Date: 09/02/2010 - 11:12 pm Title: Chapter 4
Willow's idea sounds like a clever revenge. ;))
Besides that - hot spuffyness. Even if seeing Angel again has sucked for Buffy I think William distracted her very nicely.
Date: 09/02/2010 - 04:24 pm Title: Chapter 4
Let me first start out by saying, Damn, this is a hot story!! I couldn't stop reading. It just keeps getting hotter. Like it very much. You got a way with words. Can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the sweet review. You made my day and I'm very pleased you're enjoying it so far!
Date: 09/02/2010 - 07:12 am Title: Chapter 4
Awesome update, very hot. More soon please!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! XO
Date: 09/02/2010 - 01:18 am Title: Chapter 4
Okay, this chapter was very juicy, but I find it hard to believe nobody saw them. Despite how forward they've been, I don't find it realistic this would happen. Sorry. Otherwise, I did enjoy
Author's Response: Hi, thanks so much for the review. I'm not sure how I can make it more realistic, but you do have a point about nobody seeing them. I should've made that part clearer-- maybe set them up further in the back or hitch up that divider. In any case, i appreciate your honest review, and am happy that you enjoyed it nevertheless!
Date: 09/01/2010 - 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 4
You sure love making them take dangerous career risk. The Angel encounter makes me hopeful that Willow does a good job messing up his report I just hope that doesn't backfire and won't as long as he is able to remain self-involved. I do like how you use the juice to the fullest. Please keep them safe.
Author's Response: I don't want to make any false promises as there will be plenty of angst ahead, but rest assured, I'm a sucker for a happy ending. There will be some twists and turns though.
Thank you, and I appreciate the review. :)