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Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/08/2009 - 03:06 pm Title: Fallen

No update @ the BSV so reading here. ~ Oh Willow, instead of fixing what doesn't need to be fixed she made Buffy forget indeed. Getting amnesia, not good. Neither Adia trying to kill Spike. Wonder why she wanted to do that now. Unexpected move.
Faith on her way back to Sunnydale, that saved Spike.
Willow thinks too much that she is right, whatever she decides. At last Buffy remembers now.
BTW you don't have space between your paragraphs. Last chapter was okay.

Author's Response: Sorry if it seemed unexpected, Adia trying to kill Spike. Sorta happened on its own. But as it happens, Adia starts off so naive and, like in Black & White begins to blur the line a bit between good demons and purely evil demons. This goes on to the point that, when she reads about Spike she's suddenly determined that, hey, this is messed up, he's killed Slayers, who cares how 'good' he is now, I'm going to kill him. Which is kinda ironic when compared to supposedly evil-Spike pretending to almost kill her as a way of saving her in the future, Wow, I'm reading too much into my own fanfic.

Reviewer: fyreburned (Kara) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/08/2009 - 11:15 am Title: Fallen

Well, look at the bright side... if Willow gets rid of Spike's chip, at least he can eat them all... hope he doesn't get indigestion! God, you know the hellmouth has turned on a dime when Faith is one of the good guys (but, hey, that's pretty cool, too...) And Team Slayer can get on, get stronger without a couple of dissenting millstones around their necks. At least this way, without Xander (no big loss of the droopy one), Without Magick-Addict Willow jonesing for a spell every other minute, and without Adia who is seriously caught up in overcompensating for something, but WITH Tara fully on-board (no longer overshadowed by Willow, dampened just by her presence), with the added muscle of a freed Faith ever-mindful of redemption, and a positive bond between Spike and Buffy THE Slayer, things should only get better...hopefully... 'cos hey, it IS the hellmouth!
Am enjoying the fic & am jonesing for more already.
Keep 'em coming!
~~Kara

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