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Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/05/2010 - 09:11 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ohhh this sounds really good, sparks are flying. wanna read more real soon.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/05/2010 - 03:51 am Title: Chapter 1

Love the insta-banter, and oggling. They'll be naked in no time. So ready for more. Awesome start. (And you've perfectly captured Dawn's bratty-ness. And Spike's snark.) Update soon!

Reviewer: Blue Eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/05/2010 - 02:19 am Title: Chapter 1

Uhhhhh I like how this it starting perfect view. I just hate the bratty sister thing but then you are basing the character on the show and Dawn was bratty.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Glad you like it. And yes, Dawn is being bratty, but she's got her reasons. I'm hoping she'll come off a little more sympathetic in future chapters, as more is revealed...

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/04/2010 - 07:49 pm Title: Chapter 1

I love the characterizations in this story. They feel so real. I've been reading it on another Spuffy site, where it's posted up to chapter 3, and enjoying the family confrontations and private griefs. I can only hope you have even more than those 3 chapters written. I want it all, like, now. Please update as soon as you can, and as often as you can.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I do have chapter 4 mostly written - needs some tweaking. And I've outlined (shock, gasp, horror! - I am not an outliner) through about chapter 8. We'll see how it plays out as I get them written. I'll be updating here and at EF regularly until I'm caught up with the other site - and then shooting for weekly updates.

Reviewer: Amaya Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/04/2010 - 06:13 pm Title: Chapter 1

Please update as soon as you can, because I liked the chapter and I am sure that I will like all the story.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/04/2010 - 01:22 pm Title: Chapter 1

Under this circumstances not a good first meeting for Buffy and Spike but a good start of the story. :)
Buffy's room has the better view. ;)
But now she has to 'rent' a closet from Dawn, the good view doesn't make up to less closet space. *g*
Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Hmm... I think I might give up a *lot* of closet space for that view. :) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/04/2010 - 03:21 am Title: Chapter 1

Huh? Read this on EF, and I thought I left a review there...but when I went there, nothing. Maybe my melon is just over ripe. Any how, I'm going to leave one here, nice start and very enjoyable. Waiting for the next chappie!

Author's Response: Thanks - chapter 2 will be coming shortly!

Reviewer: MK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/04/2010 - 02:06 am Title: Chapter 1

i like, i like. really good start hope you update soon :)

Author's Response: Thanks, glad you like it!

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