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Reviewer: Spikelissa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2009 - 03:23 am Title: Part 1, Chapter 2: Into the Woods

Ricolllllllllllllaaaaaaaa. I can totally see it LMAO!!!!! Ok can I just say Buffy you are a PERV!!!!!!! You want him just as badly as he wants you stop with the DENILE!

I LOVED your comment you had Spike saying about having 20 minions under him...I think I got light headed from laughing so hard when I read how Buffy's mind still went to the gutter....

Weird how all are friend like and how Buffy thinks this is gonna be a piece of cake. MMMM cake lol. Her superior complex has an inferior complex too...God she infuriates me! She can never let anyone except Angel and his blah blah soul ever be considered. God I can't wait til she gets this shoved up the stake already lodged in her ass! LOVE this update...more soon god I was so lovin this chapter! Definitely more! *Hey sexy more for us all* Winks and grins...beckons you some more...Pretty please moreeeee! ;) Can't wait for another update PB!

Author's Response: I'm very fond of the Ricolla thing, I'm glad you found it amusing too heehee Buffy was the one thinking pervy thoughts this time - the 20 minions thing, checking out his package and butt in the woods, etc.

You got the Buffy thing right: she thought she knew best and didn't listen to Spike's opinion. In her mind, she's in charge and he's just along for the ride. She'll have to get a bit more humble in ch. 3 and take Spike and his advice seriously.

heehee You asked so nicely for more, I'm workin' on it :) Thanks for the sweet review, Lissa! *huggggs*

Reviewer: sanityfair Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2009 - 02:59 am Title: Part 1, Chapter 2: Into the Woods

Oh my, that stubborn Buffy! You must update again soon, please!

Author's Response: Yep, stubborn Buffy should've listened to Spike for a change... But don't expect her to admit that anytime soon lol

Thanks for reviewing, sanityfair! *hugs & smooches*

Reviewer: Amarioko Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2009 - 02:39 am Title: Part 1, Chapter 2: Into the Woods

Ah! How'd she do that? Sneaky witch! Could it be she put something in the water or stew that didn't have to be ingested for it to work on them? Hmmm. Hehe, Buffy is already checking out Spike.

Author's Response: Buffy can't help checking out his fabulousness when he's wearing those little shorts, I'd be @_@ too :P

The witch has her methods, you'll find out what she did in the next chapter ;)

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Amarioko! *Smoooch!*

Reviewer: jen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2009 - 01:59 am Title: Part 1, Chapter 2: Into the Woods

Oh! Evil place for a cliffy!

Author's Response: I know, I'm evil >: D lol

It doesn't look too good for Spike and Buffy at the moment. They'll have to be strong (and be there for each other) to get through what's ahead

Thanks for the review, jen! *smoochies*

Reviewer: gopher101 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2009 - 01:12 am Title: Part 1, Chapter 2: Into the Woods

Hmm, powerful fake Willow. I so wish I could see James in that .

Author's Response: lol I'd love to see James wearing that getup too! :P The fake Willow is going to cause lots of problems for our heroes.

Thanks for reviewing, gopher! *hugggs*

Reviewer: CallMeKitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2009 - 01:11 am Title: Part 1, Chapter 2: Into the Woods

Love this fic SOOOOO much!

Spike and Buffy's snarkiness is spot on. I can hear them arguing in my head as if I was watching the show.

Can I say, Spike in tight, short, Bavarian garb... *drools*
and Wicked witch as Willow, awesome idea, and just so perfect!

This may be my favorite version of Hansel and Gretel ever! More.Soon.OrElse. =D

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Author's Response: *hugs and twirls my favorite cheerleader and muse poker* Thanks, Kitten! :D It makes me squee with happiness that you're digging the story - especially since it wouldn't exist without you lol

heehee Spike in lederhosen - I would literally pay to see that :P I was all smiley at your review, the part about the snark being spot-on made me grin even more :D I was hoping I wasn't making them argue *too* much, even for them lol

Thanks for the usual awesome review! *smoooooches*

Author's Response: *hugs and twirls my favorite cheerleader and muse poker* Thanks, Kitten! :D It makes me squee with happiness that you're digging the story - especially since it wouldn't exist without you lol

heehee Spike in lederhosen - I would literally pay to see that :P I was all smiley at your review, the part about the snark being spot-on made me grin even more :D I was hoping I wasn't making them argue *too* much, even for them lol

Thanks for the usual awesome review! *smoooooches*

Author's Response: *hugs and twirls my favorite cheerleader and muse poker* Thanks, Kitten! :D It makes me squee with happiness that you're digging the story - especially since it wouldn't exist without you lol

heehee Spike in lederhosen - I would literally pay to see that :P I was all smiley at your review, the part about the snark being spot-on made me grin even more :D I was hoping I wasn't making them argue *too* much, even for them lol

Thanks for the usual awesome review! *smoooooches*

Author's Response: *hugs and twirls my favorite cheerleader and muse poker* Thanks, Kitten! :D It makes me squee with happiness that you're digging the story - especially since it wouldn't exist without you lol

heehee Spike in lederhosen - I would literally pay to see that :P I was all smiley at your review, the part about the snark being spot-on made me grin even more :D I was hoping I wasn't making them argue *too* much, even for them lol

Thanks for the usual awesome review! *smoooooches*

Author's Response: *hugs and twirls my favorite cheerleader and muse poker* Thanks, Kitten! :D It makes me squee with happiness that you're digging the story - especially since it wouldn't exist without you lol

heehee Spike in lederhosen - I would literally pay to see that :P I was all smiley at your review, the part about the snark being spot-on made me grin even more :D I was hoping I wasn't making them argue *too* much, even for them lol

Thanks for the usual awesome review! *smoooooches*

Author's Response: *hugs and twirls my favorite cheerleader and muse poker* Thanks, Kitten! :D It makes me squee with happiness that you're digging the story - especially since it wouldn't exist without you lol

heehee Spike in lederhosen - I would literally pay to see that :P I was all smiley at your review, the part about the snark being spot-on made me grin even more :D I was hoping I wasn't making them argue *too* much, even for them lol

Thanks for the usual awesome review! *smoooooches*

Reviewer: LoobyLoo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2009 - 04:32 pm Title: Chapter 1: Once Upon A Time...

WOOOOOOOOOOOO-HHOOOOOOOOO!! Our Pagan's back writtin' and with a brilliant story too, but then again, would we expect anything less from our Brilliant Pagan! Love Love LOVED it!! Can't wait for the adventures to start...Oh and thanks to andy to recommending this one to me - smoochies hon, XX

Author's Response: Hey Deb! *hugggs* Aww you're makin me blush! heehee Give Andy a big snog from me for recommending you read it, would you? :P

I'm very happy that you're enjoying the fic and that you're excited for the rest :D You've been a loyal reader and supporter of mine for such a long time now, and you're still with me :) It's cool that some things don't change *more hugs*

Thanks for reviewing, Deb! *smoochies & hugs*

Author's Response: Hey Deb! *hugggs* Aww you're makin me blush! heehee Give Andy a big snog from me for recommending you read it, would you? :P

I'm very happy that you're enjoying the fic and that you're excited for the rest :D You've been a loyal reader and supporter of mine for such a long time now, and you're still with me :) It's cool that some things don't change *more hugs*

Thanks for reviewing, Deb! *smoochies & hugs*

Reviewer: Andy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2009 - 03:22 pm Title: Chapter 1: Once Upon A Time...

Oh THANK YOU KItten!! She told me you'd got a new story started - now I can't wait to read more - this is so original - I know i'm going to love it - great to have you writing again love - tons of love and oceans of huggles - smoochies too!! XXXXXXXXXXXXXXX

Author's Response: heehee Thanks, Andy! It's awesome to have this kind of response to starting a new story! Kitten deserves tons of credit for this story seeing the light of day :D It just would've stayed incomplete with a layer of dust on it if she didn't encourage me to get back to it :D

Thanks for the wonderful review, Andy! You're such a sweetiepie *snogs your face off* heehee

Reviewer: tinkerbell Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2009 - 12:27 am Title: Chapter 1: Once Upon A Time...

I like the premise of your story. Can't wait to read more of your story!

Author's Response: :D Thanks, tinkerbell! I've got some interesting ideas for our heroes - some adventures that might just cause them to bond and get closer ;)

Thanks for reviewing, hon! *hugggles*

Reviewer: BlackDahlia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/09/2009 - 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 1: Once Upon A Time...

Pagan!!!! It's so good to see you still writing! I'm totally hooked, more pleeease!

Author's Response: Thanks, hon! :D This is my first foray into Buffyverse-based fic since I started writing again, all the others have been AU. I hope I do a good job of it!

Glad I got you hooked already lol The next chapter should be ready in a few days, you'll see where Spike and Buffy ended up :)

Thanks for reading and reviewing, sweetie! *smoochies*

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/09/2009 - 09:20 pm Title: Chapter 1: Once Upon A Time...

Oh I love the start - please continue!
That would have fit to the seasonal_spuffy too when they had fairy tales. :D
I'm glad that Spike went with Buffy and not Riley; he would have been a pain in the ass if he would be the third to go with Buffy and Spike and wouldn't be able to keep up with the other two.
(PS: Rose it right, the text stretches to much for me to read her. I've read it @ EF, the text is better there. Maybe use this:


instead? I don't know what you mean with opening in a new window, that doesn't help me. It's still too big. But as long as I can read @ EF it's okay.

Author's Response: :D Thanks, ck! I haven't checked out Seasonal_Spuffy, I've heard good things about it though :)

Oh yeah, it would've sucked to have Riley go with them! Perish the thought lol No, they need some time alone, without enormous Hall Monitors whining in their ears ;)

Hmm, sorry about the separating line thing. No one ever pointed that out as a problem before. I'm glad you can still read it at EF with no problems :)

Thanks for another great review, hon! I loves 'em! :D *smoochies*

Reviewer: ravynsprt Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/09/2009 - 03:07 pm Title: Chapter 1: Once Upon A Time...

LOVE, LOVE, Loving this so far!! It's better than awesome....great writing and character's are spot on....I just love all your stories anyway!! This one already has me hooked and I don't mind begging for more :) PLEASE, PLEASE, continue!!

Author's Response: Aww thank you for the sweet compliments, ravynsprt! You made my day :D I'm happy that you're liking it, I'll definitely continue :)

Thanks for the wonderful review, sweetie! *smooochies*

Reviewer: jen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/09/2009 - 01:29 am Title: Chapter 1: Once Upon A Time...

Let's give it a go!! Are we ever gonna find out why the white mist picked Spike instead of Riley?

Author's Response: Thanks for the vote to continue, Jen! :D

The question of why Spike was chosen instead of Riley will be answered... eventually, most likely in Part 2 :)

Thanks for reading & reviewing & liking it, hon! :D *hugggs*

Reviewer: Rose Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/09/2009 - 12:05 am Title: Chapter 1: Once Upon A Time...

The dividing line between the sections is so long it's stretching the text so I have to move the slidebar back and forth to read every line of the story. It's very distracting.

Author's Response: I'm sorry you didn't enjoy it, Rose. What I usually do is bring up the story I'm reading in a new window, and then put the slidebar all the way over to the right. That takes care of the moving back and forth problem

Reviewer: BlueEyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/09/2009 - 12:02 am Title: Chapter 1: Once Upon A Time...

This is a fucking awesome idea for a story. I can't wait for the next chapter. I can just imagine all the different fairy tales this is too cool.

Author's Response: Thank you, BlueEyes! :D And may I say, that was a fucking awesome review! heehee It warms my cockles to get enthusiastic reviews like yours :D

I'm happy that you're liking it. I'm so glad Kitten convinced me to post lol :) Thank you for the review, hon! *smooches*

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2009 - 11:44 pm Title: Chapter 1: Once Upon A Time...

Had to be Spike going into the portal. Love that the portal was the entity that made the decision. Looking forward to more. Quite interested.

Author's Response: Glad you liked it, BuffyRat! I couldn't let it be Riley going with her lol The Unari do seem to have good taste :P More soon!

Thanks for reviewing! *hugggs*

Reviewer: jen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2009 - 10:59 pm Title: Chapter 1: Once Upon A Time...

keep going!

Author's Response: :D Thanks, Jen, I will! *smooch*

Reviewer: sanityfair Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2009 - 09:23 pm Title: Chapter 1: Once Upon A Time...

Very interesting! I'd certainly like to read more soon.

Author's Response: Yay! Another vote to continue :D Thanks for letting me know you liked it, hon! *smoochies* It really does help get the creative juices flowin' =)

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2009 - 08:30 pm Title: Chapter 1: Once Upon A Time...

OMG this is so good Pagan! I'm in. I figure if it gets too kinky I'll just skim thru those parts. I'm not fond of S/Other, B/Other, but I love your stories and I trust you to give us plenty o' Spuffy Smut! Loved the dissin' of whiny Riley by Spike. And I'm glad Anya was allowed to help with all her demon knowledge. About time.I liked all the info you gave about what happened and about the Unari. Totally different. Is there gonna be any more Biley in this? Do I hafta get out my barf bag? lol God, I hate Riley. And Biley? UGH sounds even worse .

--> Why don't we get a cardboard cutout and prop it up against a display case? It'll be just like the real thing--better, in fact. Best description of Riley I've ever seen. Ever.
--> You're more likely to end up a court jester with bells on your shoes. Spike smirked. OMG LMAO!! Brilliant!

Loved it PB. Dying to see what happens next. I'll be waiting somewaht patiently for your updates. *smoochies*

Author's Response: Thanks, AMI! I love your reviews :D You can put away the barf bag, Buffy will be separated from Riley for a while heehee Biley just isn't a cute merging of their names, it's also called that because the bile rises in our throats when they smooch hehehe

The cardboard cutout of Riley would probably have more personality than the real article - Oops, I'm channeling Spike, can't stop insulting Riley :P

I'm so pleased that you're enjoying the story and the funny bits so far! :D Thanks for reading and leaving such a sweet review, hon! *hugs & smoochies*

Reviewer: flyingnicole Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2009 - 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 1: Once Upon A Time...

loving this first chapter...can't wait for the next one :)

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, flyingnicole! I'm so happy you're loving it! *bounces* :D Next chapter is coming soon :)

*smooches*

Reviewer: xoChantelly Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2009 - 05:59 pm Title: Chapter 1: Once Upon A Time...

This fic is sooo good! This chapter is great, I love how you explain a lot of the stuff, so readers aren't confused. LOL at Riley! I love that Spike got his insults in, those were good =P And at the end, with they whining. Priceless. I can't wait for the next update! Lurve ya, PB!

*hugs and smoochies*

Author's Response: *Snogs* Thanks, Chan! I was hoping I explained things relatively well :D I was afraid it might be a tad confusing lol *flicks Riley* I had to get digs in at Riley - 'cos fun! :P

Thanks for reviewing, sweetie! Lurve ya, and my beautiful, awesome banner! :D *hugs & smoochies*

Reviewer: cal Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2009 - 05:51 pm Title: Chapter 1: Once Upon A Time...

I like it so far. I'm still a little worried that this made be too kinky for me. It made be too much much for me. I mean I don't even like threesomes in stories. I think it is probably because it goes against my beliefs. So, I'm afraid of what is to come. I'm giving it a try because it is you, Pagan. I think if it was pretty much anybody else then I don't know if I will chance it. You also mentioned character deaths in your warning. That has me worried as well. I will give it a try but I can't promise I will like it, Pagan. But you are still the best. Love ya, sweet PaganBaby.

Author's Response: *Huggggs* Thank you for giving it a chance, cal :) That means a lot to me. *But* you can stop reading at any time if you don't like the direction it's going, I'll totally understand *smooch* Some stories just aren't for everyone, it's cool, no pressure.

*But* lol having said that, I hope that you do keep enjoying it and continue reading :D

Thank you for chancing it for me, sweetie, and for the review! *hugs & smooches*

Reviewer: workNprogress Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2009 - 04:32 pm Title: Chapter 1: Once Upon A Time...

I am very excited about this story. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue.

Author's Response: So do you want me to continue or not? ;) heehee Thank for the 'Yes' vote! I mentioned I was nervous about this story, so it means A LOT to get positive responses for it :D

Thanks for the sweet review! *smooch!*

Reviewer: xaphania Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2009 - 02:36 pm Title: Chapter 1: Once Upon A Time...

Oh, this sounds like it's going to be a fun one. Love the idea, definitely looking forward to where you take this.

"Why don't we get a cardboard cutout and prop it up against a display case? It'll be just like the real thing -- better, in fact."

Made me laugh! So true :D *not a Riley fan*

Author's Response: :D Thank you, xaph! I love the idea too, I hope I do it justice when all is said and done :) I'm more nervous about this fic for various reasons lol

It's so fun and easy to make fun of Riley. I'm not a Wonder Bread fan myself, in case you couldn't tell ;) heehee

Thanks for reviewing, hon! *smoochies*

Author's Response: :D Thank you, xaph! I love the idea too, I hope I do it justice when all is said and done :) I'm more nervous about this fic for various reasons lol

It's so fun and easy to make fun of Riley. I'm not a Wonder Bread fan myself, in case you couldn't tell ;) heehee

Thanks for reviewing, hon! *smoochies*

Reviewer: Spikelissa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2009 - 02:05 pm Title: Chapter 1: Once Upon A Time...

Oh I LOVE this Pagan! I love stories like this and the fact that the book 'hand' hand picked who was going. Bloody Brilliant that is! As per usual Riley and his whiney damn self...Oh I can't wait to see what you have next. I will push right along with Kitten Please finish!!!!! Pretty please. LOVE LOVE this! Update soon! Will it be long or a shorty or in between...Ooooh the possibilities and questions going through my head! If I haven't said it enough *giggles* I love this! Update soon! *Huggles*

Author's Response: heehee Thanks, Lissa! I'm happy that you liked the setup and want me to keep rollin' with it :D Whiny Riley needs a flickin, I just can't stand him and his blandness lol

My plan (so far) is to have each fairy tale as a separate story in a series. I won't give away which tales I'll be tossing Buffy and Spike into though heehee I've got several cool ones planned.

Thanks for your yummy review, sweetie! I need the encouragement to keep the fairy tale muse busy :) *Huggggs*

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