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Reviewer: SpikesGirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/13/2010 - 03:24 am Title: Chapter 5

This was such a good chapter. Thank you for keeping on with the narrative flow. I am so interested in this. At least Buffy and Dawn made some progress. At least they started too, right? Now if Buffy would get off her high horse and admit she is starting to have feelings for Spike. Yeah, like who wouldn't, right?

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/13/2010 - 01:51 am Title: Chapter 5

Poor Buffy. Poor Dawn. Can't wait for Spike to give "Bunny" a real hard time. :) Also love that Buffy has the power to embarrass Dawn. Glad they finally talked. Update soon!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/13/2010 - 12:39 am Title: Chapter 5

Things seem to be a bit better now, after they talked. Not good but definitely better.
~ Enjoyed the update.

Reviewer: Leanne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/12/2010 - 11:05 pm Title: Chapter 5

Love the way you're building the characters in this story. Waiting on the edge of my seat for more!

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/12/2010 - 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 5

Great chapter! Embarrassing your children are one of the perks of parenthood, Buffy should relish it!! LOL!!!

Reviewer: SpikesGirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2010 - 06:41 pm Title: Chapter 4

of course buffy all huffy and puffy cause she can't stand the truth. glad spike stood his ground. be glad when buffy can admit she is wrong and opens herself up to spike and dawn and she can get back on track again and be sisters

Reviewer: Behind Blue Eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2010 - 04:27 pm Title: Chapter 4

Loved the chappie! This type of Spike was what Season 6 was missing. Even though I love Spike, in any way, I was none to happy about the 'puppy dog-ish' Spike. I prefer the no holds bar, in your face, I'm telling it like it is, Spike, which is how he is in this tale. Like I said, Love it!!! Oh, and by the way, love the piercings!!!

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2010 - 03:36 pm Title: Chapter 4

Is she seriously judging him on appearances only? Nahhh! she really likes him and doesn,t wanna , hope she stop being such a witch soon . Really liking this fic.

Reviewer: Amaya Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2010 - 02:53 pm Title: Chapter 4

I liked the chapter and I would like to read more of this story, so please update as soon as you can.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2010 - 12:21 pm Title: Chapter 4

Especially because Spike has cable I don't think that Dawn will obey Buffy's wish to stay away. ;)
Yeah, a talk, a real one without accusations could help.
~ Good to see an update :)

Reviewer: bettyb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2010 - 05:50 am Title: Chapter 4

I was absolutely thrilled to see another chapter of this excellent story. As usual, the characterizations are top notch (especially Dawn!) and the angst is palpable. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2010 - 05:28 am Title: Chapter 4

Go ahead. Keep Dawn away from Spike. Just try it, Buffy. Takes awhile for the big sister to see that little sis has grown up a bit and may just benefit from being treated like an adult. Perfect Spike job. Just love how understanding, and mature Spike is behind all his machismo. Love it. Love his delicately putting Buffy in her place. Ready for more. Update soon.

Author's Response: Yeah, telling a 14 year old they CAN'T do something is like waving a red flag in front of a bull. thanks for the reviews!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2010 - 01:26 am Title: Chapter 4

first bitchy dawn, and now bitchy buffy, some things never change. she has a lot of nerve taking her anger out on spike like that, at least dawn wasn't lying in the gutter somewhere. i hate people who judge someone by the way they look, i'm not seeing how these two could ever possibly be in a relationship, and dawn is too young to be watching true blood.

Author's Response: I had to laugh - I agree, Dawn is totally too young to be watching True Blood. (sometimes I think I am, too). But, you know, teenagers and no clear authority figures, something inappropriate is going to go on.

Reviewer: m_evans Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2010 - 01:14 am Title: Chapter 4

Thanks for the update! I'm really enjoying this story. I get where Buffy's coming from, I do, and I get why she's upset, and why she's frustrated. It can't be easy dealing with the things she has to, especially at her age. But, she's such a bitch, lol. I love it though, and I love the relationship you're setting up between Dawn and Spike. I usually don't care for Dawn as a character, but I like her here. Thanks for sharing :) .

Author's Response: I'm so glad to hear you like Dawn! I've gotten so many reviews about how much she sucks & what a little brat she is. Personally, I like her - both on the show and in this story. Of course, I have a little more of the inside line on her here - but I really hope she starts coming off a little more sympathetic to the people who've hated her in the first couple chapters. So, thanks!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2010 - 05:37 am Title: Chapter 3

Such a hard thing for a 14 year old to understand. Buffy sure has her hands full. Hope Spike can get through to Dawn, and Buffy. Update soon!

Reviewer: m_evans Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/12/2010 - 05:48 am Title: Chapter 3

Thanks for the update! I really enjoyed it. Dawn is being...well, Dawn, lol, but how can Buffy expect Dawn to understand the sacrifices she's made, if she doesn't talk to her sister about it? Again, thanks for the update :) .

Reviewer: SpikesGirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/11/2010 - 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 3

I hope things get better for Buffy and Dawn soon. They really are going thru a tough time now both of them. Thanks for giving us such a good chapter. I'll be glad when some of the angst settles down. They are both so stubborn.

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/11/2010 - 02:02 pm Title: Chapter 3

thanks for the update

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/11/2010 - 10:55 am Title: Chapter 3

If Dawn continues to drink it will be a bad path she's wandering. Dawn had no idea what Buffy had been facing since their mother died. That's what I've thought. So Dawn is assuming the worst. Without telling it will always stand between the two sister.
I guess Dawn was running to Spike, huh?
Looking forward to more!

Reviewer: Blue Eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/11/2010 - 05:15 am Title: Chapter 2

I don't blame Buffy for being a bitch after having so much to deal with all that responsibility and a bratty selfish sister to boot.

Reviewer: SpikesGirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2010 - 01:31 pm Title: Chapter 2

Glad to see someone finally wrote about Dawn with her real self coming out. Hee Hee. Like the loathing start with Spike and Buffy. I am sure they will be getting spuffier soon. Can't wait. Thanks for posting!!

Reviewer: SpikesGirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2010 - 01:03 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is getting off to a great start. Great idea giving Buffy the room with a view... Can't wait to read the next chapter. Hopefully many more to be posted soon.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2010 - 06:02 am Title: Chapter 2

Love that Spike is there for Dawn. Spike being around usually ends up being a good thing for both of them. Can't wait to see how it sneaks up on Buffy. Update soon.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2010 - 11:40 pm Title: Chapter 2

Dawn is so angry when it comes to Buffy. It's hard for Buffy too, not only Dawn. Sounds as if BUffy didn't tell Dawn the truth about their situation but I may be wrong. No clue why Dawn is so angry. The meeting with Dawn and the car drive was fun though. :)

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2010 - 05:06 pm Title: Chapter 2

First she hits him.. screams at him.. and almost "kills" his car and Dawn.. great neighbors.. LOL

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