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Reviewer: mazza Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/10/2009 - 09:35 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen

your writing of Maggie Walsh is spot on - she is one cold hard bitch. Poor Cam - let's hope the paralysis is not permanent, please let Buffy get her hands on Walsh though I guess that will be a while coming. All I can say is you build tension so well, that my mind works overtime thinking what is coming next when I should be doing so many other things!

Author's Response: Thank for saying you like how I write Maggie - she is just such fun to write. Evil cow that she is! I'm glad that my story telling is keeping you gripped and having you think about what might happen :D

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/10/2009 - 07:57 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen

I wonder if any of the workers have a problem with a human teenager being paralyzed and trapped in their facility-- like that woman, maybe watching him breathe?

Oh, so much, angst, but all the suspense you're building with the questions around who helped Spike is moving the story along so well I worry it will be a long time before we get any sort of happy ending.

Author's Response: Hi there. They have crossed a line with their actions against Cam but as you will soon see - they have toyed with humans in the past... There is a way to go but the ending won't be an evil one - I promise you that. Thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/10/2009 - 01:19 am Title: Chapter Thirteen

Maggie Walsh = Evil and will also be dead after Buffy gets her hands on her! More please!

Author's Response: Maggie is just a delight to write! Can't get much more cold and unfeeling as her.

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/10/2009 - 12:56 am Title: Chapter Thirteen

One step forward and twenty steps back. I hope that Cam's paralysis is not permanent.? That would be beyond cruel. How in the world will this have a happty ending. I am almost afraid to read the next chapter because I fear the pain to be experienced by Spike and his family has not yet reached its peak. I will stick with this story until the end because I want to know how you will fix this horror. You certainly keep us on a roller coaster.

Author's Response: Thank you for sticking with and you're right there is more trouble afoot, but fear not gentle reader (sorry channelling Andrew there! LOL) things will work out in the end :D

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