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Date: 04/13/2010 - 06:07 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 7: Never Leave Me

Awwww . . . Spike sang his Mum's lullaby . . .that makes me so happy! PB knows why! LOL! Another Great Chapter. Glad they made up!
-Passion4Spike
2010.04.13

Author's Response: heehee Indeed, I do know ;) I had to include Spike sharing that song with Buffy, even if she didn't know the significance of it. It touches me to think of it, and I'm glad it touches you too :)

Thanks for the review, Evil Twin! >:D heehee *smooches*

Reviewer: Passion4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2010 - 03:20 am Title: Part 1, Chapter 6: Rub-A-Dub-Dub

Whoa! HOT! That was a hot chapter!! too bad it was a fantasy . . .but it was a darn HOT fantasy for both of them! LOL! Love the song, too!! Love to hear Spike sing the blues . . . like deep, rich honey dripping off his tongue .. . Yummy chapter!!
-Passion4Spike
2010.04.12

Author's Response: Thanks, hon! A little bathtub fantasy never hurt nobody :P heehee Oh the thought of Spike singin the blues with that voice... Mmmm-mmm! I'm pickled tink that you enjoyed the chapter!

I'm lovin all the reviewy goodness you're throwin my way, babe! heehee *hugggggles*

Reviewer: Passion4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2010 - 09:50 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 5: Toil & Trouble

Funny, scary, even a little nice from Buffy . . . And Riley's cracking up! Loved it!! Anya was like a Mastercard commercial - PRICELESS!

-Passion4Spike
2010.04.11

Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Anya ain't afraid to say what's on her mind, she won't be silenced lol Yep, Riley's losin' his shit already heehee I really, really hate him - as if you couldn't tell :P

Thanks for the review! I loves 'em :D *huggs*

Reviewer: Passion4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2010 - 06:50 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 4: Crime and Punishment

Excellent! The banter in the fairy tale and Spike singing! Oh, you know I love Spike singing!! And Anya was PRICELESS!! You did her perfectly (And I should know! LOL!).

-Passion4Spike
2010.04.11

Author's Response: I just love having Spike sing too :P Glad you liked the extra banter-iness and Anya :D I really had fun writing Anya so far in this fic. I hadn't used her very much in my earlier stories, so I thought I'd give her some moments to shine lol

Thanks for the sweet review, P4S! *huggz & smooches*

Reviewer: Passion4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2010 - 05:33 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 3: Out of the Frying Pan...

Ok, what's up with the non-sharing of the food . . . sumthin special about Spikey's food . . .hummm. Like the visual of the "real" witch, but think the real Willow would be insulted . . LOL! On to the next chapter, have to see what happens next. .
-Passion4Spike
2010.04.11

Author's Response: The real Willow won't be happy when she finds out about her evil doppelganger lol And I can't tell ya if there's something up with the food yet ;)

Thank you for readin & reviewin, P4S! *huggz*

Reviewer: Passion4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2010 - 01:36 am Title: Part 1, Chapter 2: Into the Woods

Love the back and forth with Buffy and Spike!! Too funny and so true to the characters! Oooo . . .what did the evil witch do to them . . .on to find out . . .

-Passion4Spike
2010.04.10

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked the banter! I worried that I went overboard with it lol It was mucho fun to write them going back and forth :D

Thanks for reviewing, sweetie! *smoochies*

Reviewer: Passion4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/10/2010 - 05:38 am Title: Chapter 1: Once Upon A Time...

I like it so far . . . a great beginning! This should be fun!

-Passion4Spike
2010.04.10

Author's Response: *grins* Thanks, hon! I'm havin fun writing this fic :D *hugggles*

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2010 - 02:02 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 11: The Shape of Things to Come (continued)

Can't think why I've only just found this story, but I have to tell you how much I'm enjoying it. Looking forward to the next 'challenge'.

Author's Response: Thanks, hon! I'm happy you're enjoying the story :D There are some thrills and chills coming for our intrepid heroes in Part 2. Now, if I could only finish Part 1... lol

Thanks for reading & reviewing, All4Spike! *smooch*

Reviewer: LoobyLoo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/03/2009 - 02:12 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 11: The Shape of Things to Come (continued)

Hmm, will Dawn want to return home after being able to act like a precocious princess? - I think so!! Loved the dialogue between our blonde heros. And love the snarky mirror!! Luv Huggles and smoochies!!

Author's Response: We'll see what Dawn's up to soon, I haven't decided if I'll include it in part 1 or wait till part 2 yet. Some readers would probably like for Dawn to stay in the book lol

I'm so glad you liked the dialogue and the snarky mirror lol =D

Thanks for readin & reviewin, Deb! *smoochies*

Reviewer: callmekitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/01/2009 - 10:56 am Title: Part 1, Chapter 11: The Shape of Things to Come (continued)

Likey? LOVEY!

You have outdone yourself on this twisted tale! I knew from the moment I read that "still yet to come" part in your incomplete file, this was a masterpiece in the making. This is even better than ever thought, but what else can you expect from the master :) *stands and claps*

Onto the next adventure quest for our lusty duo!

Author's Response: Aww! Girl, you're makin' me verklempt! I loves ya *Hugs* You really are too sweet. I couldn't have come this far without the awesome support and help you've given me :) Getting verklempt again... talk amongst yourselves lol

Thanks for the ego-boosting review, sweetie! *hugs & lurve*

Reviewer: callmekitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/01/2009 - 10:32 am Title: Part 1, Chapter 11: The Shape of Things to Come

No! I have to be strong! But his lips... Oh God, his lips. Damn him! Why does he have to be so irresistible!'

*bitchflicks buffy*

Super fabu chappy PB! I love the relationship developing here, but Buffy.. comeon! So Hot, want to touch the heiney... GIVE IN! (I would!)

Magic mirror! I love it :) Off to read more from the best!

Author's Response: lol Oh yeah, Buffy should just let her freak flag fly and grab that hiney! I sure as hell would've :P We'll see how well Buffy does with the resisting ;)

Mmmm yummy review *gobble-munch-gobble* :D

Reviewer: callmekitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/01/2009 - 09:58 am Title: Part 1, Chapter 10: Desperate Measures (continued)

Look at him... he's so hot. Licking me like some big, gorgeous, sexy man-cat... Man-cat? Damn, my brain is really fried. I need to recuperate.

super yummmmm *Sees panther crawl in mind*

Great chapter, good to see these guys are on their way to... jeez, I guess they dont know :P But I do *smirk* Great story, great writer, and GRATS on your nom! Well deserved :)

Author's Response: Thanks, sweetie! I try to reference the panther crawl whenever I can heehee I'm so pleased that you're enjoying the story :D It would still be only 40 pages long and in my unfinished fic folder gathering dust if it weren't for you poking me lol *hugz*

You know I love ya! Thanks for the sweet review! *smoochies & love*

Reviewer: Niori Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2009 - 06:06 am Title: Part 1, Chapter 11: The Shape of Things to Come (continued)

This chapter was great. I'm in a rush, so that's all the review you get at the moment. Sorry!



Author's Response: Thanks, Niori! Aww I very much appreciate you leaving even a quickie review lol Thanks for taking the time to let me know you liked it, hon :D *smoochies*

Reviewer: LoobyLoo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2009 - 11:09 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 11: The Shape of Things to Come

Coo...wet Spike!! I can't read a chapter without my mind going to the gutter!! Licky spike, wet spike...curly-haired wet spike in tight shorts...(whines) and kissage! MAJOR kissage....and phew...is it hot in here or just me? LOVE it Pagan, as usual, more please,!
Smoochies and hugs!!

Author's Response: My mind was in the gutter when I wrote it, yours must've been sucked in too heehee Mmmhmm those images of Spike sure are tasty :P There will be more hotness coming in the next chapter ;)

Thanks for the review, Deb! *smooooochies & hugs*

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2009 - 07:14 am Title: Part 1, Chapter 11: The Shape of Things to Come (continued)

Loving the magic mirror. And The fact that they are finally on there way, after saving the animals. Lovely long chapter.

Author's Response: :D Glad you liked it, BuffyRat! I'm still playing around with ideas concening the Mirror and future Mirrors they'll come across.

I couldn't resist having Spike do one more sweet thing by letting the animals out lol Chances are the old, pre-fairy tale dimension Spike wouldn't have thought about it, but he's a much more thoughtful and sensitive Vamp these days :)

Thanks for reviewing, hon! *smoochies*

Reviewer: xoChantelly Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2009 - 06:04 am Title: Part 1, Chapter 11: The Shape of Things to Come (continued)

Well, its good that they got to talk to the Unari, or representative, but I don't know if I trust what they say. If they are so loving of the key, they might not really want to let her leave so they can keep her safe. Maybe Buffy should ask to leave, then come back after the time for Glory to open the demensions is over, so Dawn is safe and Buffy doesn't die, then go back and retrieve her? But then again, I understand why Buffy won't do that, because she doesn't trust the Unari farther than Dawn could throw them lol.

I hope what they showed them of Dawn is true and not a mirage of sorts. I think it would crush Buffy is something happened to her only sister.

And now they are that much closer to finding the portal. Hopefully they can reach it before sunrise, so Spike won't dust. Can't wait for the update!!

*hugs and smoochies and lurrrve*

Author's Response: Exactly: Buffy doesn't trust the Unari farther than Dawn could throw them lol The other dimension would seem to be a good place for Dawn to hide from Glory, but they don't know if she really would be safe. And Buffy's still worried the Unari aren't just going to let the Key go. Time will tell ;)

Buffy has to convince herself that what she saw was true, that Dawn really is having a good time and isn't in distress. 'Cause there's not a whole helluva lot she can do until she finds Dawn, it would drive her nuts to worry constantly.

Spike and Buffy are on their way, they'll have a little trouble before they arrive at the portal... *cue dramatic music* lol

Thank you so much for all the awesome reviews, Chan! *huggggggs & smoochies*

Reviewer: xoChantelly Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2009 - 05:59 am Title: Part 1, Chapter 11: The Shape of Things to Come

Yay about the wand and the book! I'm glad it helped them out to find out what they have to do next. And then the mirror, I wonder what it will say to them. Hopefully something helpful, yeah?

Heehee about Spike jumping away from the mirror, that made me giggle.

I wish Buffy weren't so moral sometimes, lol. She should get down and diiiirty with Spike, who cares about stupid Riley lol. Off to the next chapter!!

*smooooochies*

Author's Response: heehee Poor Spike was startled when the Mirror answered him. But at least it wasn't the witch coming back like Freddy Kruger lol

Oh Hells yeah, I wish Buffy didn't want to do 'the right thing' lol But that's Buffy. I considered having them give into their desire for each other after they killed the witch, but it didn't seem like the right time and place lol

Thanks for the delicious review, Chan! :D *smooooooochies & lurve*

Reviewer: xoChantelly Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2009 - 05:54 am Title: Part 1, Chapter 10: Desperate Measures (continued)

Awww, poor Spike thinking all bad because he might have saved them earlier. He didn't know though, he just didn't want to hurt Buffy, which is of the good. Respectable.

Also totally understandable that they didn't want to go back into the house, but it was safer than being outside where other wild things could get them. Also, the house could hold the key to getting to the portal. Stupid Unari, I wonder what else they will have to do to find the portal.

This part made me laugh so hard:
Buffy's eyes widened when she felt something hard poking her hip. "Um, Spike, what's that hard thing poking me?"

"That means I like you."


Heehee, definitely something Spike would say, no matter how new the relationship is lol.

I can't wait to find out how they get out of this ugly trail. I hope it won't be too much work for them.

*hugs*



Author's Response: *cuddles Spike* He does feel stupid for not getting them out of the gingerbread house earlier, but Buffy is okay with it. That was the first thing that showed her Spike could be a good guy when he wants to be :)

heehee Glad you liked the "That means I like you" thing :P Naughty Spike. And Naughty Buffy too, her mind keeps jumping to porny conclusions lol

Thanks for reviewing, sweetie! *smooochies*

Reviewer: xoChantelly Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2009 - 05:48 am Title: Part 1, Chapter 10: Desperate Measures

Awww! Buffy was so scared and upset when she found out she'd slept all day and might have lost Spike. I'm glad the vile with didn't hurt him sooner.

Yay for Spike finally accepting Buffy's blood and clobbering that stupid bitch! She soooo deserved what she did and I'm glad Buffy didn't go to her thinking it was Willow, the stupid witch didn't succeed in fooling her, heehee.

I can understand why Buffy thinks its all a dream, considering she wants it so much and she could think she was delirous from the lack of proper food and stuff. She will be happppppppy to find out it isn't a dream!

Sorry I haven't reviewed! I didn't check the recent list for a while, so I missed it! I'll catch up now though =D

*hugs and smoochies and lurve*

Author's Response: *huggz* I'll take tardy reviews too lol It's all good :P *gobbles reviews*

Yes, they finally got rid of Witchiepoo! lol I thought about letting Spike beat the crap out of her, but opted to give her a quicker death lol

Buffy has big feelings for Spike, and she isn't fighting or denying it - yay! heehee

Thank you for reviewing, Chan! *hugs & smoochies & lurve*

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2009 - 11:52 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 11: The Shape of Things to Come (continued)

Two great chapters. I am realy enjoying the Buffy and Spike interaction. I wish we could have seen what the scoobies are seeing in Sunnydale. I don't mind that you are verbose it gives me more to read.

Author's Response: Thanks, Bridget! I'm glad you enjoyed :D

Buffy and Spike are such fun to write, whether they're snarky and rude to each other or hot and bothered :P

You know, I intended to include a Magic Box scene, but the chapter was soooo long already lol There will be glimpses of what the Scoobies are doing in the next few chapters, no matter how long the chapters turn out to be :)

I'm glad you don't mind the long chapters heehee Sometimes the words just pour out, and sometimes they just trickle lol

Thanks for the cool review, Bridget! *smoooch*

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Date: 11/28/2009 - 10:29 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 11: The Shape of Things to Come (continued)

Yay, they're finally outta there! I was just has happy to see the witch gone, whe was evil. Glad you put in the scene with mirror because we had a little more insight into the workings of the Unari. I'm sure Dawn is having a great time but after awhile I'd miss my real family and friends. It would get lonely.

Author's Response: I'm happy the witch is gone too. She needed a killin lol

I liked the idea of them communicating with the Unari via the Magic Mirror. All they have to do is find it wherever it is they wind up next to hopefully get more answers.

That's exactly right about Dawn. She's having fun and enjoying herself, but on the inside, she's missing her family and friends

Thanks for the sweet reviews, demona! *huggs*

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Date: 11/28/2009 - 10:24 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 11: The Shape of Things to Come

So sweet and spicy! Even though some more sexiness would have been good, I'm glad Buffy held herself back, it shows she really cares abut making it real and not just using him.

Author's Response: More sexiness is always good lol Buffy's trying to be good. I don't think I could manage it, with Spike looking all hot and yummy :P She does have deep feelings for him - she likes *him*, not just the awesome package heehee

Thanks for reviewing, demona! *hugggles*

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Date: 11/28/2009 - 09:23 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 11: The Shape of Things to Come (continued)

Still lovin it Pagan! I liked the mirror, he was funny. Glad to know they'll be others along the way to answer some questions. So Dawn is living like a spoiled, bratty Princess, while S/B have to go thru all the crap.Hope she appreciates it and will want to go back.
I love that Buffy really trusts Spike and that the mirror said they have a bond. And Dawn would be safe from Glory in this dimension huh? Wonder why the monks didn't know that?

Don't like what the mirror said about Spike being notjust a vampire. Sounds suspicious, and Spike felt that too. Hmm.

I'm so happy they're on their way and away from the gingerbread house from Hell. And how cute was Spike letting all the animals loose? Awww. Such a sweet,adorable Vamp. :)

Can't wait for more. Still wondering what the next tale will be. And let Buffy change her mind about being with Spike. LOL I have a dirty one track mind, so sue me. heehee. *huggles*



Author's Response: Thanks, AMI! I'm so glad you're still with me and lovin the story :D

I'm gonna say that the monks did know about the Unari, but deemed them too unstable (and weird lol) to trust them with Dawn's safety. Buffy doesn't know that, of course.

The Unari do have some special tests in store for Spike. He was right to be suspicious. But I won't say more than that right now ;)

Gingerbread House from Hell" lmao You got that right! And I liked having Spike be all sweet and let the animals out before they left :) He did just eat one of them a short time ago, but leaving them to possibly starve is different lol

I love (and share) your one track mind! heehee There are a few chapters left, let's see if Buffy can stick to her guns or if she gives in to yummy temptation :P

Thank you for the sweeeet review, AMI! I loved reading it *hugs & smooochies*

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2009 - 08:54 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 11: The Shape of Things to Come

Gosh PB I loved this, it's just such an awesome story. Yummy, wet Spike. *drools* I love the closeness and the sparkage between B/S it's so sweet and hot.

Poor Riley. UGH who cares? I know Buffy doesn't wanna cheat but really how can she resist Spike for much longer? Please tell me she's gonna get over that whole cheating thing before they make it back to SunnyD. I'm an evil, horrible bitca, I know.

I'm glad they opened the book and now can get to the portal. Poor insecure Spike ,he still feels bad about Buffy not drinking from him sooner and doesn't wanna believe Buffy really wants him.Awww

" If I start talking in a high, squeaky voice, you'll know why. All I need is a mesh shirt, guyliner, and some body glitter , then I'll be all set to go clubbing." LMAO!!!
" Mirror, mirror on the wall, who's the sexiest Vampire of them all?" OMG LOL I love Spike. That would be you Spike,who else? :)

Great chappie, PB!! Loved it! *smoochies*

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Date: 11/28/2009 - 06:47 pm Title: Part 1, Chapter 11: The Shape of Things to Come (continued)

But I didn't expect the mirror talk for the Unari. At last they know now that Dawn is save (and will be kept this way) but the Unari are one of a kind ... more tests then. Maybe it will be a lot longer till Buffy can break up with Riley. Spike is right about the monks could have chosen the Unari (if they knew of them).
Will be interesting to find out what the mirror meant with Spike being not only a vampire.
And didn't Riley want to destroy the book if I remember correctly? That could kill them both.
Very kind to let the animals out before they probably starve.
Looking forward to more. :)

Author's Response: The Unari were smart enough not to get within punching distance of Buffy lol The Mirror seemed a good way for them to communicate, it's so fairy tale-y lol

The only thing stopping Riley from destroying the book is that it might kill Buffy and Dawn too. He's losing his grip, but thankfully he isn't that far gone yet lol A possible explanation for why the monks didn't put Dawn with the Unari is that the Unari aren't the nicest folks and they're a bit nutty lol

I thought it'd be a nice touch to have Spike let the animals free :) It was an act of compassion that probably wouldn't have crossed his mind before. It's just part of the way he's evolved over the time spent in the gingerbread house :)

Thanks for the yummy reviews, ck! *smoochies & hugz*

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