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Reviewer: MarzBar Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/11/2010 - 04:13 am Title: Chapter 8: Feelings of Guilt

Love, love, love this new take on Angelus and Spuffy. It will be hard to wait for more.

Reviewer: curly_kitty Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2010 - 10:13 pm Title: Chapter 8: Feelings of Guilt

I totally see it happening like this. She's been hurt and behind the snark and the whole 'evil' vampire, he's shown her kindness and concern. Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: magnus374 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2010 - 02:39 pm Title: Chapter 8: Feelings of Guilt

More chapters that is good. I agree with you, I think Buffy could act like this in this scenario.

Reviewer: Amaya Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2010 - 09:58 am Title: Chapter 8: Feelings of Guilt

Please update as soon as you can, because I like the story and I would like to read more of it.

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Date: 05/01/2010 - 09:03 pm Title: Chapter 5: Blood Sealed Deal

almost very sweet - well with the exception of buffy being scared of angelus' reaction to his claiming. and spike's pretty protective of her already, even if he wants to get dru back. wonder how long it'll take for buffy and spike to develop feelings for each other? looking forward to more ...

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2010 - 10:24 pm Title: Chapter 5: Blood Sealed Deal

So there is a chance to break the claim; that's a good thing.

Reviewer: magnus374 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/27/2010 - 04:23 pm Title: Chapter 5: Blood Sealed Deal

I like to read this.

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Date: 04/27/2010 - 06:22 am Title: Chapter 5: Blood Sealed Deal

Like their deal, look forward to more.

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Date: 04/27/2010 - 12:17 am Title: Chapter 2: What You Don't Know Might Kill You!

ok, this is a pretty kettle of fish! and spike's right - if angelus finds out, he'll torture buffy and her friends even more viciously (if that's even possible). now what roles will buffy and spike play in each other lives now? looking forward to more!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2010 - 12:59 pm Title: Chapter 2: What You Don't Know Might Kill You!

Not sure about this one, how it will go but I'll give it a try.

Reviewer: magnus374 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2010 - 06:20 pm Title: Chapter 2: What You Don't Know Might Kill You!

That Angel claimed Buffy makes an interesting difference.

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2010 - 05:21 pm Title: Prologue: Angel or Angelus

Bit puzzled by the summary saying Angel is *not* Angelus, when he clearly is. Also not quite sure why you've practically quoted the episode word for word. Nothing original to comment upon.....

Author's Response: Because I gave a warning in the author's notes stating I did this so that when Chapter 1 came around people would know where the story was being picked up from. I had this story looked at by a beta for only the first two chapters and the only comment she made was that she didn't understand where the story was being picked up from since I was cutting out scenes that happened in the real Buffy series so that I wouldn't have to copy and paste scenes into the story itself. So she recommended that I add in an epilogue that showed the exact time frame of the story so I quoted and described the scenes that take place and set the mood for the story. As the description states the rest isn't like that. As for the "NOT" I changed it. That was a typo and I apologize.

Author's Response: Sorry prologue not epilogue but I hope you understand what I was trying to say.

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