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Reviewer: mazza Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2010 - 06:17 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

oh my god - and in a blink we are back to tension, stress and can't wait for the next chapter! Writing is as strong as ever - is Riley now wondering what he has got into and will he really do what has to be done? I know some people find your style difficult to read but I think you maintain a high standard and don't let anyone influence you to change the outcomes or the the style. Evil rules!

Author's Response: Well, I couldn't leave it all happy for too long, could I? LOL! Thank you for letting me know you think the writing is still strong - it is a worry over a long action packed fic that it will drop off and I'm doing my best to keep it up there. I do have to roll my eyes a bit when people get a bit upset about the content as I have always clearly labelled the stories as dark. Rest assured, the plot isnt influenced by people's comments. I have actually got the last paragraph written down and where I'm taking it will still end up at that point. Thanks for the vote of confidence. I appreciate it.

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/16/2010 - 01:22 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

Well as usual there is never a break in the horrible things that will happen to spike and his family. I was hoping that Spike and Buffy would be able to plan their assault on Maggie and the initiative without having to suffer any more losses. It appears that is not meant to be. This is a difficult story to read for me because so many awful things occur. I know that you are the writer and I keep reading because I am hoping that Maggie gets what is coming to her but I don't know if I can read anymore if something horrid happens to Craig. It is your story and I believe you are a good writer because you evcke such a visceral response from me. Thanks for the update.

Author's Response: I did leave you with a hell of a cliffhanger there, didn't I? But there were also some clues... I'll say no more until the next chapter is up. ;)

Reviewer: spikesgrrl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/16/2010 - 01:21 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

Sometimes I really don't want to like this story, and sometimes like may not be the correct word, but you are an amazing writer. I'm just hoping for a less than gruesome ending.

Author's Response: I promised a less than gruesome ending right from the start - at least for out heroes anyway. :) Can't promise safety for the likes of Maggie Walsh. Thank you for saying that you like my writing :) That made me smile.

Reviewer: BlueEyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/16/2010 - 12:34 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

I came back I was curious as to how you might be fixing things and although there was some repair which I am grateful to read and I should have more faith that it could end well but I have read other stories of yours and you can end them quite well sadly. All I can hope for is that if nothing else that the horrors that have been done to the good will be inflected on Maggie; Riley too he may be a puppet but he made his choices. So I hope and look forward to when Buffy and team get their revenge please let their revenge be sweet and nasty.

Author's Response: I don't think you will be disappointed. I have promised a happy ending for this story right from the start, and I won't go back on that promise. Thanks for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2010 - 08:16 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

I would like to start off by saying that this is really well written story and it is very good. I stopped reading mainly because when there isn't any Spuffy moments for a while then I started to lose a interest a little. This story seems to be focus more on Spike and Cam. Which I don't mind Spike being the main focus because Spike is my favorite character and I love reading about him more than any other character in the Buffyverse. But it just didn't have enough Spuffy moments for me. I don't mind them being apart for a while like in the situation in this story or any other plot reason but after a while I need my Spike and Buffy. I do love reading Spike as a family man though. Spike would do anything to protect his love ones. Again, this is really well written story. Even though it has too little Spuffy moments for me I have still enjoyed what I have read so far. Just wanted you to know that.

Author's Response: Thanks for letting me know your thoughts. You're right, it is Spike and OC heavy. I hoped you enjoyed the previous couple of chapters as they did involve a bit of Spuffy! :D Thank you also for saying it is well written. I appreciate it x

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