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Reviewer: Charlie Aome Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2010 - 10:41 pm Title: Chapter 6

really well written chapter :) i like how the endings for both views were so similar and on a good parallel :) great job

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2010 - 10:03 pm Title: Chapter 15

Love that drive pulling them together. And the song. Darling chapter. Love him trying to be valiant. Wonder how long that will last. :) Update soon!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2010 - 07:04 am Title: Chapter 14

Fantastically wicked little minx. Love that. Hope they get to have at least one awesome date before the drama starts. :) Update soon!

Reviewer: sober_angel Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2010 - 12:36 am Title: Chapter 14

what a tease! lol that's hilarious! go buffy! make him work for it a bit. i'm excited to read the next chapter. update soon

Reviewer: Anna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2010 - 12:21 am Title: Chapter 14

I LOVE THIS SO MUCH. UPDATE NOW.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2010 - 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 14

Heh heh, Buffy is such a tease. :)
The room sounds lovely.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2010 - 10:57 pm Title: Chapter 13

Mmmmh wonder what news Rupert has to tell.
Oh... and he was about to tell. But with Joyce there having news too - I wonder if the news are related.
Or not... Angel's father? Ah well, that isn't so good.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2010 - 10:45 pm Title: Chapter 12

You usually post faster than this? I found a lot of chapters to catch up to! :)
Good to see that William wanted to end the giving space time. Too bad Dru has her own plans. But good to be able to read on.

Reviewer: sober_angel Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2010 - 10:46 am Title: Chapter 13

wow! for a sec there i thought it was gonna be spike's dad but then i thought 'why would rupert tell spike he's going on a date if it was him that joyce was engaged to?' but i was not expecting angel's dad. this is gonna become twisted and either angel is going to help dru and cause problems for buffy and spike or he's going to help them. i really can't see it being good that he's gonna be buffy's stepbrother though so he's probly gonna help dru. great story so far! i'm excited to read the rest! update soon!

Reviewer: coalitiongirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2010 - 02:56 am Title: Chapter 13

Wow, you completely had me fooled with this chapter! But I much prefer the idea of Joyce with Angel's dad than with William's - otherwise, it probably would have become too much of a soap opera. ;) This way, more conflict! Looking forward to more, and loving these frequent updates!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2010 - 02:43 am Title: Chapter 13

Yup, wasn't expecting that. Bringing Angel into this cannot be any good. Wonder how much Dru knows about this. Cuz I bet she's having some fun. And I wonder who Rupert is going on a date with... Very interesting. Please, update soon.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2010 - 02:33 am Title: Chapter 12

"Unfortunately, neither William nor Buffy could get their heads out of their asses long enough to realize that they were in love."

And they finally are being open with each other. I do wonder what Dru is gonna try. They shouldn't let her have power, but we don't always use logic when we are in high school. A lovely coming together, indeed.

Reviewer: enbick Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2010 - 12:29 am Title: Chapter 13

Fucking awesome story. idk what other reviewers are talking about. fuck them - they don't know what real writing is. love the author.

Reviewer: enbick Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2010 - 12:23 am Title: Chapter 13

Fucking awesome story. idk what other reviewers are talking about. fuck them - they don't know what real writing is.

Author's Response: THANK YOU :)

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/10/2010 - 10:57 pm Title: Chapter 13

well, at least it's not giles, but this so doesn't make any sense to me. i'm trying to get into this story, but it keeps confusing me more and more. joyce is technically still married, but she's engaged to someone else? yeah, it doesn't work like that, you can't be married to two people. she must not know about buffy's past with angel, or she wouldn't have been so giddy about the whole thing. i don't see this ending well. as for william, if his mother left them, then i don't see why he's so upset about his father dating, he has a right to.

Author's Response: Ok, I am going to clarify some stuff in hopes that you will keep reading. Alright, so Joyce and Hank Summers do not live together. Minus the legalities, they are basically divorced. You CAN get engaged to someone even when you are still married. Joyce will have to deal with Hank at some point, but they aren't part of each others' lives. I haven't talked about whether or not Buffy told Joyce about Angel, but chances are high that she didn't cause Joyce is barely around. As for William and Giles, it is extremely painful when a single parent begins dating someone else. Giles may have the right to date and William did overreact, but there are things you still don't know about their past. I hope that helps.

Reviewer: Sibb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/10/2010 - 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 13

Wow! wasn't expecting that one :-). You had me fooled into thinking it was Giles. This is going to end up being pretty messy isn't it? Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/10/2010 - 05:47 pm Title: Chapter 12

Finally! Well, almost finally. Dru doesn't seem like the type of gal to let things go lightly. What is her deal anyway? Besides her being crazy of course, but she is extremely and unreasonably evil. Makes for a great story though! Love to see William finding himself. Hope he can patch his relationship with his dad! :-)

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/10/2010 - 05:15 pm Title: Chapter 12

it's really sad that dru has to ruin people's lives in order to feel superior, that shows how truly pathetic her life is. i hope whatever she plans backfires, and that she gets taken down instead, someone needs to teach that bitch a lesson

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2010 - 10:34 pm Title: Chapter 11

"It was all his fault. He made her feel for him with no proof of him feeling the same way. She was full of him."

I love that they are so experiencing the same doubt and bubbling infatuation and yet have no idea how mutual it really is. And William standing up to Dru was pretty awesome, but knocking down the queen Bee is not gonna go without consequence. Wondering what is gonna hit the fan in this universe. Please, update soon.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2010 - 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 11

No seems like Dru is just noisy.
And it sounds as if Buffy will stop being Dru's puppet. We'll see how it goes. There is still William who will help her.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2010 - 10:22 pm Title: Chapter 10

Dun dun dun (or something like that, not sure how it's written) - Dru?
Seems even if WIlliam isn't 'into Dru', Dru is 'into' William?
Surprising. Do they know each other after all?
*reads on*

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2010 - 04:07 pm Title: Chapter 11

I hope in the next chapter Buffy and Spike get back together.

Reviewer: laemda Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2010 - 01:38 pm Title: Chapter 11

Just found this story and it's great thanks...

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2010 - 06:26 am Title: Chapter 10

Well, we've got Buffy's side of the story, and she knows that William was never into Dru, but it seems that Dru is gonna get her claws into him somehow. Through breaking and entering, no less. highly interesting. Looking forward to what happens next. And I hope Buffy really hears what he confessed to when he said he wasn't into Dru. Loving it. Please, update soon!

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2010 - 05:50 am Title: Chapter 10

now looking at the ending again, i realize they're not in his room, but still, the only obvious answer i have is that dru saw buffy with william, and now she wants to steal him away from her. after everything buffy told him about the bitch, i really don't see that happening.

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