Reviews For Goodbye, Iowa
Reviewer: jean Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2009 - 02:45 am Title: Chapter 1
Date: 10/22/2009 - 02:45 am Title: Chapter 1
Hi-I could understand easily what you were saying. I have friends who come from a couple of different countries. They are getting much better, but started out the same. You should probably get a beta or you may not get many readers. I do like the story and wish you luck.
Author's Response: Thanks, I'll try to fix everything
Reviewer: Jake Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2009 - 01:33 am Title: Chapter 1
Date: 10/22/2009 - 01:33 am Title: Chapter 1
Please get a beta and adjust the formatting. Other than that I would like to read it once those issues are finished. I will admit to not actually reading it due to those issues.