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Reviewer: Rose Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/08/2010 - 02:06 am Title: Chapter 11

Since the council has verified Ms Bennett's dealing with Hermes, can Buffy go kick her in her assets now?

Author's Response: Hee... very good question. I can't tell you the circumstances because I don't want to spoil it for you, but be assured that Ms. Bennett will get what she deserves... and it won't be pretty. ;) Thank you for the lovely review, Rose!!! :D

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2010 - 04:10 pm Title: Chapter 11

On one hand Buffy knows now that she doesn't need to open a portal because nobody went through it. But now Buffy lost her hope, no good.

Spike seems to be lost now. He too doesn't have hope because he lost Buffy. This is a feral Spike, killing (even if he was hesitating first). Buffy knew the kind human he was; no wonder she has trouble accepting him (when they meet in an earlier chapter, the flash back / flash forward).

Author's Response: Indeed. It's a hopless situation for her because now she's finally starting to realize there's nothing she can do to change what happened. Buffy can no longer pretend that William didn't die. Yup, losing Buffy threw him over the edge and he no longer cares about anything but making everyone else hurt as much as he does. He'll truly be a vamp though he's still William at heart and he can't change that. By the time they meet, Spike won't be the shy sweet boy Buffy had first met. But he's still there, buried beneath the demon. Thank you for the awesome review!!! :)

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/03/2010 - 12:05 am Title: Chapter 10

Love Buffy's foray into destruction. Such a true reaction to grief. And I'm glad she has Faith with her. Hope she can get to William soon. Vamp or not, I can't imagine him not still loving her. Update soon.

Author's Response: She was in a shock and due to her being the Slayer it threw her into the feral destructive state. She's still at the point when she can't really admit to herself that William is really dead and she can't change it. Faith will be probably the closest thing Buffy has to a friend right now. Nope, vamp or not, Buffy is still the most important thing in William's heart. :) Though thinking she's dead will drive him to do some things he probably wouldn't if he knew she were alive. More soon and thank you for the lovely review!!! :D

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/02/2010 - 02:40 pm Title: Chapter 10

Thought after a while that WIlliam would die because we saw Vamp!Spike in a later chapter. Though they both think the other is dead. That's just as if the other was dead (when you think the other is). Hope that made sense.

Buffy got out of school now? *is curious* I thought she was sold, never be able to cross the school again (leave it). Ah I see. Clever - though I'm not sure why Buffy knew all of a sudden. And it was good to go with Giles (I don't think she could have left later without another fight).
And strangely Buffy is right about What if William wasn't dead at all? He might be somewhere, a hell dimension the man had taken him to, waiting for her to come for him. He could have gone to hell hadn't it been for Drusilla to turn him.
So the players are now where the should be... wonder what happens next. Looking forward to find out.

Author's Response: Yep, that was a pretty huge foreshadow of things to come. You knew he'd become a vamp, but you didn't know the circumstances... now you do! :D It made sense, don't worry I got you. ;) They both believe the other is dead and it will influence their behaviour. She was bound to school by the contract and once she destroyed them, she basically freed anyone bound by the barrier. She realized it from the dream she'd had, but it was too late. Thta's why she'll now have the guilt weighing heavily on her conscience. Had she been smarter and realized it sooner, she'd have saved him. Poor Giles will have two teenagers living with him now... bot something he's used to. Guess Dru palyed the role of saviour in this one although she turned him into a monster... at least his soul hasn't been sucked to Hell. More soon and thank you for the wonderful review!!! :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2010 - 09:17 pm Title: Chapter 9

Hope you won't hate me for the following chapters. Because of killing Spike or Spike/other? *Off to the chapter to read.*

Yeah, definitely killing William (Spike). And the other thing coming too I guess.
Poor William - dying thinking Buffy will die too, that all will have been in vain. I wonder if (what) he'll remember when he is turned.

Author's Response: The whole having William murdered thing. *sheepish* But he's not dead... not really, so it's all better, right? Though they bth think the other is dead. :( Don't you worry about the 'other' thing... the only person William/Spike will ever love is Buffy and I'm not planning on anything graphic when it's not with each other. :) Just thought I'd put the warning just in case, since they will be some insinuations, not as much with Buffy as with Spike though. More tomorrow! :D You're such a lovely person for leaving me all those kind reviews, cordykitten... thank you!!! *hugs*

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/28/2010 - 02:51 am Title: Chapter 9

Knew the head mistress was a complete Bitch. Good to see a slayer in her midst now. Things will not stay her way forever anymore. And with all that badness, it's good to see a few familiar faces in the fold. Wonder what shall happen next. Update soon.

Author's Response: She is the queen of Bitchland. *nods* But she will get what's coming to her eventually... and it won't be pretty. ;) Even if Buffy is the Slayer she wasn't able to save WIlliam. :( She won't be such a happy camper for a while. You'll get to see another familiar face soon. I'm thinking of updating this week... probably Friday. Thank you for the kind review!!! :D

Reviewer: Blue Eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/28/2010 - 02:07 am Title: Chapter 9

I do not sense Dru's action as that of evil more of doing what the powers truly want done. I can only hope that Buffy manages to at least get Ms. Bennett and wonder when the two shall meet up again.

Author's Response: You're right... it wasn't about her being evil, and I'll try to show more sides to both Dru and Darla. Hee... powers did want it done, in this case me. ;) Don't you worry, Ms. Bennett will get what she deserves in due time, sooner than Buffy and Spike will meet that's for sure. Thank you for the lovely review!!! :D

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2010 - 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 8

What a nightmare - does that mean that Buffy will be the slayer?
...The feel of energy zapping along her nerves could be. To hunt Definitely. So it began, huh? Buffy becoming the slayer first. Well I think she'll have (she'll find) a lot to hunt there at the school.

And that was step one, step two is following soon, huh? With William gone now.

Do I need to start to bite my nails?
;)


Author's Response: *grins* So perceptive. Yeah it definitely was the sign of Buffy being infested with the Slayer essence. She is the Chosen One now, but she doesn't know it yet... how could she? There will be some action in the next chapter and Buffy will definitely have her fair share of slayage. ;) Yup coming very soon. ;) Hope the circumstances will be at least a little unexpected. Bite them! :D Hope you won't hate me for the following chapters. lol thank you for the awesome review!!! :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2010 - 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 7

Oh then they weren't caught? Lucky ones. *wonders what that that was in Buffy's way.
Heh heh Buffy is such a tease. ;))
But how could William resist? That's just impossible. *ggg*
Late reading - hope to be earlier next time.

Author's Response: Hee... thought I'd be that cruel, did you? :P I didn't want them getting into trouble prematurely, it's much better to have them cuddle and try to pointlessly resist each other. lol You noticed the thingie, eh? ;) Can't tell you what it was but you'll se soon. *ominous sound* Good thing we don't want them to resist, right? I'm glad you read it at all and thank you for the delightful review!!! :D

Reviewer: victoria2 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2010 - 08:06 pm Title: Chapter 7

Absolutely love this story! Always was a sucker for William fics and this is a good one. Can't wait for the next chap. And yes...... I do totally want to just pinch their cheeks. lol

Author's Response: *grins* I love it that you love it! :D You're sweet and awesome in case you didn't know. And a kindred spirit as well, since I'm a sucker for William too. Spike or William, I love all the incarnations of his character. :) Hee... their cheeks absolutely beg to be pinched... both sets in William's case. ;) More soon and thank you for the lovely review, victoria!!! :D

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2010 - 12:31 pm Title: Chapter 7

I have been reading your story and have failed to review the prior chapters. This story is intriquing to me. The school is exceptionally creepy and so is the headmistress. I can't imagine how William will become vamped but it seems that you are alluding to Buffy being a slayer. I like William and Buffy together they are sweet. Very good story.

Author's Response: But you're reviewing now. :D See how amazing you are? I love reviews, I'm a review slut, really, so feel free to leave me one next time too if you feel like it. ;) I'm very glad you're liking it so far and you're right to think the school is creepy... shifty things going on in there as you could see. You'll actually get to know how he becomes a vamp in a couple of chapters and if Buffy indeed becomes the Slayer. Thank you for the yummy review, Bridget!!! :)

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2010 - 12:23 am Title: Chapter 7

Love her getting kicked out again. May as well just give up on the whole rooming with Faith thing. Any reason we can come up with to get them groiny. :) Update soon.

Author's Response: Hee... thought you'd like it, you naughty girl. ;) Good thing Faith is being Faith. I love it when your mind is in the gutter, though the groiny art might take a while. *scowls at the lack of sexins* More soon and thank you for the wonderful review!!! :D

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/10/2010 - 04:39 am Title: Chapter 6

Love them carrying on. And I do wonder if they are going to get caught. Sure hope they don't. They've got a lot of Spuffy left to experience. Update soon!

Author's Response: I love it that you love it! :D You'll get to see if they get caught next week, but I can tell you there will be more Spuffy. ;) You're very sweet for leaving me the review, thank you!!! :)

Reviewer: Brittany Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/10/2010 - 03:41 am Title: Chapter 6

ending this chapter like that=not cool!!

Author's Response: But... but... *pouts* I'll make it better soon! :D See, I can be good... sometimes. Thank you for the yummy review, Brittany!!! ;)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2010 - 05:59 pm Title: Chapter 6

Poor Buffy - for know she is happy to have met William. She didn't have much luck with her family yet. I enjoy their tale very much.
Uh-huh.huh... I feared the worst when they strolled in the kitchen for a midnight snag. And now it seems as if they are caught. *fingers crossed for the best*
Looking forward to more (soon?).

Author's Response: Even when she loses William, having met him gave her someone to feel close to since her mother and Ted are hardly creating a loving family. I'm happy you're enjoying so far, there will be more Buffy/William interaction soon. :) Strawberries and whipped cream come at a price... or do they?? ;) You'l find out soon (next week). Thank you for the wonderful review!!! :D

Reviewer: B Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2010 - 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 6

OMG! they're going to get caught. Can't wait to see what happens

Author's Response: Hee... are they?? ;) But stealing those strawberries would be so worth it if they got caught. More soon and thank you for the lovely review, B!!! :D

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2010 - 06:21 am Title: Chapter 5

Destiny. Love the thought. Love their addiction to each other... in just a few days even. Hope they get to enjoy each other a bit before all hell breaks loose. Update soon.

Author's Response: And I love it that you love it. ;) It might feel to them that destiny has to be behind them feeling so connected to each other, but what happens when it tears them apart? There will be more sweetness before it happens though. :) And you know I'll make it better eventually. Thank you for the sweet review!!! :D

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2010 - 11:08 pm Title: Chapter 5

Wow, Sallie Bennett is older than I thought. I fear what person (or better: soul) Hermes wants to have.
Loved the spuffyness though.
Happy Easter to you too.

Author's Response: Oh yeah, she definitely is older than she looks. BUT she is still human, not a demon despite her age. Hermes is going to get someone to take with him, but it might turn out a bit different than you think. ;) You'll see. I loved writing the spuffyness, more of it next week. Yay for Easter break! Thank you for the wonderful review!!! :D

Reviewer: B Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/01/2010 - 02:24 am Title: Chapter 4

I love the characters you've created. I seriously reread chapters while I wait for more updates.

Author's Response: *grins* I'm happy you like this version of them. You reread the chapters? You're so awesome! :D Honestly, you just made my day. Thank you for the wonderful review, B!!! :D

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2010 - 10:18 pm Title: Chapter 4

Faith was calling then; kicked out of her room wasn't that bad with William there to the rescue.
They are helping the other to heal. Too bad that you've said things will get bad soon. :(
But I enjoyed the update.

Author's Response: Yup, good thing Buffy had William to help her after being kicked out of her room by Faith. Buffy and William are getting closer and closer. Things will get bad, but I'll make them better eventually. ;) I'm happy you enjoyed, cordykitten and thank you for the kind review!!! :D

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2010 - 09:20 pm Title: Chapter 3

The people of the city where the school is seem to be in denial too that they don't notice people vanishing.
Buffy and William are so sweet. :))
But just for now I guess, bad things will happen at this school.
And you're a tease but you knew that already, right? ;))

Author's Response: Yup, they definitely repress the strange going ons threre... something like Sunnydale people. lol Hee... I just want to ruffle their hair. ;) Badness will come and wreak havoc eventually. Of the supernatural nature. ;) Try enjoying the sweetness till it lasts. *evil laugh* Yeah, I am well aware of that. ;) Dunno, it just makes me feel naughty. Thank you for the yummy review!!! :D

Reviewer: Elly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2010 - 01:27 am Title: Chapter 3

Oh you TEASE!!! I loved it! Can't wait for the next installment!

Author's Response: *grins* People keep calling me that. I wonder why. ;) Hee... I love it that you loved it and there will be more soon. Thank you for the sweet review, Elly!!! :D

Reviewer: B Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/26/2010 - 04:26 pm Title: Chapter 3

I can't wait for more.

Author's Response: I'm happy to hear that! ;) Thank you for the sweet review, B!!! :)

Reviewer: nea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/23/2010 - 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 2

This was delightful. I loved the Buffy/William interaction. I'm seriously looking forward to the rest of this gem of a story.

Author's Response: I'm really happy you enjoyed the chapter. :) More Buffy/William interaction coming soon and they will get closer to each other in the following chapters. You're being very kind, thank you for the sweet review, nea!!! :D

Reviewer: lori Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2010 - 10:58 pm Title: Chapter 2

Always wished Buffy was there to defend William/reassure him after Cecily's public trouncing of his heart and feelings. The outburst just gives us a smidge of what is to come out of Spike later. Since it's not Cecily that leads William to Dru (since I'm going to assume that Dru is the "soul sucker"), then it's got to be the heartbreak Buffy brings him later.

I'm liking the interplay between Buffy and William lots. Update soon!

Author's Response: I always feel so sorry for poor William every time I watch Fool For Love. He's just so heartbroken and humiliated and I feel about it just like you do. Great minds think alike and all that, right? ;) So of course I had to have Buffy be there for him as much as he would let her at this point. Hee.. the outburst was definitely that Spike part of William. ;) Love your speculations! :D But nope, it's neither. You'll see. More soon, promise and thank you for the amazing review!!! :D

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