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Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2010 - 05:21 pm Title: Prologue: Angel or Angelus

Bit puzzled by the summary saying Angel is *not* Angelus, when he clearly is. Also not quite sure why you've practically quoted the episode word for word. Nothing original to comment upon.....

Author's Response: Because I gave a warning in the author's notes stating I did this so that when Chapter 1 came around people would know where the story was being picked up from. I had this story looked at by a beta for only the first two chapters and the only comment she made was that she didn't understand where the story was being picked up from since I was cutting out scenes that happened in the real Buffy series so that I wouldn't have to copy and paste scenes into the story itself. So she recommended that I add in an epilogue that showed the exact time frame of the story so I quoted and described the scenes that take place and set the mood for the story. As the description states the rest isn't like that. As for the "NOT" I changed it. That was a typo and I apologize.

Author's Response: Sorry prologue not epilogue but I hope you understand what I was trying to say.

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