[Report This]Date: 05/02/2010 - 01:37 am Title: Chapter 5
Is Buffy at full slayer strength? I hope so since she has to go out to fight. Is Spike forced to stay there and worry (I hope he'll worry) about what is happening to her? Also, Jack can go on my shit list with Maggie and Riley. I'm guessing since Spike is all alone now he can relieve the tension that seeing Buffy in her outfit did.
Author's Response: Yeah west, she's full slayer strength. Yeah, jack is an ass isn't he? keep reading to find out Spike's reaction!
[Report This]Date: 05/01/2010 - 09:40 pm Title: Chapter 5
Great the way they're beginning the slow progress towards becoming a team. Love the flirty banter. Wondering how those on the 'outside' are reacting to Buffy's disappearance.
Author's Response: I love writing their banter, so much fun. Keep reading, to answer you're question *rubbing hands together evilly*
[Report This]Date: 05/01/2010 - 09:35 pm Title: Chapter 5
I really hope these commandos get what they deserve...
Loved Buffy's and Spike's snark / banter.
Author's Response: Thanks cordy, it's really fun to write!
[Report This]Date: 05/01/2010 - 02:42 am Title: Chapter 5
Their camaraderie is breath taking. Such a trying position allowing them to bond. Hope they can cross that line in their room at some point. Gotta suck to be soo very close to tenderness and not get it. Great chapter. Update soon.
Author's Response: *I blush* I'm really enjoying writing this story and I'm glad that you're enjoying reading it. I will update soon.
[Report This]Date: 04/30/2010 - 07:39 pm Title: Chapter 5
Love this....please keep her classy and him possessive. We love jealous Spike! The humor in your dialogue is very good too. Thanks for a great read!!
Author's Response: My plans are numerous for these two. Hopefully you will be pleased. Your reviews help with this...hint...hint!!! Thanks for enjoying!
[Report This]Date: 04/30/2010 - 07:23 pm Title: Chapter 5
Love the manip of Buffy in Calipso or Xena wear. The teasing and camaraderie between Buffy and Spike is very entertaining. The chapter ended with the reminder that they are nothing but mere commodities to be used, abused and discarded. Seems like Buffy's mistreatment was a bit harsh considering that she may be the main attraction, would serve well to have Jack punished for touching the money making warrior slayer. Look forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Didn't Pixiecorn do a wonderful job!!!!! FYI it's Calipso. I enjoy writing the teasing and the underlying camaraderie between them. I'm glad that my thoughts are coming through in the writing. Don't you worry, Jack will get his!
[Report This]Date: 04/30/2010 - 07:00 pm Title: Chapter 5
Great chapter, can't wait to find out how Buffy's match goes. Hopefully Spike and Buffy can come up with some way to escape and make anyone who was involved in their kidnapping pay.
Author's Response: More will be coming, I promise!
[Report This]Date: 04/30/2010 - 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 5
I'm really enjoying this story and looking forward to the journey you'll be taken us on towards the 21st fight. I just love Buffy and Spike when they start working and supporting each other!
Author's Response: Thanks Sonja! I'm glad that you have chosen to take the trip with me!
[Report This]Date: 04/30/2010 - 06:02 pm Title: Chapter 5
This is such a great story. And thank you for so faithfully updating. It really makes it nice when authors regularly update their stories--what a treat!
Author's Response: *huggles Sibb* I would like to say, thanks for faithfully reading and for your review. My readers are what keeps the creative juices flowing. The reviews are my own personal drug. Thanks for being one of my suppliers!!!
[Report This]Date: 04/30/2010 - 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 5
Seeing a little enemies becoming conrads.. And the old Buffy turns Spike on .. of course. Waiting for the fights..
Author's Response: Fights will be coming soon...keep reading!
[Report This]Date: 04/26/2010 - 03:38 am Title: Chapter 4
oohh! Can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response: Thanks Anna! I've updated yesterday...April 30th. Take a peek, would love to know whatcha think! Oh, on another note, if I'm right, you commented on my other story Legal Debriefing, thanks so much. There is a follow up to that story, a juicy one shot called Santa Baby. Enjoy!
[Report This]Date: 04/25/2010 - 07:07 pm Title: Chapter 4
Seems like a very interesting universe they've got going on here. And I imagine that in the end, wearing a thong is probably a better plan than not wearing one. Not that that outfit would fit my description of logical fighting attire. :) So glad they have each other, even if the don't quite realize it yet. Update soon.
Author's Response: *blush* thanks BuffyRat! Of course it's not logical, they want to exploit Buffy for all that they can. This includes her body
[Report This]Date: 04/25/2010 - 02:40 pm Title: Chapter 4
Spike is still an evil vampire, huh? -> "Rain, waterfalls, fast running streams..." ... "Drip...drip...drip..."
Buffy knows now (Riley); I hope the rage will help her fight.
Nice costume Buffy will have to fight in. ;)) I guess they'll sell the videos they make, huh?
Author's Response: Not evil, just our resident vamp doing what he does best(or second best to him just being plain sexy!) annoying the hell out of the slayer!
[Report This]Date: 04/24/2010 - 08:55 am Title: Chapter 4
At last Buffy accepts the truth about Riley. So she's going to be wearing a Xena outfit? Spike'll love that......
Author's Response: Oh...yes he will! Keep reading, you will see!
[Report This]Date: 04/24/2010 - 05:15 am Title: Chapter 3
my review got eaten by TPTB twice! but i persisted because i *had* to tell you how brilliant the clap-on lights are. inspired!
Author's Response: thanks for being so persistent!!!!! I thought about that for a second! I knew that their captors wouldn't want them to have an opportunity to use anything as weapons, so hence everything automated...including the lights
[Report This]Date: 04/24/2010 - 05:11 am Title: Chapter 4
heh. bet spike's got his fingers crossed for a wardrobe malfunction. as usual, he's quite talented at pushing buffy's buttons. enjoying the story and looking forward to more
Author's Response: thanks quirks! more will be coming!!!!
[Report This]Date: 04/24/2010 - 03:22 am Title: Chapter 4
How will Spike be able to resist Buffy when she's dressed like that? Spike better be in equal or less clothing, it's only fair. Make him fight commando or in a loin cloth! At the very least, the man has got to go shirtless. That's right, I have no shame. Also, can't wait for Buffy to get out and kick Riley's ass.
Author's Response: Mmmm...we'll see!
[Report This]Date: 04/24/2010 - 02:42 am Title: Chapter 4
At least Spike gave her a heads up about the drugs.. and the facilities.. yuck on the clothes.. quite slutty.
Enjoying
Author's Response: Yeah the clothes are 'slutty'. But you have to remember she is the closest 'demon' for them to a human. they're going to exploit her not only for her strength but her beauty
[Report This]Date: 04/18/2010 - 07:08 pm Title: Chapter 3
Enjoyed the banter.
Won't be easy to get out of there.
Till next part!
Author's Response: Thank you cordy, I appreciate all your reviews and the time that you take to make each one. No, escaping won't be easy.
[Report This]Date: 04/17/2010 - 03:45 am Title: Chapter 3
haha i loved it! can't wait to see what happens next and how you use the new banner :)
Author's Response: Thanks Pixie! You'll love how the banner is going to be used! I appreciate everything; the banner, you reading and reviewing! *Big Hugs*
[Report This]Date: 04/16/2010 - 08:15 pm Title: Chapter 3
Interesting... can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Thank you Anna! Stay tuned, more to come!
[Report This]Date: 04/16/2010 - 03:11 am Title: Chapter 3
Love them trying to be civil. Sure know that will get the better of them in the long run. Those two are good at the fighting, but less good with the killing of each other. Looking forward to more. Update soon.
Author's Response: I will be updating soon. Thanks for reading, enjoying and reviewing
[Report This]Date: 04/16/2010 - 01:22 am Title: Chapter 3
Loving it. Keep it coming.
Author's Response: More will be coming! Thanks for your review
[Report This]Date: 04/16/2010 - 12:16 am Title: Chapter 3
yes really liked this story and particularly loved the banter in this chapter-more please
Author's Response: Thanks scary! There will be more banter to come. Afterall, this is Buffy and Spike!
[Report This]Date: 04/15/2010 - 11:48 pm Title: Chapter 3
Excellent snarky banter. Buffy's already realised they're going to have to work together but it's going to take a while...
Author's Response: Thanks! I loved writing it, so fun! Buffy maybe be stubborn with most things, but this is far too big to ignore.
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