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Reviewer: cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/10/2010 - 06:46 pm Title: The Big Bad Strikes
Date: 08/10/2010 - 06:46 pm Title: The Big Bad Strikes
Reversed roles? Sounds interesting, hope you'll continue.
I can't help with concrit, I'm just commenting to your story itself. But if that's your fist story I can recommend you to find you a *good* beta. If you find a good one that doesn't only spell check she'll help you to write better, to grow with your writing.
Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: aww thanks i don't have a beta so that would be nice
Reviewer: rkm Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/10/2010 - 08:21 am Title: The Big Bad Strikes
Date: 08/10/2010 - 08:21 am Title: The Big Bad Strikes
i'm always a sucker for reversal stories. it's an interesting set up so far. my interest is piqued ...
Author's Response: i am too...thats why i wrote it :)