Reviews For Holiday on Helarth
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Reviewer: kudagirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2010 - 01:31 am Title: 1. Under the Moonbow

Oh, I love this. Neither of them knows where they are and are not up to full strength. It's an adventure where you can take them through all kinds of situations. The last line is a bit like Alice going down the rabbit hole.


Author's Response: Thanks. :) I hope to have fun with this one.

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2010 - 12:33 am Title: 1. Under the Moonbow

Interested where you're going to lead us Dorothy! (Wizard of Oz-didn't want you to think I don't know your name lol!)Can't wait till the next chap!

Author's Response: LOL! Thank you. I hope you like where I do take our couple.

Reviewer: napoleon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/26/2010 - 08:55 pm Title: 1. Under the Moonbow

Interesting. Please continue

Author's Response: Thank you. :) A new chapter is now up.

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