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Reviewer: Laura Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/29/2009 - 02:09 pm Title: Chapter Eight

this story is driving me crazy. I always say that I am not going to read anymore until it is done, but then I am always checking for updates. I hate when Spike is tortured. Mainly because I feel that Spike is a character that is always on the edge and he needs Buffy to balance him. In a way I feel that Buffy is his Soul. Please give Spike back his soul, love and hope(Buffy) soon. Also I need Maggie to be tortured (body parts cut off would be great. I have to go calm down. Keep up the great work.

Author's Response: Hi Laura Sorry for driving you crazy (honest!). At least I update three times per week so you don't have to wait too long. Spike definately needs B by his side... as for the soul...? My lips are sealed ; ). The Maggie torture is probably a bit of a given with a Slayer and her family gunning for her! LOL!

Reviewer: msspikester Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/29/2009 - 05:00 am Title: Chapter Eight

This is killing me. They are in so much pain, and Spike obviously is in a world that doesn't care squat about him. (Like the initiative ever did) I am glad that Cam found out about the attack on Craig, no matter how painful it was to watch. They need to catch Buffy up soon, though. She is feeling so betrayed and it is horrible to see her angry and grieving at the same time.
It is breaking my heart to follow their struggles, but keep it going. I am definitely following.

Author's Response: Thank you very much for letting me know you're reading :D Lot's more to come. Things are bleak - will they get worse before they get better? Will Cam round up the troops and get Spike out? You'll find out soon. x

Reviewer: scaryscouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/28/2009 - 11:04 pm Title: Chapter Eight

still lovin it and the angst too, but please don't make us suffer for much longer someone has to let Buffy know about Spike & I wonder if they have done so much to him not just mentally but physically that she wont ' want him back

Author's Response: Thrilled that you're loving it :D But the suffering...um...well it's a long fic! But trust me to make the ending worthwhile the journey it took to get there. :D

Reviewer: iris Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/28/2009 - 10:28 pm Title: Chapter Eight

I really like this very original story, but you never let us know what Spike feels for Buffy. Does he remember...think of....dream of her? Does he care what this is doing to her, not just the boys?It's all one-sided like her "ownership " of him was just the best choice he could make at the time. Otherwise - you've done something unique, which is hard to do! Thanks.

Author's Response: Spike is really no longer capable of remember Buffy or the boys. His love for them was evident when Maggie had Craig attacked and subsequently showed him how the family was being torn apart but since they erased his memory of them , he really is slowly being reduced to a more animalistic creature. Thank you very much for taking the time to comment. I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: mazza Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/28/2009 - 10:08 pm Title: Chapter Eight

oh no what now for Spike - but they will (won't they?)find out he didn't kill the girl! Will Buffy and Willwo bond again? What will Cam find out next? Can you tell I'm now impatient for the next chapter, great writing and still awe-inspiring and mouth-dropping stuff. FAB!

Author's Response: The question is will they care if they do find out that he didn't kill the girl? Buffy needs a friend and hopefully Willow will fit the bill. I'm delighted that you're eager for more. The story is over twenty chapters long and so there is plenty more to come. :D

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/28/2009 - 09:35 pm Title: Chapter Eight

Oh, dear, Spike is in trouble again!

"...the anguish in the eyes had been replaced by a glint of steel. Cameron was the son of a slayer after all. " Oh, yeah, time for some Initiative a** kicking! lol

Thanks for the update. :)

Author's Response: Thanks for pulling the text out from the story. I love it when people do that :D Things are going to happen fast!

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/28/2009 - 05:50 pm Title: Chapter Eight

Another difficult chapter. I hope something breaks soon.

Author's Response: Hi Bridget, It will but maybe not in the way you'd hope :D Thanks for reading/commenting x

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