[Report This]Date: 01/24/2010 - 03:26 am Title: Chapter Six
Spike's POV was utterly divine. Your lack of dialogue and the characters' internal interpretation of their "obsession" and response to--is what makes this fic stand out. I'm wondering if this will change when they are forced to actually speak to one another using words, since their communication thus far has been rooted in smoldering silence. It's also interesting that she sees him as a fallen angel and he sees her as a golden goddess. Will reality be all that it's cracked up to be? Your story really and truly is rooted in the fantasy realm and very erotic.
Author's Response: You make my blush!!! I hope that when they meet the reality will be as good as the fantasy has been. I hope not to disappoint! I'm so glad that you have enjoyed!!!!
[Report This]Date: 01/23/2010 - 11:46 pm Title: Chapter Six
He certainly has a plan. I imagine he's gonna have his hands full when he tries to return her bag to her. Gotta love the fire in our little Buffy. Looking forward to it.
Author's Response: Hands full is an understandment!
[Report This]Date: 01/23/2010 - 07:38 pm Title: Chapter Six
This story is fantastic the right amount of tension vs anticipation. Well done
Author's Response: *blush* thanks so much!!!!
[Report This]Date: 01/23/2010 - 04:39 pm Title: Chapter Six
Even better than just a name but her id. Tara, Tara I knew she would be the one to tell but to give him all that knowledge. I can't wait for next chapter and I hope you find another creative naked moment for them to meet again. But most importantly I just want them to meet.
Author's Response: Always naked moments! It would be a waste of a perfect body if he wasn't!!!
[Report This]Date: 01/23/2010 - 02:24 pm Title: Chapter Six
:) So Spike had at last the opportunity to see Buffy closer, how she looked like.
And now he has a name too, thanks to Tara.
Looking forward to who will make the first move.
Author's Response: More will be coming!
[Report This]Date: 01/23/2010 - 02:12 pm Title: Chapter Six
Oh, Tara.. a quick gaze I guess to evaluate.. But giving him Buffy's possessions? Kind of a big leap of faith.
But ready for the return of said possessions..
Enjoyed.
Author's Response: Yeah, but Tara has always been a good judge of character. We won't bring up Willow when she was abusing magic, but overall, a good judge of character!
[Report This]Date: 01/19/2010 - 12:12 am Title: Chapter Five
what a great way for them to meet! I love it!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad that you enjoyed
[Report This]Date: 01/18/2010 - 09:33 pm Title: Chapter Five
Ohhhh :)
When I read about the classes Buffy went through I hoped Spike would be a part of the class. Thought first he would attend it (or maybe be a teacher), didn't expect him to model. :D
Heh heh but she tried to run again. That got definitely the attention of everybody.
Author's Response: Which both are good ways to take it, but I wanted to be original. Hopefully you didn't see that one coming!
[Report This]Date: 01/18/2010 - 09:24 pm Title: Chapter Five
wow love it! i could feel the heat between them. and it ended just when it was getting good! he should chase after her and have a long night of much needed release for both of them =D. great writing. can't wait to read more
Author's Response: *blush* I'm glad that you enjoy my writing. Oh course it's going to end when it's getting good, that will hopefully ensure that you'll read the next chapter! I'm wicked aren't I?
[Report This]Date: 01/18/2010 - 08:16 pm Title: Chapter Five
damn... must not drool on the keyboard... cannot wait for the nxt chapter... or the meeting between buffy and spike :D
Author's Response: Wipe down the keys so you'll be able to locate the next chapter that will be coming soon!
[Report This]Date: 01/18/2010 - 07:46 am Title: Chapter Five
OMG! I was so excited for the next chapter and then it wasn't there! Please update soon!! Amazing story!!!
Author's Response: The next chapter will be coming soon, I promise
[Report This]Date: 01/18/2010 - 07:31 am Title: Chapter Five
I am completely, totally, addicted. This is such a good fic. More please. Need more.... :D
Author's Response: I am glad that I can feed your addiction! More will be coming soon
[Report This]Date: 01/18/2010 - 06:39 am Title: Chapter Five
Love love love love love!!! If only I'd had a model like him in my figure drawing classes...
More please!
Author's Response: Don't we all wish we had a man like that sprawled out in our rooms!
[Report This]Date: 01/18/2010 - 04:48 am Title: Chapter Five
They meet! I'm excited for more!
Author's Response: More will be coming soon!
[Report This]Date: 01/18/2010 - 04:42 am Title: Chapter Five
this last chapter was so amazing you really took this story to a whole new level. I can't wait to read the next chapter :)
Author's Response: *blush* I'm flattered! With this story, its about going where I haven't gone before. I'm glad that its working
[Report This]Date: 01/18/2010 - 03:17 am Title: Chapter Five
Love that they've sort of made contact. And that Buffy isn't quite ready to handle it. Can't say that I'm surprised, but love waiting for them to try to figure out what it all means. Please update soon.
Author's Response: thanxs. More to come soon!
[Report This]Date: 01/18/2010 - 02:31 am Title: Chapter Five
Awesome chapter! Loved the way you brought from dream to reality. Can't wait for the next chapter! This is gonna be awesome!
Author's Response: thanks! The next chapter will be coming soon!
[Report This]Date: 01/18/2010 - 02:31 am Title: Chapter Five
Awesome chapter! Loved the way you brought from dream to reality. Can't wait for the next chapter! This is gonna be awesome!
Author's Response: I'm glad that you enjoyed the transition. Next chapter will be coming soon!
[Report This]Date: 01/18/2010 - 02:23 am Title: Chapter Five
They sure have interesting nakedness ways of meeting each other. But now she has a name and now he knows her class and I am sure he plans to stick around to find out what her name is.
Author's Response: I have to come up with creative ways! Everyone, even myself, has written I take off mine, you take off yours!
[Report This]Date: 01/18/2010 - 12:25 am Title: Chapter Five
Awesome night job, also good work on the descriptive nature on this chapter. Heck, this whole story has been made by the descriptive narrative, or at least for me.
Author's Response: *blush* thank you for your review. I'm wordy by nature and when I write I want the reader to see what I see. I'm glad that it's working for you.
[Report This]Date: 01/17/2010 - 11:43 pm Title: Chapter Five
And what a meeting.. LOL
She is going to tell the professor what? Maybe at least her name will be mentioned .. and he will be able to find her apartment..
Enjoyed..
Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked it. Just wait and see...
[Report This]Date: 01/17/2010 - 06:26 am Title: Chapter Four
Spike, have you tried leaving her a note stuck to your window?
Author's Response: now what would be the fun in that?
[Report This]Date: 01/14/2010 - 12:20 am Title: Chapter Four
Spike sure is consumed with thoughts of Buffy. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Buffy is not the only one tormented with someone which is out of your reach
[Report This]Date: 01/13/2010 - 10:03 pm Title: Chapter Four
Wondering what his side job is?
Author's Response: (insert evil laugh here) keep reading!
[Report This]Date: 01/13/2010 - 06:22 pm Title: Chapter Four
*phew* I hoped Spike was only dreaming, glad that I was right. :)
And Buffy is a lot in his dreams. Where is Buffy anyway? On the run? I'd guessed that by now Spike would have tried to find her.
Enjoyed. :)
Author's Response: Keep reading, she's not gone for long.
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