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Reviewer: xoChantelly Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/02/2009 - 12:25 am Title: Chapter Six

Hmmm, I wonder who Gavriel and Natan are, if she's come into contact with them before... Interesting...

I love Whistler in this chapter, very informative while beating around the bush about it lol. Yay for encouraging Buffy to unite with Spike! I can't wait to see his reaction when she asks him to fight with her. Should be interesting lol I can see him holding back his eagerness as he is all 'whatever' about it lol. Can't wait for more!!!

*hugs*

Author's Response: Heehee, I have been leaving little hints throughout, but the big reveal won't be until near the end! Thanks for reading and reviewing! *hugs*

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/01/2009 - 10:20 pm Title: Chapter Six

Ah Whistler? The real one? Didn't expect him. So she's "ordered" to work with Spike now. Wonder if Whistler is right and Spike will be convinced easily. :D

Author's Response: Yep, Whistler was the real deal here. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/01/2009 - 09:40 pm Title: Chapter Six

Glad to see this updated, and don't worry about the talky-ness. It helps build up the story, and outside intervention makes a lot of sense in how Buffy would team up with Spike rather than avoiding him after such problems. Love the question of when she's beaten the gamemasters before. Can't wait to see when she and Spike talk next. thanks for the udpate!

Author's Response: I always worry about whether the balance of action and dialogue is right. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter, and the intervention from Whistler. Thanks for letting me know you're reading, and thanks for the review! :)

Reviewer: PaganBaby Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/01/2009 - 08:33 pm Title: Chapter Six

Great update, xaph! Nice surprise cameo by Whistler lol I never even considered that it could be him. So, Buffy's come up against the gamemasters before? And I'm ecstatic that she *must* work with Spike! heehee Should be interesting to see what they say to each other after they were 'married' :P

You do such a fab job with Buffy's dialogue and attitude - it's exactly what I'd expect to see on the show.

Can't wait to see what happens next! *smoochies*

Author's Response: I'm glad that Whistler turning up was a surprise! :D I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter, thanks for reading and reviewing (and for the beta) :D *hugs*

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