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Reviewer: PaganBaby Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2010 - 03:11 am Title: Chapter 17, Wedding Day

The wedding and mating ceremonies were awesome! :D And what a perfect song for them to dance their first dance to :) It had the right sentiment, and it was sung by The Ramones - a little something for both of them - so it just worked perfectly lol I loved the chapter *smoochies*

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the song! I really searched hard for one I thought Spike would pick. I didn't think "I wanna be sedated' would've been appropriate . . . LOL! Thanks so much for leaving a review! I really appreciate it. -Passion4Spike 2010.04.04

Reviewer: PaganBaby Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2010 - 02:53 am Title: Chapter 16, Liam, Angelus, Angel

It was cool that Buffy didn't have to ponder whether she wanted to do the mating ritual. It's just so wonderful to read a Buffy that's confident and knows she loves Spike :D

Grrrr Angel needs a severe beating! His anger and frustration that she chose Spike caused more Angelus than Angel to come out. Thank goodness Spike doesn't adhere to traditions like not seeing the bride the night before the wedding!

Great chapter! *hugggles*

Author's Response: I think that definately Angelus is not as far under the surface as Angel would like everyone to think . . . at least in my world - and the green-eyed monster can bring it out in him really fast. Spike, of course, is still a rebel - you KNOW he's not gonna go for that "stay away" thing! Pleeeze! Thanks for posting!!! I really appreciate it! Yummy goodness for my sould and my muse! -Passion4Spike 2010.04.04

Reviewer: PaganBaby Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2010 - 02:41 am Title: Chapter 15, Secrets

Ooh I was worried a bit there when Spike was being all secretive - but he was just being wonderful! :D Yay! All the little moments between Spike and Buffy were so good for the Spuffy lover's soul :)

Love it! *smooches*

Author's Response: Oh, I'm glad. Our souls got so beaten up by JW, etal - I thought we needed a little TLC! Thanks so much for posting! it means a lot! -Passion4Spike 2010.04.04

Reviewer: PaganBaby Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2010 - 02:19 am Title: Chapter 14, Routines

Spike getting the 3rd degree from Joyce over dinner was so funny :D It just tickled me to have a cocky, 100+ year old Master Vampire having to do the 'Yes, Ma'am - No, Ma'am' thing lol There were so many funny bits in this chapter - so well done! And the hotness of the workout and Spanish lessons scenes were muy caliente! :D I love this story!

*smoochies & love*

Author's Response: Thanks so much, PB! I loved when he slipped back into William for a minute there and got caught . . . OOPS! Glad you liked it!! Muchas Gracias! -Passion4Spike 2010.04.03

Reviewer: Hart Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2010 - 07:47 am Title: Chapter 27, The Promise

Love your story and you have been great with the updates, But I have to confess despite finding your story on this site I was kind of curious if you had other stories so I went to your home page and read ahead. This story is great has everything I would wish to see happen. Please continue to update on this site and although I wish not to ruin it by mentioning anything here I really just wanted you to know that I am glad you wrote.

Author's Response: Hi! Thanks so much for your note! This is my first story - so sorry about that (not having more)! I did add another chapter on my web site just yesterday. I don't know if you're on the update list or not, but if not - go check it out. (Scroll down below the main story to find it) (email from that web site to get on the update list, if you want and I'll email you when I post new things). Thanks so, SO much for posting here! I'm so glad you like the story! It really helps to know others enjoy it - it makes writing that much more fun!! (plus, all those yummy deserts for my soul make me all warm and fuzzy inside! LOL!) -Passion4Spike 2010.04.03

Reviewer: magnus374 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/02/2010 - 05:54 pm Title: Chapter 26, Ben-Glory-Glory-Ben

This is verry good.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'll have another chapter posted this evening. Glad you're enjoying it! And thanks for saying so!!! -Passion4Spike 2010.04.02

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/01/2010 - 02:17 pm Title: Chapter 24, Lucky to Have You

Wow! Batch postings! I've just caught right up with this fic so far and have to tell you how much I'm loving it. Parts feel a bit rushed, but that's probably because you're not doing a compete re-write of all the seasons - which would take forever and rehash events we're all very familiar with. I would like to know why the Mayor didn't try to become a giant demon snake at graduation and how they dealt with Glory though. I'm still waiting for Riley to come back and try to get back at Buffy & Spike too. Love little Annie instead of Dawn - although am I allowed to say I miss Dawn? More please.

Author's Response: Hi! There was like one line that dealt with the mayor . . . right after the band candy incident, Faith, Spike and Buffy tracked down Mr. Trick and put an end to the mayor's assention before it even got started. . . it's in there somewhere . . but I didn't go into details of it. The story is over 50 chapters in total, so trying to deal with each threat would've been - - shoo - - - maybe more than I could handle! But, we will DEFINATELY deal with Glory . . I thought about naming Annie "Dawn" and channeling her here, but I really thought that Buffy would've gone with William's mother's name so I didn't. I'm glad you're liking it - sorry some of it seems rushed. Maybe later I can even go back and fill in some of the things that I skimmed over in separate stories. Thanks so much for posting a review! I makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside! more is on the way! -Passion4Spike 2010.04.01

Reviewer: PaganBaby Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2010 - 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 13, Forgiveness

Woohoo! They talked through their problems *and* they had bathtub sex! Thanks for making things right again :D Loved it!

*huggggles*

Author's Response: Oh, you're welcome!! Happy to oblige! Can't have her mad at him too long - just long enough for him to know she really cares . . . ttfn!! -Passion4Spike 2010.03.31

Reviewer: PaganBaby Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2010 - 10:01 pm Title: Chapter 12. Patrol Buddies

Aww thanks for the thanks! :D *hugggs*

It was nice that Willow tried reassuring Buffy about Spike. I didn't expect any of the Scoobies to do that, but Willow came through, yay! lol

Wow, that sex scene was good n' raunchy. But Buffy wasn't exactly herself, and she was mean there at the end. I suppose we'll see why she acted like that in the next chapter ;)

*smoochies*

Author's Response: Buffy was still mad at him . . . so, not very nice - - hopefully, she'll get over it soon. Can't be mean to Spike too long!! I love Willow! She's the only one who stood by Buffy with Angel - I feel she'd do the same now if she thought Spike really loved her. Thanks for posting - I so appreciate everyone who leaves feedback!! -Passion4Spike 2010.03.31

Reviewer: PaganBaby Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2010 - 09:51 pm Title: Chapter 11, Totally Expected - Research!

It's good to see that Buffy still loves Spike in spite of being mad for what he did. Telling the Scoobies about the pregnancy went well - Spike didn't get dusted by any of them lol I hope Spike and Buffy can make up good n' proper soon :)

*smooch*

Author's Response: Well, she hasn't forgiven him just yet . . . . I think she may have a little punishment in mind for him. He may need some more cuddling before it's over! Are you up for it? Thanks for posting!! -Passion4Spike 2010.03.30

Reviewer: PaganBaby Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2010 - 09:41 pm Title: Chapter 10, Expecting

*wants to smack Spike - and then cuddle him* He shouldn't have just taken off like that, but it was that old insecurity of his. He thought she was going to pick Angel over him, and he couldn't take it. Spike is going to have to pull out all the stops to get Buffy's forgiveness. I love the mystical pregnancy, btw! lol

*smoochies*

Author's Response: Ooo - smacking and cuddling . . aren't you a naughty girl! Spike will definately need to channel William to get her to forgive him now . . . Thanks for posting! -Passion4Spike 2010.03.10

Reviewer: PaganBaby Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2010 - 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 9, Return

Oh no! Angel's back - booo - and Spike took what he heard Buffy say the wrongest way he could :( Angel always finds a way to mess with our happy Spuffy lol

*hugz*

Author's Response: Angel definatley has bad timing, doesn't he?! Bad Angel! Thanks for posting! -Passion4Spike 2010.03.30

Reviewer: PaganBaby Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2010 - 09:14 pm Title: Chapter 8, Love

Ooh some love makin :D And aww, poor Buffy got freaked out when she discovered Spike was gone - but he was just being a sweetiepie :)

*smoochies*

Author's Response: You didn't think I'd make him like Angel, now do you??!! I'm insulted! LOL! Thanks for posting!! -Passion4Spike 2010.03.30

Reviewer: vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2010 - 08:04 pm Title: Chapter 20, Did we Win?

Got caught up to this chapter, what a ride! Glad that you re-wrote the whole initiative thing, I wonder if Harmony is still undusty? Perhaps, she is wearing Spikes duster? Wouldn't that be something for Buffy to let the other blonde bimbo know who her man and his duster belong to. Glad to read about Spike refusing to be "porn star" for the initiative. Can we say perverted? I should say that the demonic world owes Buffy a grateful thank you, she kills the lethal demons but the gentler ones can now rest easily. Anyhow, look forward to more chapters, don't want to hog the review panels.

Author's Response: Hog away! I love hearing from you and that you liked it so far!! I'll try to get some more out later today!! -Passion4Spike 2010.03.30

Reviewer: Amaya Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2010 - 02:11 pm Title: Chapter 20, Did we Win?

Please update as soon as you can.

Author's Response: I will! I'll try to have one or two more chapters uploaded later today! Thanks so much for reading and your note!! -Passion4Spike 2010.03.30

Reviewer: Sara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2010 - 12:08 am Title: Chapter 16, Liam, Angelus, Angel

I've been reading this story all day; all i can say is amazing!

Author's Response: Oh, thank you!! I'm so glad you're enjoying it!!! I'll have more for you soon!! Thanks so much for leaving the note!! -Passion4Spike 2010.03.29

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2010 - 07:51 pm Title: Chapter 12. Patrol Buddies

That was actually kind of a depressing sex scene. It hurt my heart.

Author's Response: It was supposed to, so I guess I worked it right . . .keep reading, your heart will feel better . . . (I hope!) Thanks for reading and posting!! -Passion4Spike 2010.03.28

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2010 - 07:03 pm Title: Chapter 11, Totally Expected - Research!

Well, Spike is back, and so far it hasn't been too hard for him but I have a feeling that's not going to last, at least I hope not, he needs some consequences and then go back to Spuffy happiness.

Author's Response: I think Buffy has in mind a "use and abuse" punishment for him . . just have to see. . . Thanks for posting! -Passion4Spike 2010.03.28

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2010 - 06:35 pm Title: Chapter 10, Expecting

Wow, that was an intense chapter. i am totally behind Buffy. Love Spike, but he did act like a wimp and just ran away. He could have at least confronted her and yelled at her for lying to him, which would have helped to clear things up earlier, but he didn't and he deserves to have her derision. And Harmony! Ugh! I thought it was icky that he was with her on the show but to be with her AFTER he was with Buffy is just awful and gross. it's only been a month! Not sure how he's going to get out of this mess but I can't wait to find out! Totally in to this story! Loving in. :-)

Author's Response: Yeah, he screwed up, didn't he!? What will Buffy do to punish him? I think it might be naughty . Glad you're liking it! I appreciate your comments! -Passion4Spike 2010.03.28

Reviewer: Amaya Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2010 - 03:50 pm Title: Chapter 10, Expecting

Please update as soon as you can.

Author's Response: Don't like that spot for a stopping point? Sorry! I'll get more out there soon!! thanks for reading and posting! -Passion4Spike 2010.03.28

Reviewer: Pari Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2010 - 05:46 am Title: Chapter 8, Love

Honestly the 'I love yous' seems a bit sudden, considering she 'just' killed her love Angel. Then again I'm all for her getting over Angel, but for something that started as solace for both Buffy and Spike to turn into love all of a sudden, seems rushed. But I guess you're moving the story along swiftly for a reason. So you continue your method and I shall continue to read. Thank you for the swift posts.

Author's Response: Hi! Yeah, I know - a bit fast, but there's lots to do and lots more to come, so we need to get there. For Spike's part, it's actually not all that sudden - but that comes out later! Shhhh! No telling! And who of us hasn't fallen in love quickly at least once in our lives . . . .?? Thanks for reading - I'll try not to dissappoint! -Passion4Spike 2010.03.28

Reviewer: Rose Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2010 - 04:05 am Title: Chapter 7, Prophecy

Poor innocent Willow! "Buffy are you okay? Should I get Giles?" LOL! At least Spike locked the door so her virgin eyes were not traumatized along with her virgin ears!

Author's Response: LOL!! Yes, I think that would've DEFINTELY been TMI!! Thanks for reading and posting. Lots more on the way!! -Passion4Spike 2010.03.28

Reviewer: Pari Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2010 - 02:57 am Title: Chapter 7, Prophecy

Wow you write smut like nobody's business.

Author's Response: Thank you! I've been told by someone that I'm evil . . . I like it!Hope everyone else does, too! Thanks for reading and Posting . . . mmm, chocolaty goodness . . -Passion4Spike 2010.03.28

Reviewer: Pari Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2010 - 02:24 am Title: Chapter 6, Warrior, Part 2

Great chappy and that picture of Spike was...nice too *wipes at the spittle from mouth* Am I drooling?

Author's Response: Ooo, I think we're ALL drooling!! What a nummy treat! Thanks for reading and posting! -Passion4Spike 2010.03.28

Reviewer: PaganBaby Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2010 - 01:32 am Title: Chapter 7, Prophecy

Yay for more yummy smut! Mmm Professor Spike could teach me a lesson anytime ;) I loved how Spike was naughty while Buffy talked to Willow through the door *giggles*

Loved it! *smoochies*

Author's Response: Oh, yeah! Sign me up for that class! Thanks much!! -Passion4Spike 2010.03.27

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