Could be a good story from the summary. But if you write something bigger you should definitely try to get a beta for help. Because spell check? This isn't the solution, I should know, rereading my reviews. ;)
A gun is a pistol; I'm sure you mean Gunn. That's what a beta should find. A good beta can only make a story better. Good luck for finding one.
(Hope this won't keep you from writing, only by doing - practicing - you can learn.)

Author's Response: No I completely want all feedback I need to be beaten on the head when it comes to writing and grammar lol. Thank you for pointing out the gun thing. I so knew it was Gunn. I can't believe I did that. Are you betaing by any chance? I tried getting one but she wasn't taking any stories on.