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Reviewer: Jake Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2009 - 07:14 pm Title: Chapter Five

Really interesting to see the difference between the two boys- great character development!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like Cam and Craig. They both feature heavily from now onwards. :D

Reviewer: scaryscouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2009 - 12:52 am Title: Chapter Five

now we have to wait to find out what Cam found out. Still lovin the story though but please don't be any more cruel to Spike, I don't think I can take it!

Author's Response: but please don't be any more cruel to Spike Um...you may need to read through your fingers at times :D Thank you for taking the time to let me know you're enjoying the story.

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/21/2009 - 06:42 pm Title: Chapter Five

Somehow I thought Jerry was in London - he's still in California?

Poor Spike. You're being really tough on him!

"A bit of violence and a good orgasm was all he wanted." lol, yup, that's Spike.

Thanks for the udate. :)

Author's Response: Yes, Jerry didn't go to London. I am being tough on Spike and there's a long way to go too... :D Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment.

Reviewer: BB Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/21/2009 - 03:54 pm Title: Chapter Five

am loving this story just hope it has a happy ending you just want maggie walsh to get her just desserts i think she ought to be turned and treated like she treats all hostiles !!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you for letting me know that you're enjoying the story - I don't think the ending will disappoint :D

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/21/2009 - 03:22 pm Title: Chapter Five

Interesting chapter. Is all of Spike's appendages made of metal. I find that to be very depressing. Anyway, it seems that Spikei's mind is not as well controlled as Maggie Walsh planned. It was not very nice of you to end the chapter that way. I will patiently await your next update.

Author's Response: Only Spike's thumbs and the knee that got damaged in Tracker are metal - the rest of him is as it should be...um...apart from the eyes. Next chapter up tomorrow. Thank you for taking the time to comment

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