Date: 02/27/2010 - 11:04 pm Title: Two
This is an interesting premise, but I did find this chapter hard to read with the extremely long paragraphs and little dialogue to break it up.
It is always difficult to know how to add the back story, but it makes it more interesting if you can trickle it with current action.
I think you are a good storyteller in the making. :D
Date: 02/25/2010 - 06:52 am Title: Two
I love backstories. Spike's fallacies make him more real to Buffy. Very telling--the line where Buffy said she was opening the door for William. I really like this chapter for giving us a glimpse of the past.
Date: 02/25/2010 - 03:14 am Title: Two
Well written....unique view....please continue!
Date: 02/24/2010 - 11:28 pm Title: Two
Loved to hear from their past; will be interesting to read what Spike felt (the incident).
Enjoyed the update.
Date: 02/24/2010 - 11:21 pm Title: Two
I like it want to hear more.
Date: 02/24/2010 - 11:15 pm Title: Two
They have so much tension. I love their history. The big bad man after the little book worm. I do not know how she successfully resisted him. I suppose that explanation will be up and coming. Update soon.
Date: 02/24/2010 - 05:08 pm Title: Two
Love it! More, please!