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Reviewer: Laura Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2009 - 11:12 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

Well I am back. I try and try to stay away, but can not seem to stay away. I can not say that I have enjoyed the last several chapters, but I can not say that they were not well done. Many of my favorite books are not easy to read, the difference is that they are finished when I start reading. Yes I am one that will read the last few pages if I get to upset. I am relying on your promise for a happy ending. I am hoping a happy ending is not that the family gets a new pet named Spike. Also please put your sadistic talents(I mean that in a positive way) to good use when it comes to Maggie and Mark getting what they deserve.

Author's Response: Hi Laura. Bless you for hanging on in there! It is probably a story best read when complete in a way. I wasn't fibbing when I said things can be put right, and I have dropped a few clues along the way as to how this might occur. :D Thanks for letting me know you're still reading.

Reviewer: nat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2009 - 08:11 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

I think this is about as far as I go with this story. It's just too bleak and cruel for me, sorry. I like angst but the unremitting cruelty and sadistic characters are more than I can take.

Author's Response: Hi Nat. You are giving up just as the resuce begins but understand that the darkness may be too much for you. I have pormised Maryperk a fluffy spuffy so perhaps when I post that you'll give it a go? :D

Reviewer: chris Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2009 - 11:53 am Title: Chapter Twenty

It's a shame that you've had some negative feedback about this fic, yes it is very dark and disturbing, but you did make this clear when you started posting it so I am a bit baffled why some are not happy with it.
The writing is excellent and I read every chapter with my breath held, praying when I open up each chapter if that is going to be the one where Walsh gets her comeuppance.
It's going to be interesting to see how you manage to get things put right at the end of the fic.

Author's Response: Hi Chris, thank you very much for your kind words. They are much appreciated. I agree that being 'told off' for being dark when it has been warned of is a little odd, and sometimes they are a little harsh. I think this is perhaps a story some should read when complete. I'm delighted that you're enjoying it and that you're waiting with bated breath. Thanks again for commenting and I hope that when the rescue comes that I can still keep you on tenterhooks. :D

Reviewer: BlueEyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/26/2009 - 04:32 am Title: Chapter Twenty

I decided to check on this story after skipping it hoping to see that maybe you would keep your evil spike ways from getting out of hand. It is becoming too hard to read this story and I find myself skimming it hoping that maybe Maggie and her group would get what they deserve and there would be a happy ending but it seems obvious that it can never happen and it wouldn't be real if it did too much horror. I am only writing to say that you need not worry about a review from me again. I have decided that I cannot handle your story. It may be well written and very imaginative. I hope you have decided that Spike has endured enough and given him a chance at revenge.

Author's Response: You're giving up just as the rescuing begins! :D This is a novel length story and I'm some seven or eight chapters ahead of posting. Thank you for saying it is well written and imaginative. I disagree that the hopes for a happy ending would be unrealistic, but understand if the fic isn't for you. Thank you for helping me towards the 100 reviews mark - I didn't think that I'd get as many as I have had here as livejournal is busier for me.

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/26/2009 - 03:36 am Title: Chapter Twenty

I came back to see if you were still torturing Spike.. and maybe had some type of storyline going besides this.. getting worse it seems.

too bad. Its your story. I think you have the talent to write something better.

Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to comment, Pam. I appreciate it. Though I will have to say that although I will take it as a compliment when you say I have the talent to write somethng better - I am proud of how this story is written and of the plot. Perhaps it would have been fairer to say the talent to write something to your taste or not so dark ,rather than better? I have promised Maryperk a fluffy spuffy so perhaps you will try that when it gets posted? :D

Reviewer: scaryscouse Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/26/2009 - 12:29 am Title: Chapter Twenty

I haven't posted for a while because I didn't like where the story was going & I still don't. I'm disappointed that this is getting too cruel & sick. Neither Spike nor possibly Cam will be able to get out of this without serious psychological damage and Spike has been so physically damaged that Buffy would just stake him to put him out of his misery . If it doesn't pick up within the next few, I will have to give up on this story-its depressing

Author's Response: Well, as luck would have it the rescuing is on the way! I disagree that Buffy would stake Spike and have lots up my sleeve to ensure the boys recover in a believable way.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/25/2009 - 11:35 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

Cam is going to blame himself when he realises eventually what Maggie made him do to Spike. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Well thank you very much for saying you can't wait for more as this chapter has caused a bit of an exodus! LOL! The rescue will begin soon. See you tomorrow for the next chapter :D

Reviewer: mazza Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/25/2009 - 10:22 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

just read 19 and 20 tonight - with only a soft drink! What can I say - through the proverbial wringer again, how do you manage to keep such a high standard, you are truly amazing. Now all we can hope is that Willow can do some amazing magic to help all our boys out, and that Maggie will get her comeuppance soon. Excellent chapters!

Author's Response: Thank you very much, mazza, for letting me know that you enjoyed the chapters. Willow's appearance will indeed help things along and I hope you enjoy her arrival! :D Thanks again.

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