[Report This]Date: 07/28/2010 - 02:54 am Title: Part 6: Endgame
So sad to see the end but it was a brilliant end! Absolutely love how she threw the vase at him when he started up with "...I think it might be best.." That's the Buffy I've come to know and love in this sexy and sweet story. Now I'll have to go back and read it all over again. And for sure I am in for another story! Bring on the angst! I'm not afraid. You are a master story teller. :-)
Author's Response: Wow, I'm feeling really chuffed from all your wonderful compliments! I almost left the vase thing out, thinking it was over the top, but then it just felt right. And I think anything that starts in s6 has to at least start in angst. Thanks again!
[Report This]Date: 07/13/2010 - 07:40 pm Title: Part 5b: The Most Dangerous Game
Wow! *fans self* This was one of the most erotic, sexy Spuffy love scenes I've read. You did a really nice job describing their feelings and it was so lovely, and sad too cause now they have to leave. :( How will they find each other again? Hopefully they will.
Loved the song too, it was perfect. The end had me teary eyed. Plz post soon, I wanna see how it ends .;)
Loved it!
Author's Response: Wow, that's quite a compliment and I truly appreciate it! That's one of my favorite songs, and it got stuck in my head while I was envisioning the scene, so... last chapter soon ;-).
[Report This]Date: 07/13/2010 - 06:29 pm Title: Part 5b: The Most Dangerous Game
Beautiful written, very erotic. And oh so sad that they had to part again with no chance (forbidden) to exchange there names / address.
I still have my fingers crossed for what I said about meeting again in another review. :D
There is always hope / fate, right?
Author's Response: I'm a big believer in hope... and thank you so much for your reviews!
[Report This]Date: 07/13/2010 - 04:25 pm Title: Part 5b: The Most Dangerous Game
Wow.. Now that's what I call amazingly erotic. Please write more soooon. I hope Spike and Buffy can meet us soon in sunny CA and can start a life together. Please on with the spuffiness. I know Spike can find out where she is and break down those secret family business barriers. Bring on the next chappy!
Author's Response: Woot! "Erotic" was my goal, "amazingly" is just icing. Thank you so much; the last chapter was sent to my fabulous beta the same night I posted this. :-)
[Report This]Date: 07/13/2010 - 11:34 am Title: Part 5b: The Most Dangerous Game
simply breathtaking! I loved how your descriptions really brought the chapter to life. One question, did you find this song before you started writing this fic? I listen to it, and it fit PERFECTLY with the flow of the story and how things have changed from merely lust to a deeply emotional connection. Really enjoyed!
Author's Response: Wow! *blush* Thank you so much. I actually knew the song before I wrote this, and I write visually, so as I was picturing the scene, the song just stuck in my head and I had to use it. It ended up mirroring the flow better than I had hoped :-).
[Report This]Date: 07/03/2010 - 12:10 am Title: Part 5a: The Most Dangerous Game
I have no problem with people with excess wordage issues. I love the storhy and am very glad of this chapter mainly because I was trying to understand what would make her pay for something like this. It makes a lot more sense to me. By the way I wonder what happens to be people who break Rule 3. Rule 3 is stupid.
Author's Response: It's been a bit tricky balancing the smut and the plot, so I'm glad you enjoyed the exposition. And fortunately, some rules may be made to be broken ;-).
Author's Response: It's been a bit tricky balancing the smut and the plot, so I'm glad you enjoyed the exposition. And fortunately, some rules may be made to be broken ;-).
[Report This]Date: 07/02/2010 - 11:52 pm Title: Part 5a: The Most Dangerous Game
absolutely adorned! Break rule #3! Break it completely!!!!
Author's Response: So stomping on its itty bitty remains is what you're in favor of? So noted ;-). More soon!
[Report This]Date: 07/02/2010 - 05:54 pm Title: Part 5a: The Most Dangerous Game
Hot again. :)
It was fun when Buffy wanted more, a date. And always forgot something in her luggage, taking the whole suitcase. *gg*
Not so good that they are being watched for falling a love; good idea to dine in the room. Maybe a break of a contract would mean being kicked off the island.
And I just loved Spike's speech - I think he helped Buffy a lot.
Enjoyed the update (and I love long chapters so no problem with that).
Author's Response: LMAO, thank you, because I seem to have a problem stopping a chapter once I've started (it's the getting started that's the hard part).
I will admit, writing the dialogue was a bit cathartic ;-).
[Report This]Date: 07/02/2010 - 04:44 am Title: Part 5a: The Most Dangerous Game
Mmmm Total hotness. Me likey! And that island is so creepy, all the staff keeping tabs on people. I wonder if they have the rooms bugged? I'm glad Spike figured it out and they had a nice romantic "date" in their room.
Of course it looks like Spike is falling for Buffy. I hope they fall hard for each other and admit it. Poor Buffy her stupid ex made her feel like a freak. Jerk. It was probably Riley or Parker I guess.
Great chappie, can't wait for you to post more. :)
Author's Response: I'm trying not to make The Island too creepy while still staying within the parameters of the challenge. And yup, the ex was supposed to be Riley. Thank you so much for the kind words!
[Report This]Date: 06/18/2010 - 03:30 am Title: Part 4b: The Waiting Game
Okay, just need a few seconds to regain consciousness.... this was so good, and the ending was hilarious. More please!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. And I never can resist a wiseass parting remark...
[Report This]Date: 06/17/2010 - 10:13 pm Title: Part 2: The Opening Games
Finally getting some time to get to your incredibly hot story. GAH! One moment he talks about the weather and then he pounces. Dies. ::fans self::
Author's Response: *blush* Thanks so much! I always associate Spike with pouncing, so... umm... sorry, lost my train of thought there... ;-)
[Report This]Date: 06/17/2010 - 02:37 am Title: Part 4b: The Waiting Game
Didn't think I would care for this, but I'm loving it. It is so well - written...But what does Spike think of Buffy? Please give us more of his view and emotional investment from him. Can't wait for more....Thanks!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for giving it a chance; the next chapters will have more of Spike. I'm not used to writing in third person, so balancing the POVs is tricky. Glad you enjoyed!
[Report This]Date: 06/16/2010 - 11:00 pm Title: Part 4b: The Waiting Game
whoo...cold shower needed ASAP!! enjoyed!
Author's Response: *fans bbe* Thankee muchly!
[Report This]Date: 06/16/2010 - 10:59 pm Title: Part 4b: The Waiting Game
WOW, GUH and YUMMM!! This was so good, excellent smut. I love this story. Your William is such a sexy beast. *fans self*
Can't wait for more! =)
Author's Response: Zowie, thanks, I hadn't realized how hard smut was to write before I started this, glad you're enjoying!
[Report This]Date: 06/16/2010 - 06:12 pm Title: Part 4b: The Waiting Game
I'm glad to see that you're @EF too so hopefully I can catch updates when TSR is RO - hopefully not for long.
Wow... worth the wait for Buffy. It got really hot. :)
Looking forward to more here or there. *g*
Author's Response: Glad I have you hooked! Thanks, and more to come soon...
[Report This]Date: 06/16/2010 - 05:40 am Title: Part 4b: The Waiting Game
You sure this is your first time cause I'm like WOW!!
Author's Response: And I'm like, thank you! ;-)
[Report This]Date: 06/16/2010 - 03:11 am Title: Part 4b: The Waiting Game
You are brave woman to write something so very erotic on your first try. Excellent job!
Author's Response: I am well-known for more than brains ;-). Thanks so much!
[Report This]Date: 06/02/2010 - 02:46 am Title: Part 4a: The Waiting Game
Such beautiful torture. Love it. update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks for the R/R. Next chapter's coming soon ;-)
[Report This]Date: 06/02/2010 - 01:48 am Title: Part 2: The Opening Games
Sexiest thing ever. I love him already.
Author's Response: Thank you muchly! Ain't he dreamy ;-)?
[Report This]Date: 06/01/2010 - 08:39 pm Title: Part 4a: The Waiting Game
Wow, that was scorching. Naughty, naughty William.:) These two are on fire for each other, wonder if they'll be able to say goodbye.
Was the brunette woman and her "pet" Dru and Giles? heehee.
I'm loving this story and that banner is so pretty. :)
Author's Response: He is a naughty boy, isn't he? *g*
YES! I'm so excited you picked out the other couple; well done--I'm hiding other characters in there every so often.
So glad you're enjoying, and isn't the banner a beaut!
[Report This]Date: 06/01/2010 - 07:03 pm Title: Part 4a: The Waiting Game
Nope - I won't get ahead. Looking forward to read on. But it's good to find a hint for a potential happy ending. ~ No spoilers please, just let me dream. ;))
Ah I wondered what Spike has found. Hot outfit - the dressing was hot too.
Spike is a mean tease, he didn't make it easy for Buffy to be controlled. *gg*
Enjoyed the update :)
Author's Response: I was always a sucker for them being equally matched, so I'm trying to keep it the way I like it. And I like a little 'mean tease' in my Spike ;-)
[Report This]Date: 06/01/2010 - 01:57 am Title: Part 4a: The Waiting Game
Juicy! really enjoying!
Author's Response: Yay! I was about to make a really obscene comment about juiciness and the next chapter but... too much?
[Report This]Date: 06/01/2010 - 01:31 am Title: Part 4a: The Waiting Game
Oh my, this was especially wicked! I loved it. You're doing fabulously! I'm anxiously awaiting your next update.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm a sucker for flagrant praise! And don't worry, the wickedness will continue in the next section ;-)
[Report This]Date: 05/24/2010 - 10:03 pm Title: Part 3: The Watching Game
OMG!! This is pure hotness! I love it! The sex was amazing and the beginning was insanely hot.:) You're doing a great job..I wonder how long before feelings develop? :)
Love this... Ho-ly SHIT! A cock like that should be preceded by a drumroll. Or at the very least, a 'ta-dah!' LOL I'm such a perv, cause I've been imagining JM's cock since I saw the dailies of "Wrecked". Now those were hot! *damn you youtube, for taking them down*
Can't wait for more of this sexy story!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I too, have been thinking about JM's cock since the "Wrecked" dailies, and that line is what I imagine it looks like. *happy sigh* What I can't have, I can at least joke about ;-)
[Report This]Date: 05/24/2010 - 06:39 am Title: Part 3: The Watching Game
Wow. I need a cigarette now.
Author's Response: To be fair, I wrote that while drinking several glasses of wine, so a cigarette really *wouldn't* seem out of place ;-)
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