Reviews For Goodbye, Iowa
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Reviewer: jean Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2009 - 02:45 am Title: Chapter 1

Hi-I could understand easily what you were saying. I have friends who come from a couple of different countries. They are getting much better, but started out the same. You should probably get a beta or you may not get many readers. I do like the story and wish you luck.

Author's Response: Thanks, I'll try to fix everything

Reviewer: Jake Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2009 - 01:33 am Title: Chapter 1

Please get a beta and adjust the formatting. Other than that I would like to read it once those issues are finished. I will admit to not actually reading it due to those issues.

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