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Date: 06/13/2010 - 07:01 am Title: Part 1, Chapter 14: Life of Illusion (continued yet again)

Great story PB, can't wait for the part 2 :)

Author's Response: Hey, 182! You reviewed! Yay! =D Thanks for letting me know you liked it, hon *hugggggs*

Reviewer: Behind Blue Eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2010 - 11:26 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 14: Life of Illusion (continued)

Love your portrayal of Anya! Spot on and so funny!

Author's Response: Thanks, BBE! I let Anya speak through me when I was writing it lol I thought I did a good job, but there's always that little kernel of doubt that it might not be nearly as good or funny as I think it is lol You saying you loved it is awesome and makes me all smiley =D *huggggles*

Thanks for the review, BBE! *smoooooch!*

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Date: 06/12/2010 - 11:21 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 14: Life of Illusion (continued yet again)

Great ending for Part I...I loved Anya Duck!.And her little talk with Spike and Buffy. I'm worried that Buffy thinks the Unari are manipulating them into being in love. I hope not, Spike is right they're in love. I liked what he said about love being like snowflakes...no two are alike. He's absolutely right about that. I guess canon Bufy never learned that lesson. :( She compared everyone to the "great love of her life"...and never realized what she had in Spike til it was too late..
Anyway I really enjoyed this chappie, nice Spuffyness, singing, and funny bits. :)

Good job PB, can't wait for Part II (any hints as to what story you'll do? pretty plz with naked Spike on top..) No? guess I'll have to wait. *pouts*

I hope you have it up soon, but I'll wait for it patiently; ) *squishes*

Author's Response: Thanks, AMI! I loved Anya Duck too lol I thought it'd be nice for them to meet a "person" that was helpful and didn't want to kill them :D

Buffy was always kinda dumb when it came to love, so I carried that over into this story lol My Buffy wants to be in love with Spike - but there's also that Sunnydale part of her that wishes her life would go back to "normal". Someone needs to slap her around a little lol Spike did some dumb things on the show in the name of love because his emotions got the better of him, but he's by far more of an expert than Buffy is when it comes to love. He doesn't want to accept the fact that she might not love him once all is said and done *cuddles Spike*

Sorry, no hints! heehee I'm dyin' to, really, but better if it's a surprise =D

Thanks for another of your patented awesome reviews, AMI! Love ya! *hugs & squishes you back*

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2010 - 11:02 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 14: Life of Illusion (continued yet again)

You're right, the chapters were very long, you had me quite busy today. *gg*

Mmmh 'doctor' Spike giving a massage - who would say no to that?
Ah they noticed the fantasies being the same. But they don't have a clue about the connection yet. The snowflake, yes that's fitting.
I thought first the water would come to them, on the road like a flood but finding the river without a bridge is worse. I fear Buffy is right, no bridge at all.
Ohhh didn't expect Anya the duck :))

Enjoyed so far, looking forward to part two.

Author's Response: I like keepin' you busy lol I'm happy you made time to read the whole mega-chapter today =D

Oh yes, Dr. Spike could rub me any day :P I imagine his appointment list would be quite long heehee

They made the discovery that at least one of their fantasies was shared, but they don't know what's going on yet. Spike's going to have to fess up about having feelings for Buffy back in Sunnydale so he can further prove his theory that their feelings are their own.

heehee Anya the duck was fun to write. I'm so glad you had fun reading it, ck! Thanks for all your reviews! I loves 'em! *smoochies*

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2010 - 10:56 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 14: Life of Illusion (continued yet again)

can't wait till part II !!!!!

Author's Response: I was just jotting down a few ideas for Part Deux today. It helps get my fingers typin' to know you're looking forward to it =D

Thanks for all your great reviews, BBE! *hugggles*

Reviewer: Behind Blue Eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2010 - 10:12 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 14: Life of Illusion (continued again)

Enjoyed that they are so carefree--well mostly, about their new found relationship.

Author's Response: They had a little while there where they were just happy and having the warm 'n fuzzies. Happy Spuffy is good for the soul :D They'll have some issues to deal with in the future, but - to paraphrase the Captain & Tennille - love will keep them together heehee

Thanks for reviewing, BBE! *smoochies*

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2010 - 08:47 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 14: Life of Illusion (continued again)

GUH! Great Spuffyness and such hot lovemaking! I love this Spike/Buffy so much, thanx for giving us some hapy Spuffy, god knows we got so little on the show. I felt so bad for Spike when he was thinking she regretted it and thought it was disgusting to be with him, cause that's what s6 Buffy was all about. Poor Spike. *pets him*
Too bad Buffy is all guilty about Riley now, and it caused their first fight. I'm glad they made up and they're OK again. They just need to keep talking things out. Is Buffy officially insane? I mean "No sex", WTH is wrong with that girl? How can she keep her hands off Spike? OMG! Good thing it seems like she didn't mean it. :)

I love this story so much, it's what the show could have been if Joss and the writers didn't fell like nobody could EVER be happy and Spike was not "good" enough for Buffy. UGH!

Onto the next chappie. Loved it! *big hugs*

Author's Response: =D Glad you enjoyed it, AMI! You're very welcome for the hot, happy Spuffyness lol I've been watching reruns and it breaks my heart to see some of those episodes. But it also renews my determination to write more happy Spuffy for us all :D *joins you in petting Spike*

"I love this story so much, it's what the show could have been if Joss and the writers didn't fell like nobody could EVER be happy and Spike was not "good" enough for Buffy. UGH!" You're so sweet! *Hugs* And I feel the same way about Joss and the writers. I love Joss, but I hate him too lol It's a shame they didn't have some of the wonderful folks who write fanfic working on the show. We would've made things MUCH happier for everyone :D Viva la fanfic!

Thanks for your yummy review, AMI! *hugs & smooches*

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2010 - 07:58 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 14: Life of Illusion (continued again)

Uh-huh... I wonder how the scoobies react when they see the other pictures from the night before - Riley will be ready to kill by then.
You could think the Unari want Buffy and Spike to stay there, enjoying some sweet and hot spuffy time. :))
*phew* I feared the worst when Buffy had doubts; and Spike's reaction. Glad they could talk it out.
I'll read the rest later, off to LJ.

Author's Response: It ain't gonna be pretty when the Scoobies and Riley see the hayloft pictures heehee :P They'll need to keep any weapons out of Riley's reach.

On the show, Buffy drove me nuts sometimes with her extreme goody-goodyness lol She could never just let herself be happy and do what felt good (most often and especially regarding Spike). As irritating as that was, it's the way she is, so I had to have her doing some of that lol

Spuffy had their first spat, but they got through it :) They might rack up a lot of "making up" time before the end heehee

Thanks for reviewing, ck! Love ya! *smooch*

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2010 - 07:54 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 14: Life of Illusion (continued)

LOL OMG I love Anya! Go Anya tell everyone how it is! Seriously the Scoobies have major hangups about sex, it's like they're old women or something not 20 somethings in the 21st century.

Yes plz, can Riley's head explode? That would be lovely as is the thought of Spike's package and talking about Spike's package and picturing Spike's package...What? Oh OK back to the review...

Yeah Riley keep living in your dream world. Wait til they get a load of the Hayloft Sexins' ! *iz happy picturing Riley's head exploding* LOL

Funny chappie, I love it PB...*smoochies*

Author's Response: Thanks, AMI! Anya could use an inhibition or two lol The Scoobies always were kind of prudish in some ways. Thank goodness Anya and Spike were around to inject a little life into that group lol

"Yes plz, can Riley's head explode? That would be lovely as is the thought of Spike's package and talking about Spike's package and picturing Spike's package...What? Oh OK back to the review..." LOL You crack me up, girl! Mmmm Spike's package... Yes, it's quite lovely, and easy to lose track of time whilst doing :P

Hayloft Sexins hehehe I love that! :D You may get your wish for Riley's head to explode... we'll see ;)

Wonderful review, as always, my dear *big hugs* Thanks!

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2010 - 07:32 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 14: Life of Illusion

Hi PB! *waves*

I'm so glad to see this story is all finished Yay!

I liked the look we got on whats happening with Dawn. Brad Pitt as the stable boy was too cute. LOL I don't trust the Unari...everything sounds too perfect. We'll see.

Anya makes me laugh. I'm so glad they're listening to her, it's about time. Cause they never did on the show. C'mon, she knows stuff people.

Riley is annoying me more than usual and that's saying alot. He's making me nervous, I don't like that he's planning on killing Spike. Stupid jerk.
Can Riley be in the next tale and get eaten by wolves or bears or something? Or better yet go back to Iowa, and marry a farmer's daughter who'll cheat on him with traveling salesmen. *iz evil* God I hate him.OK ,I'll stop now with the Riley hatred.;)

Great chappie PB! Off to read the next one. *huggggs*

Author's Response: Thanks, AMI! hehehe Your review made me giggle!

The Unari are treating Dawn very well - but they are a bit nutty, so who knows if it will stay that way lol

I love Anya :D I'm glad I was able to channel her well in this story lol You're right about Anya knowing stuff. Why didn't they go to her more often on the show? *shrugs*

heehee Bless you for hating Riley - please don't stop the Riley hatred on my account *hugs* I'll have to think up a scene where he gets eaten by wild animals >:D

Thanks for the awesome review, AMI! I loved it :D *huggggles*

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2010 - 07:08 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 14: Life of Illusion (continued)

Mmmh so the NC-17 drawings / pages are there now, I'm guessing after Willow's reaction. Oh they are still behind, these pictures aren't so bad (NC-17 wise).
Anya is fun - she made both Joyce and Giles blush. *gg*

Author's Response: lol I know: The pictures the Scoobies saw weren't even *that* bad - they have no idea how much worse it's going to get (worse, from their perspectives, that is lol Not ours!) They're gonna plotz when they get a look at what goes on later hehehe

You can always count on Anya to make someone blush heehee I adore her :D

Thanks for the kewl review, ck! *smooches*

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2010 - 06:52 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 14: Life of Illusion

Mmmh I can see now why Dawn decided to stay in this dimension. It doesn't hurt either to have her loved ones with her as long as they seem to be real.
Heh... Anya is thinking ahead (Joyce + Giles).
Good that Tara is suspicious of Riley but I don't think she'll do something about it soon.

Author's Response: I think I'd be pretty content if I were Dawn, at least for a while. The Brad Pitt flirtage would be enough to make me want to stay lol

Anya is one smart chick, they should all listen to her wisdom lol And Tara is a perceptive lady too, the quiet ones who take in everything usually have good instincts. She needs to be more Anya-like and not be afraid to say what's on her mind. I don't know if Willow would like Tara acting more like Anya though lol

Thanks for they delicious review, ck! :D *smoochies*

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2010 - 06:02 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 13: Only You (continued)

Not sure if I didn't comment on this chapter or if it got lost again but it's good to see so many chapters to read now. But I think I didn't read it. No clue.
Guh... hot chapter. I came to the bond now, it really sounds as if I have missed this one.

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed the hotness, ck! Sorry you missed the chapter at first. But on the plus side, you had a lot of stuff ready for you to read lol

Thanks for reading & reviewing! *huggz*

Reviewer: Passion4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2010 - 04:34 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 14: Life of Illusion

I expect the make-up sex to be excellent, too ....
I LOVE ANYA! LOL!! I'm sure they'll be multiple "O"'s in her furture! LOL!

'Once upon a time, there were three little girls who went to the police academy'?"
LOL!! How in the WORLD did you REMEMBER THAT!?? I LOVE THAT LINE - So very Xander!

Glad Dawn's living in the lap of luxury .. .. too bad Spike and Buffy aren't as lucky! They'd make good use of that big bed Dawnie has . . . :O .

Great Chappie (or part of one) . . . Loved it!!

-ET, Passion4Spike 2010.06.12


Author's Response: heehee Thanks, ET! And thanks for the assistance on the chapter! I loved that Anya line you suggested :D Xander mentioning the opening line from 'Charlie's Angels' was one of the first things I thought of when I began this story - It finally made it in! lol

LOL Oh yeah, Spike and Buffy would find a much more interesting thing to do with the big bed than just sleep on it :P

Thanks for everything, ET! You rock! *hugggles & lurve*

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2010 - 02:23 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 14: Life of Illusion (continued yet again)

I feel utterly spoilt with multiple updates in one day - sorry I couldn't stop reading long enough to review each chappie! I love the way they're really beginning to work as a team and TALK to each other. There are still the inevitable misunderstandings (they are still Buffy & Spike after all) but instead of going off in a huff they now try to resolve their problems. Loved AnyaDuck. Can't wait for book 2 with the next fairy tale....

Author's Response: lol Thanks, All4Spike! I'm glad you dug the multiple part chapter :D Yep, Spike and Buffy are going to have misunderstandings and argue, but they're trying to be good to each other :) They're still adjusting to their new relationship. Glad you liked Anya Duck too heehee Thank you for the yummy review, All4Spike! *smoochies*

Reviewer: Blue Eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2010 - 06:57 am Title: Part 1, Chapter 14: Life of Illusion (continued yet again)

I couldn't agree more I too am very curious as to what will happen next, who will they be and what manner will be their next challenge. Love Anya as a duck by the way.

Author's Response: Glad you liked it, Blue Eyes! I'm also glad the length of the chapter didn't put you off :D Anya-duck was fun to write lol

I've still got lots of work to do to get Part 2 up and running, but I've got some cool ideas >:D

Thanks for reading & reviewing! *smooch*

Reviewer: Passion4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2010 - 05:49 am Title: Part 1, Chapter 14: Life of Illusion (continued yet again)

Spike jumped back several feet further. “Bloody hell! It talks!”

Oh, ET - LOL!! You make me laugh! I loved Anya, the duck, too!!

Great chappie . . . love the Spuffy Lovin' . . . sweetness and hotness - and singing! What more could you want?! (well, you coulda let 'em 'do it in the road!')

Oh, please let him keep the shorts in the next part!! c'mon . . .. don't want to cover up that 'package' too much! LOL!

Hope we don't have to wait TOO long for the "interesting stuff" you have planned for part 2!

Where is that muse? Do I need to send some chocolate over for her?

:-)

-ET, Passion4Spike 2010.06.12

Author's Response: I'm so happy you enjoyed it, P4S! *hugs* I shoulda had them do it in the road LOL Well, maybe somewhere in Part 2 ;D

I won't confirm or deny if the leather shorts appear in Part 2 heehee Maybe I'll just have Spike run around nekkid :P

My muse likes Reese's Peanut Butter Cups best :D Thanks for reading, reviewing, and for allll the help you've given me, ET! Love ya! *hugggles*

Reviewer: Passion4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2010 - 05:40 am Title: Part 1, Chapter 14: Life of Illusion (continued again)

"So... still love me?" Spike asked.

"Mmmhmm." Buffy kissed him sweetly to reassure him.

{{{{{SIGH}}}}} What more is there to say?!

Great Chappie . . .HOT, SWEET, SEXY . . TOTALLY SPUFFY! Makes me all happy inside! :-)

-Passion4Spike 2010.06.12

Author's Response: Thanks, ET! I was hoping to give y'all some happy Spuffy smiles =D We can count the ones we got from the show on one hand lol Viva la fanfic! heehee

Thank you for the finger lickin' good review! *gobble munch gobble* >:P

Reviewer: Passion4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2010 - 05:36 am Title: Part 1, Chapter 14: Life of Illusion (continued)

I LOVE Anya!! LOVE, LOVE, LOVE! You capture her so well! And Xander wanting help from Giles . . . that was so funny! I'm worried about what that creepy Riley is going to do, though! He better not hurt Spike or Buffy will kick his a. . . I mean butt! Great chappie! Loved it! -Passion4Spike 2010.06.12

Author's Response: heehee Thanks, P4S! I loved writing Anya is this fic - she's a hoot :D And Riley is a buttmunch, a dangerous buttmunch lol

Thanks for reviewing, ET! *smoochies & hugs*

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Date: 05/05/2010 - 02:15 am Title: Part 1, Chapter 13: Only You (continued)

OMG! You're updating again! This makes me happy!

And what an update! Yay for sex! lol. And I love yous! Even better! Now if only those would show up in the book so Riley would have a heart attack and die! llol

Cannot wait for more!!

Author's Response: Thanks, Niori! Yay for sex, indeed! lol I had a good laugh reading your review =D I hadn't considered making Riley have a heart attack and croaking lol It's somethin' to think about... >:D

I'm happy you enjoyed the update :D I've got 2 betas working in tandem on the next mega-chapter, so it shouldn't be too much longer before I post again :)

Thanks for the awesome review, Niori! *smoochies*

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/02/2010 - 11:56 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 13: Only You (continued)

Time will tell indeed. Glad they were able to have such an uninterrupted coupling. Pretty darn hot, too. Update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks, BuffyRat! I had that hayloft dream and then just had to let Spike and Buffy have some alone-time lol

The next chapter (which is also the last of Part 1) is gonna be huge. I've got 2 betas workin' hard on it as we speak :)

Thanks for the review, hon! *smoochies*

Author's Response: Thanks, BuffyRat! I had that hayloft dream and then just had to let Spike and Buffy have some alone-time lol

The next chapter (which is also the last of Part 1) is gonna be huge. I've got 2 betas workin' hard on it as we speak :)

Thanks for the review, hon! *smoochies*

Author's Response: Thanks, BuffyRat! I had that hayloft dream and then just had to let Spike and Buffy have some alone-time lol

The next chapter (which is also the last of Part 1) is gonna be huge. I've got 2 betas workin' hard on it as we speak :)

Thanks for the review, hon! *smoochies*

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/02/2010 - 02:33 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 12: Stormy Weather

So happy to see this story updated! Simply love it. :-) I love how they are open with each other this time around, it really changes the relationship in a positive way. And it's so much fun to see her resist!

Author's Response: Yay! Thanks, demona! It's satisfying to write Spike and Buffy being affectionate and good to each other. I'm thrilled that you enjoy reading it too :D After what we were put through with the show, it's like "Yes, this is the way it should've been. Suck it, Joss!" heehee

Thanks for reading, enjoying, and reviewing! The reviews are much appreciated! *hugggles*

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Date: 05/02/2010 - 12:21 am Title: Part 1, Chapter 13: Only You

It seems Spike is right, they should compare their dreams.
Indeed, hot :))
Anya will think that too but surely Riley will see it differently. ;)

Author's Response: Spike and Buffy have so much to talk about (and do :P) lol But they'll get to the dreams/fantasies conversation ;)

Yep, Anya will enjoy it, and Riley... not so much heehee

Thanks for reviewing, ck! *smoochies*

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/01/2010 - 04:33 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 13: Only You (continued)

Love their growing ease with their intimacy and the link. Can't help worrying about the reactions of those who will witness the scene in the book....

Author's Response: It took them a long time to get to this point, but they're finally at the snogging, shagging & loving stage :D It's immensely gratifying to make right some of the evil stuff Joss did to us on the show - that's not to say I won't do some evil stuff myself >:D lol

The Scoobies are still way behind on current Spuffy events :P But in the next chapter they'll get their first hint of the passion simmering between Spike and Buffy ;) Can't you already hear Giles saying "Dear Lord!" hehe

Thanks for reading and reviewing this long-ass chapter, All4Spike! I appreciate it so much, and it keeps my muse fed and happy =D

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/01/2010 - 04:23 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 13: Only You

Can I have your dreams please?

Author's Response: hehehe The best I can do is write scenes like that and hope your subconscious is properly inspired at bedtime ;)

Thanks for reviewin' and making me giggle :D *huggles*

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