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Reviewer: BlueEyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2010 - 01:27 am Title: Chapter 20

Please let this be non-angst I try to be angst by William and Dru only to have it blow back in their face. Please have Buffy and William remain strong and smart.

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2010 - 12:28 am Title: Chapter 20

the drama feels a bit too forced, and i find william's backstory a little hard to believe. if that's how buffy fights back, she's going to get eaten alive by dru, i wish she had more of a backbone here.

Reviewer: Rose Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2010 - 06:00 pm Title: Chapter 19

My advice to Buffy, install a lock on your bedroom that only you have keys to, and make sure Angel's bedroom is as far from yours as possible.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2010 - 07:24 am Title: Chapter 19

I just have to wonder what Joyce is thinking. It seems like things will be a bit harder in the actual divorce proceedings if her new boyfriend is already living with her. But maybe not. Poor Buffy, going from independent living to a full house is certainly not ideal. And there is surely going to be trouble with Angel. I do want to know the details behind the strained relationship between William and his father. Surely it will explain him a bit more. Can't wait. Update soon.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/17/2010 - 09:51 pm Title: Chapter 18

Bad plan Dru has there. I hope Buffy and William won't do what Dru thinks they will.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/17/2010 - 03:53 am Title: Chapter 18

And the plan has been revealed. Wonder how that will go over. Do hope Buffy and Spike figure it all out. Please, update soon.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/17/2010 - 03:43 am Title: Chapter 17

Poor children. The sins of the father (and Mother.) Hope she forgives him...

Reviewer: Charlie Aome Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/17/2010 - 12:48 am Title: Chapter 18

oh no what have you done TMSP! ur being so mean lol. it's ok the story's getting really good. Pat yourself on the back for a chapter well done :)

Reviewer: Charlie Aome Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/17/2010 - 12:31 am Title: Chapter 17

come on. there are exceptions to every rule. good god man (rupert) have a heart

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/16/2010 - 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 17

Uh-huh... Buffy may have parents yet she is alone like an orphan. Even worse, an orphan would get adoptive (or foster) parents. She must be very lonesome indeed.
Speaking of misunderstandings again - William didn't tell that he promised not so see Buffy. Now she things the worst again. *sigh*

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2010 - 08:43 pm Title: Chapter 16

William and Buffy are so adorable in this story. More please.

Reviewer: Charlie Aome Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2010 - 08:19 pm Title: Chapter 16

I liked it. I'm glad the waited. It would have seemed too son if they got together like that. I like that she picked the lion king. so cute. and i didn't know it was based on hamlet. see u learn something new everyday. good update looking forward to more :)

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2010 - 03:05 am Title: Chapter 16

Love the way they actually used common sense rather than diving head long into something they couldn't take back. Yet, they have a bit of an idea as to what they're missing now. Can't imagine they'll have too long to wait now. And Giles passing up the kiss on the first date and regretting it. Not to mention his continued disdain for Buffy, and Finding her underwear... That will be another fun argument between father and son. Update soon!

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/14/2010 - 05:05 pm Title: Chapter 16

what lack of spuffy? there was plenty in this chapter, i for one am glad they didn't have sex yet, that's not something that should happen on the first date. i never really thought that about the lion king before, very cool.

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/14/2010 - 04:58 pm Title: Chapter 5

From William to Spike.. waiting to see what happens with Dru..

Enjoying.

Reviewer: BlueEyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/14/2010 - 04:52 pm Title: Chapter 16

I agree that the Spuffy moment wasn't there yet because they
are still so unsure of the other feeling and of their own. I am curious as to what will happen to warm Giles to Buffy and what he plans to say to William.

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/14/2010 - 04:51 pm Title: Chapter 3

Poor Geek William- Being made over I assume ... and part of a "bet" between Buffy and Dru..

enjoying

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/14/2010 - 02:17 pm Title: Chapter 16

They are so cute; hope they can always solve their misunderstandings.
Even more because they fell asleep while watching.
The talk with Rupert should go well. ;) (hopefully)

Reviewer: Charlie Aome Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2010 - 04:02 pm Title: Chapter 15

lol to the last line. great chapter. really well written. imagery was great. feel proud this a great story :)

Reviewer: Charlie Aome Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2010 - 03:53 pm Title: Chapter 14

so evil lol but i love it :)

Reviewer: Charlie Aome Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2010 - 03:46 pm Title: Chapter 13

OMG so not expecting that lol. I mean i knew it couldn't be Giles because he's only going on a date and Joyce is engaged and Giles seemed pretty sincere about it only being a date, but Angel's dad. Holy crap! Poor Buffy. Is it date night yet? lol great chapter

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2010 - 01:32 pm Title: Chapter 15

To wait and not to pressure sounds like a good idea, give time to get to know the other better. But I don't think it will be easy for them to achieve that. ;))
Till next part. :)

Reviewer: Charlie Aome Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2010 - 07:21 am Title: Chapter 12

Dru's a bitch. i hope she trips and falls and scrapes up her face the skanky ho. good chapter :) and thank god hehe :)

Reviewer: Charlie Aome Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2010 - 11:23 pm Title: Chapter 11

oh no what have you done? they both think the other needs space. stupid teenagers doesn't anyone just say things anymore? lol great chapter :)

ps. i liked the last one. i reviewed but i from ur AN from this chapter i didn't want u to think i hated it. i was surprised but nothing more. it was a good read :)

pps. i think i thought he was inside the house because u said he fell asleep. i assumed he went inside and fell asleep not just passed out on the lawn lol.

Reviewer: Charlie Aome Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2010 - 11:15 pm Title: Chapter 10

OMG how could u do that and why the fuck is she in the house! omg someone get the Raid lol.

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