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Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2010 - 04:59 am Title: Part 5b: The Most Dangerous Game

“And I, I think maybe we were lovers in a former life…”

Indeed the were, and I haven't given up on this one either. Amazing.

Author's Response: What can I say; I'm a sucker for kismet. Thanks!

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2010 - 07:40 pm Title: Part 5b: The Most Dangerous Game

Wow! *fans self* This was one of the most erotic, sexy Spuffy love scenes I've read. You did a really nice job describing their feelings and it was so lovely, and sad too cause now they have to leave. :( How will they find each other again? Hopefully they will.
Loved the song too, it was perfect. The end had me teary eyed. Plz post soon, I wanna see how it ends .;)

Loved it!

Author's Response: Wow, that's quite a compliment and I truly appreciate it! That's one of my favorite songs, and it got stuck in my head while I was envisioning the scene, so... last chapter soon ;-).

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2010 - 06:29 pm Title: Part 5b: The Most Dangerous Game

Beautiful written, very erotic. And oh so sad that they had to part again with no chance (forbidden) to exchange there names / address.
I still have my fingers crossed for what I said about meeting again in another review. :D
There is always hope / fate, right?

Author's Response: I'm a big believer in hope... and thank you so much for your reviews!

Reviewer: SpikesGirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2010 - 04:25 pm Title: Part 5b: The Most Dangerous Game

Wow.. Now that's what I call amazingly erotic. Please write more soooon. I hope Spike and Buffy can meet us soon in sunny CA and can start a life together. Please on with the spuffiness. I know Spike can find out where she is and break down those secret family business barriers. Bring on the next chappy!

Author's Response: Woot! "Erotic" was my goal, "amazingly" is just icing. Thank you so much; the last chapter was sent to my fabulous beta the same night I posted this. :-)

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2010 - 11:34 am Title: Part 5b: The Most Dangerous Game

simply breathtaking! I loved how your descriptions really brought the chapter to life. One question, did you find this song before you started writing this fic? I listen to it, and it fit PERFECTLY with the flow of the story and how things have changed from merely lust to a deeply emotional connection. Really enjoyed!

Author's Response: Wow! *blush* Thank you so much. I actually knew the song before I wrote this, and I write visually, so as I was picturing the scene, the song just stuck in my head and I had to use it. It ended up mirroring the flow better than I had hoped :-).

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