Date: 09/17/2004 - 04:04 pm Title: Ask me no Questions
Still really enjoying it. I like that you don't have Buffy and Spike giving into their bond completely immediately, but making them fight the emotional implications a bit instead. I think it makes it more true to Spike and Buffy. One more little nit-picky thing. Spike keeps calling himself a "nonce." "Nonce" is a derogatory term, but it means basically "pedophile." Do you mean "ponce" by chance? That's a term Spike uses a lot...
Date: 08/15/2004 - 02:01 am Title: Ask me no Questions
very good chapter and so was the last one and i cant wait for more to come
Date: 08/14/2004 - 03:46 pm Title: Ask me no Questions
More more more i want some more more more more Spike more of buffy more of buffy and spike yay!!! lol. Good chapter.
Date: 08/14/2004 - 12:39 pm Title: Ask me no Questions
You did a fabulous job on Spike's inner monologue. It was great insight into a pre-chipped, pre-Buffy lovin' Spike. I can't wait to see what you do next.
Date: 08/14/2004 - 09:04 am Title: Ask me no Questions
So Spike discovered he is Buffy whipped? *smile* I'm waiting for the next chapter now ... Cordykitten