepoo ordered him to. She knows she can trust him now. And they're still bitching at each other. :( They gotta stop and concentrate on a plan.

Loved the scene at the Magic Box.
Anya is so funny, I love her. --> She'd never pass up a chance to see a penis. LMAO

You shoulda had No dick drop his pants(even tho the thought is horrifying *shudders*) just to prove how inadequate he really is and so we could all have a good laff at his expense. LOL And Buffy not thinking about Riley at all really says alot. Think Buffy,for God's sake.

LOVED it Pagan, can't wait to see what you come up with for the next update. :)





Author's Response: Glad you're still enjoying, AMI! Some people are tired of the way I'm writing the story. So it's wonderful to know you're still into it :D

Buffy and Spike will be getting along better in the next chapter :) Yay for them lol

It was fun writing that Magic Box scene with Anya heehee I considered letting Riley whip it out, but I just couldn't *shudders* lol

Thanks for the awesome review, AMI! It made me smile =D After getting some less than stellar review, I really needed one like yours *hugs & smoochies*

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/17/2009 - 02:13 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 5: Toil & Trouble

Buffy doesn't get treated well.... Too bad there's another spell now. It doesn't seem likely for them to get away.
Ah then there is an oven there.
That Riley slipped Buffy's mind, she really should think about this fact. *g*
I hoped that Spike could wander in the world without being hurt; but it seems the sunlight can hurt him there too.
Till next time! Looking forward to read more. Not a good place where Buffy and Spike are now.

Author's Response: heehee I enjoyed writing that convo where Buffy forgot about Riley :P Cos, puh-leese, no way can Riley measure up to Angel - or Spike, of course ;)

Yeah, things look pretty bad for Buffy and Spike at the mo'. It'll get worse before it gets better. I hope you'll bear with me *hugs* :)

Thanks for reading & reviewing, ck! *smoochies & hugs*


Author's Response: heehee I enjoyed writing that convo where Buffy forgot about Riley :P Cos, puh-leese, no way can Riley measure up to Angel - or Spike, of course ;)

Yeah, things look pretty bad for Buffy and Spike at the mo'. It'll get worse before it gets better. I hope you'll bear with me *hugs* :)

Thanks for reading & reviewing, ck! *smoochies & hugs*

Reviewer: CallMeKitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/17/2009 - 10:04 am Title: Part 1, Chapter 5: Toil & Trouble

Let me start with Anya never passing up the chance to see a penis! LMAO =))

Riley... I just want to smack him. You do a great Riley/ Oh wait. That sounded terrible, but yo know what I mean.

Spike is too sweet. Refusing to feed from Buffy even knowing all is going down hill. Wonder how long he will really be able to hold out.

Buffy took a chance at that witch, but it didnt pay off. Damnit. I hope they figure out something soon :( I am so worried about both of them.

Love Spike singing and his song choices are awesome. They fit so perfect.

Giles' line about Riley made me laugh. Yes, please find him some busy work! hahahaha

Well done, PB! Just another notch in your belt for this amazing piece of fanfic! You are so rockin the fairy tales! *smooooooch*

Author's Response: *tackles and hugs* I do so love your reviews :D

Riley sucks lol I'm using this situation to bring out the pettiness and ugliness you just know was inside him. *flicks him*

Glad you like Spike's songs too :D I just love the thought of him singing for Buffy. And Spike refusing to take Buffy's blood is a big turning point in their relationship ;)

Thanks for the awesome review, Kitten! *smoochies and mucho love*

Reviewer: Andy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/16/2009 - 01:04 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 4: Crime and Punishment

ARGHHHH! I'd have thought they'd have been free by now! They're really fed up - or not - if you get my drift - they'll be getting too weak to do anything! I love this - looking forward to the next chapter...Snogs face off Pagan!! SNOG SNOG SNOG!!! Teehee!! XXXXXXX

Author's Response: Their prison experience is going to last several chapters longer - I hope you'll bear with me lol I don't want it to get boring, but the story wanted to be told a certain way :) Fed up - heehee - nice one :P

Thanks for the review, Andy! *snog snog snog* heehee :D

Reviewer: Deb (LoobyLoo) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/16/2009 - 12:59 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 4: Crime and Punishment

Oh dear! Oh dear oh dear oh dear! Buffy and spike are in a pickle aren't they! Anf getting weaker all the time too...not that the evil witch will believe them either. Here's hoping they come up with a plan soon to get free! - Oh dear!!
Smoochies and hugs XXXX

Author's Response: Hi Deb! *smooches* Yep, our heroes are in big trouble. But they're pretty tough, and getting along better. If anyone stands a chance it's them :) Riley would be toast if he was the one who went through the portal with Buffy heehee

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Deb! *smoochies & lurve*

Reviewer: Niori Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/15/2009 - 01:39 am Title: Part 1, Chapter 4: Crime and Punishment

I'm really enjoying this story. I love how you've moulded the fairy tale (can't wait to see what other ones you use). And Spike in laderhosen makes me giggle- if there's one person in the world that could look hot in them, it's him.
Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thanks, Niori! I'm happy that you're digging the story :D I'm having a good time writing it too. I've got some fun and interesting fairy tales planned for future Parts. I wish I had a clone to help me write so I could get to them faster! lol

Oh yeah, you gotta love Spike in lederhosen heehee He would definitely look hot lol You got that right :P

Thank you for the review, I loved reading it! *smoooches*

Reviewer: cal Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/12/2009 - 03:16 am Title: Part 1, Chapter 4: Crime and Punishment

The evil witch needs to be put down. Spike and Buffy are having a hard time thinking of a way out of there. At least they are working together now. They need to if they want to get past look alike Willow. Spike is being all sweet to Buffy. Offering her his food. Singing to her when he knew she had trouble falling asleep. Only if Spike can sing me to sleep. I would like that very much.
I'm really enjoying this story so much. Not that I'm surprise since the writer is very talented. I want to know how Spike and Buffy manages to escape. So get with the writing, Pagan. Do I need to take out my whip?I hope that you are doing well. That life is good for you right now. Sending you lots of hugs, take care sweetie.

Author's Response: Hey, cal! *hugs* Aww you're so sweet :D I'm glad you're enjoying! Mmhmm Spike is being a sweetiepie. I'd love a bedtime serenade by Spike too heehee Buffy and Spike will be tested to their limits - good thing they're such tough people!

The next chapter will be up today. I got you crackin that whip in my mind lol I'm making some good progress too! lol

Thanks for reviewing, cal! *sending lots o' hugs & smoochies right back at ya* :D


Author's Response: Hey, cal! *hugs* Aww you're so sweet :D I'm glad you're enjoying! Mmhmm Spike is being a sweetiepie. I'd love a bedtime serenade by Spike too heehee Buffy and Spike will be tested to their limits - good thing they're such tough people!

The next chapter will be up today. I got you crackin that whip in my mind lol I'm making some good progress too! lol

Thanks for reviewing, cal! *sending lots o' hugs & smoochies right back at ya* :D

Reviewer: xaphania Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2009 - 10:57 am Title: Part 1, Chapter 4: Crime and Punishment

Aww, Spike singing so Buffy would relax was sweet. Still wondering how they're going to get away from the witch, though.

The thought of killing Spike was so pleasurable, it was actually giving him a hard-on.

Ew, Riley's gross. And Anya's babblings about comparing Spike and Riley were very funny :D

Great chapter!

Author's Response: I loved the singing part too. So nice to imagine it :) Spike and Buffy have some tough times ahead of them.

I'm sorry 'bout Riley having a boner lol I hope you weren't too traumatized *hugs* It's always fun to write Anya dialogue, especially when it's about how hot Spike is :P heehee

Thanks for reading and reviewing, xaph! *hugggles and smooches*

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2009 - 11:07 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 4: Crime and Punishment

Great chappie PB. It's good that they're finally gonna work together...it's about time. Buffy better get over not wanting to kill Witchipoo cause she looks like Willow. That's just dumb. Can you please have her die a painful, horrible death? HATE her so much. My fave part was Spike singing to Buffy. Awww, that was so sweet. They are both realizing they care for each other, even if they won't admit it out loud. heehee. I liked how you alluded to Spike's trigger in S7 when he was thinking about the song his mom sang to him. Poor Spike. I don't know how people can say Spike couldn't love after watching that epi. It was so obvious he loved his mom even after her was turned, unlike Angelus. Stupid Spike haters.

Now the Scoobies can see what's going on too. I'm guessing they'll have a show soon , Hopefully Riley will be there when S/B get with the Spuffy Smut. LOL. Pleas,pleas have Anya talk about Spike's package in front of Riley. so his little penis can shrink even more. LOL.
It's a good thing I lurve ya PB, cause that last line about Riley's hard-on has traumatized me for the rest of the night. * goes lookin for steel wool to erase that image from my brain* I wonder if the writers or Joss actually thought that the audience thought Riley was sexy or hot? Yeah...they are kinda dumb sometimes so they probably did. That's why we got almost 2 seasons of the idiot. Can you tell I really despise Riley? Stupid Spike hating jerk.

Anywho, I loved it as usual can't wait for more!!!* hugs & smoochies*

Author's Response: Thanks, AMI! =D I'm glad you liked the singin' Spike part heehee I just get all mushy thinking about it :P They are realizing that they care more about each other than they'd imagined. And (if it goes well) they'll get closer to admitting it to each other :P

hehehehe Riley and his tiny weiner, so sad :D After I read your review, I decided to insert a Magic Box scene in the next chapter - you'll like it, methinks ;) Oh, I am so regretting having that line about Riley at the end of the chapter lol I'm so sorry *hugs, and strokes your hair soothingly* Speaking of hard-ons (lol) Marti Noxon had a huge one for Riley, thus why we were subjected to the git. We're united in our hating of Riley, and our lurve of Spike heehee

Thanks for the awesome review, sweetie! *smoochies and lurve*

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2009 - 06:03 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 4: Crime and Punishment

Good to see an update :)
If Buffy can't eat they have to hurry to think of a plan that will function too. And this witch is really strong.
Crab-shells? A human can't eat that. The witch is crazy, given Spike human food and Buffy non of it (I think that are only shells or?).
So sweet when Spike sung to Buffy.
The Scoobies think Buffy and Spike are save? If they only knew...
~ I really hope they manage to trick that witch soon.

Author's Response: Sorry it took so long to update, ck. My beta was moving and it took her longer than expected.

There might be a little crab meat left in the shells that Buffy can scrape out - still gross though lol Mmhmm, I loved the thought of Spike singing to make Buffy feel better *dreamy sigh* The Scoobies won't know what's going on with Spike and Buffy for a while yet, but I expect they'll be appropriately horrified - especially poor Willow :(

Thank you for reviewing, ck! *snogs* :D

Reviewer: sanityfair Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2009 - 03:37 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 4: Crime and Punishment

Oh my, whenever ,and however will they escape the witches evil clutches.

Author's Response: Their chances don't look too good at the moment. But never give up on the power of Spuffy lol There's not much they can't do when they're united - they need to work on the uniting thing ;)

Thanks for the review, sanityfair! :D *smoochies*

Reviewer: CallMeKitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2009 - 12:11 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 4: Crime and Punishment

"Holy Oktoberfest!"

Anya whistled. "Check out the unit on him; he's really packed into those shorts. I wouldn't mind blowing his Alpine horn..." LMAO! Ricooooooolaaaa!

Poor Buffy and her crabshells *giggles* I love the relationship exploration within this chapter. Its sweet to see them in a tough situation.

Now the evil Willow!Witch, *bitchflicks her* They better figure out how to escape.. and soon. I am so worried about them both.

Riley is so disgusting wiff his hard on. *vomits on him* wait. He might cum with that. nevermind. *giggles*

can't wait for next update to this oh so fab fairy tale *hugs and twirls*

and still loving that banner!

Author's Response: hehehe *hugs and twirls* I'm sooo happy that you're pleased with the story! =D

Author's Response: Wtf...? TSR ate most of my response *flicks it* Okay here's the rest of what I wanted to say:

I'm glad that you're loving the funny as well as them getting more comfy wiff each other :P Mmm, crab-shells heehee

Oh I'm sorry 'bout the Riley boner line lol Bad note to end a chapter on, now that I think about it! I'll try to update soon to get that image out of your head heehee

Thanks for reviewing, Kitten! *slobbers on you* :P


Author's Response: Wtf...? TSR ate most of my response *flicks it* Okay here's the rest of what I wanted to say:

I'm glad that you're loving the funny as well as them getting more comfy wiff each other :P Mmm, crab-shells heehee

Oh I'm sorry 'bout the Riley boner line lol Bad note to end a chapter on, now that I think about it! I'll try to update soon to get that image out of your head heehee

Thanks for reviewing, Kitten! *slobbers on you* :P

Reviewer: laura_exist2inspire Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/01/2009 - 02:39 am Title: Part 1, Chapter 3: Out of the Frying Pan...

Ooooo how are they going to escape? Looking forward to more =D

Author's Response: It don't look too good for them right now, does it? They might just have to learn to work as a team to get out of the jam they're in - and that means 'stop fighting with each other!' lol :)

Thanks for reading & reviewing, Laura! I loves reviews :D *smoochies*

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