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Date: 05/28/2010 - 04:09 am Title: Yule Tidings

Ooooh. Evil schemers.
Don't think they'd fall for it though. But now that you're setting up plot for after the wedding, I have to wonder just how long Buffy gets to live in her vacation?

Author's Response: Thank you. Were you surprised that they were cousins? According to the warlock about 6 months.

Reviewer: magnus374 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/24/2010 - 04:50 pm Title: The Lawful and the Lawless

Ezra's daughter must be a Slayer and perhaps Ezra is her watcher and not her father. I wonder if Buffy is in the past or it's some other magic. If she's in the past then the future will change, Spike will remember her.

Author's Response: Thank you. Your questions will be answered in later chapters, especially with regards to Ezra which will be the next chapter actually. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/24/2010 - 06:00 am Title: The Lawful and the Lawless

Sounds like Buffy met the current slayers father. Blessed wooden bullets sound like a good idea at any century. Loved the detail you wrote of the precautions taken to ensure that the evil nasties kept away from the activities, holy water and such. The costumes selected by the men were dear to my heart since I was born and raised in Texas. Look forward to more chapters.

Author's Response: Thank you. A Texan yeah! I have family who moved out there ages ago and love it. All those precautions should come up later as well as a little more from Ezra. I'm your huckleberry.

Reviewer: BlackDahlia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/24/2010 - 02:14 am Title: The Lawful and the Lawless

I love the idea of William dressed as a gunslinger. And also love how Elisabeth senses William's presence as if he were still a vamp (which presumably he is not yet).

Author's Response: Thank you. Definitely not a vamp but there is the old sexual tension. When kissing sensed the vamp.

Reviewer: Sibb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/23/2010 - 07:44 pm Title: The Lawful and the Lawless

This is so sweet and lovely that I hate to see what might be coming for Buffy and Spike! I love this story.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. Next is a Christmas celebration.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/23/2010 - 06:02 pm Title: The Lawful and the Lawless

Enjoyed the update. The party was fun, Ezra too. Seems that his daughter is a slayer? I don't reckon to get close to one like my daughter does. She's real fast and real strong.
Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you and yes she is. I reckon to have one in the states every now and then. In the next chapter, you'll hear about what happens between him and the council of watchers.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2010 - 11:23 pm Title: So NOT A Lady

Elisabeth is lucky that her MIL is so supportive; she'll have time later to learn all the stuff she needs too. (And William wouldn't want her to act like a lady all the time anyway. ;)
No clue about the costume when he had to practice.

Author's Response: Thank you. Anne is the best. He definitely doesn't want that - part of the Spike personality.

Reviewer: BlackDahlia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2010 - 12:17 pm Title: So NOT A Lady

Sooo curious about WIlliam's non-costume. LMAO at "Too many sauces".
And I think my brain short-circuited at the idea of a two-month honeymoon with Spike. Gahhh!

Author's Response: Thank you. I got that from an authentic menu. Two months of smut.

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2010 - 09:05 am Title: So NOT A Lady

Given the strict Victorian code of behaviour and observance of etiquette, I don't think I'd be much of a lady either... Not a clue about William's costume.

Author's Response: Thank you. this chapter is partly to illustrate how represive the times were and why Spike rebelled against it.

Reviewer: magnus374 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2010 - 07:48 pm Title: William Pratt and the Magic Strawberry Pebble

Nice chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you. MTC

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2010 - 05:51 pm Title: William Pratt and the Magic Strawberry Pebble

Oh sexy dresses - and a bit risky for the time. William will love Elisabeth's.
Enjoyed the new chapter. :)

Author's Response: Thank you. Get ready for more celebrations. I'm deciding between St. Crispins and Halloween

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2010 - 11:35 am Title: William Pratt and the Magic Strawberry Pebble

Aw, I love Spike's mum! I loved the way the two drunks thought they'd scared the FEBs away when Buffy dusted them. And no, I had no idea what the 'magic strawberry pebble' was! Hilarious!

Author's Response: Thank you. So much for male egos. That was a fun chapter to write. Love hearing from you.

Reviewer: BlackDahlia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2010 - 04:47 am Title: William Pratt and the Magic Strawberry Pebble

Woot! Jameson's! AND LMAO at thee Magic Strawberry Pebble. I had no clue what it would be ahead of time, and then as soon as he got under her skirts... *smacks head*

Author's Response: Thank you. Yup I wanted something innocent yet humorous since in those times they probably didn't discuss with proper names.

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2010 - 11:59 am Title: Guess Who's Coming to Dinner

I like both Anne and Jane.

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: anna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2010 - 01:05 am Title: Guess Who's Coming to Dinner

can't wait for the next chapter and the spuffy lovin'

Author's Response: Thank you very much.

Reviewer: BlackDahlia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/09/2010 - 11:28 pm Title: Guess Who's Coming to Dinner

“And here I thought you were a quiet sober poet,” she commented.

“I am and will be five days a week.” *g*

And the transition from William to Spike becomes more evident. Love it!

Author's Response: Thank you and more of that transition will show soon enough

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/09/2010 - 10:07 pm Title: Guess Who's Coming to Dinner

Anne sounds like a good MIL to have. :)
The whirlwind Jane? Sound like a future friend; a helpful one. (A bit like Willow?)
Enjoyed the update.

Author's Response: Thank you and yes that is coming. She's like Willow in the helpful way but she doesn't lack for confidence.

Reviewer: shelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/09/2010 - 09:34 pm Title: Guess Who's Coming to Dinner

this is a wonderful story! it fun and interesting.. cannot wait to see how it unfolds

Author's Response: thank you and welcome new reader. This will be a long one.

Reviewer: Blue Eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/09/2010 - 08:56 pm Title: Guess Who's Coming to Dinner

I enjoyed reading the slight changes in our William how he is involving and am so glad that Anne is an intelligent woman enough to foresee not only their love but of Rose's hope to stop the wedding. I'm glad she has a friend and that Jane was able to let her know to be aware of Ceciia. I only wonder how long will Buffy's vacation be I hope it last longer then the wedding night.

Author's Response: Thank you and welcome new reader. I'm glad you like Anne and Jane. A year and a day - an odd time for sure. It does have significance. I love hearing from you.

Reviewer: magnus374 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/09/2010 - 09:58 am Title: Visionary

I liked this.

Author's Response: Thank you and I'm glad to hear from you.

Reviewer: BlackDahlia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/09/2010 - 12:11 am Title: Visionary

Yay, you're back! I really, really love the way you're handling the attitudes and climate of William's time, and their ill-fits with them.
And I also have a weak spot for that GooGoo Dolls song ;-).

Author's Response: Thank you. That's what i wanted to show to also better explain why Spike fit into modern times so well. Watch for more songs.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/08/2010 - 08:28 pm Title: Visionary

Enjoyed the update :)
And what William told Heath. Elisabeth will be happy, whatever her guardians say.

Author's Response: Thank you. You can see the Spike backbone coming into play.

Reviewer: curly_kitty Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/08/2010 - 07:36 pm Title: Visionary

I like your take on 'William' and the way you made him a rebel at heart but still the shy quiet version from the shows. At least until he was corrupted by the fair maiden of course...

Author's Response: Thank you and welcome new reader. I love hearing from you all. That will all come into play when he is turned.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/08/2010 - 06:23 pm Title: Visionary

Very glad this updated, and I love that Goo Goo Dolls song. William certainly is showing a confident attitude, and absolutely sure that what he and Elizabeth wants, he can make happen. They're so sweet and wonderful together, and I can't imagine how Buffy is going to react to constant supervision to keep them from celebrating their marriage early :) It's proper, and decided with good intentions, but still. I really like the glimpse into Heath we got this chapter.

Great chapter and looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thank you so much Anon. I'm always glad to hear from you. I think I have that song on everything that plays music from MP3 to the computer. Glad you like Heath - OCs always make me nervous. The other thing to keep her honest is a pregnancy scare even though she is convinced it can't happen. With William/Spike the temptation only can get worse. Hope you like the next.

Reviewer: Sibb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/08/2010 - 06:10 pm Title: Visionary

That was so sweet. I so want them to have some happiness before whatever awful thing is going to happen to them comes along!

Author's Response: Thank you. Well they have a year and a day.

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