Date: 05/08/2010 - 03:04 pm Title: Chapter 4
I did enjoy, but spotted the following:
>Buffy gently touched his hand and gave him sympathetic smile.
Missing an 'a'.
>Anyway as for the poetry,
Missing a quotation mark.
There are also a few errant/missing commas and with three betas one would've expected one of them to have pointed out the saying is 'one and the same' not 'one in the same', but enjoyable fic, altogether.
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the read, and I hope you'll cntinue to read and review. I'm sorry about he typos they've been fixed on the other sites where I post. I guess I missed this one. In the future, I would appreciate if you would point things like this out in a personal email to me and not in your review. I often see mistakes in others work and as a courtesy to them contact them privately. You can do this by clicking on the authors name. You will then be given the option to contact.
Date: 05/03/2010 - 01:49 pm Title: Chapter 4
Lovely bit of 'bonding' going on. It was about time Buffy actually showed some interest in who Spike really is.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for all your lovely reviews. I hope you'll keep reading. There's more to come.
Date: 05/03/2010 - 12:00 pm Title: Chapter 4
It's nice to see them just enjoy themself.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. I hope you're enjoying the story as well.
Date: 05/02/2010 - 10:01 pm Title: Chapter 4
Coming to think - I wonder if there isn't a poem of Spike left in a watcher's archive that Spike doesn't know of. You never know with these watchers. ;)
Looking forward too what Spike has planned now!
Author's Response: I don't recall that, but you never know. Thanks for all your lovely reviews. I hope you'll keep reading.
Date: 05/02/2010 - 03:23 pm Title: Chapter 4
Really enjoyed!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading a reviewing. There will more next week!